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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#671

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan
Very very cute and sweet scene Lucky 😛 so finally dakshu ne apne haath se roti beli... And that too koi country ka map..😆. Superb 👏 😆 u are only the one to get these cute smiles on our faces 😊 Hatts off to u dear 👏 👏 thank u thank u thank u so much 🤗 🤗 🤗

Thanks yaar...🤗

Dakshu ko haatho se bana roti tho anmol hota hain.😛.kyu?

Thanks for lovely response

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Neethu

@ntsindia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#672

Continuing my FF...

Daksh convinces Naina

its a bright evening... Dakshna are in car.. Daksh looks at Naina .. Naina chup chap baidthi hai.. daksh drives the car with a smile that naina became jealouse to priya when she held his hand.. Daksh drives in a lake park. He stops the car near a tea shop..

D: Naina.. coffee peeyoge?

N: muje nahi chahiye.. [ltle angry] [hamara Daksh smart haina.. usko naina ko manana itna mushkil kaam nahi hai.. he gets out of the car and comes back with to cups of coffee]

D: Naina ek baar taste karke batavo... yeh hai sankar chacha's coffee house... yeha ka chaay aur coffee dono bohot famous hai..

Naina does not look at him... Daksh thinks madam kuch zyada hi gusse mein hai..

He comes in the drive seat and gets into the car. puts the coffee cups on the dash board.

D: acha ab tum muje batavo... tum kis baat mein zyada gussa ho.. mein late aaya isliye yah.. priya mera hath pakdliya issliye?

Naina gets shocked in hearing his second question.. got she is caught. But no... our naina itna easily admit nahi karegi na .. usko jealouse ho gaya..

N: kya..? kya kaha.. ? agar voh ladki tumhare haath pakdne me muje kya? agar tumhe aisa lag rahe hai to voh tumhara galath faimi hai Mr KP.. sirf misunderstanding. samjah...?

now Daksh got the confirmation that yah she was surely jealouse.. but he tells

D: accha.. ?? to meri biwi ka gussa ka karan mein late aya isliye... voh kya hai na.. mere voh client bilkul upset tha.. use kisi terah se console karne ka chakkar mei tha... phone silent mein ho to muje tumhara phone bhi uda nahi paya.. sorry.. dekho na... kaan pakdkar sorry.. pls maan lo.. Naina looks at Daksh a little bit better..

D: accha teek hai... agar tum iss coffee peete to mein samach loonga tum muje maph kiya..

Naina does not look at him.. after some times, voh slowly takes the cofee cup.. Daksh feels better.. but naina is not having the coffee.. But Daksh pretends he does not notice it...

D: Oh thanku Naina..

D: Naina, hum priya ko bhi sath mein le sakte the na? ithi dino ke baad voh khar ayi.. acchi tarah se baat bhi nahi kar paya..

N full voltage of KP puts the coffe cup: to der kyu? khar vaaps jaakar tum use leekar khumane ke liye aavo..

D [smiles within himself]: ofo naina.. ithna gussa mat karo. meine maphi maang liya haina.. pls.. age se mein kabhi late nahi avoonga..

Naina looks at Daksh she is in high temper. he is about to hold her shoulder, Naina takes his hand off. gets out from the car. Daksh also gets out from the car and goes behind Naina.

D: itna gussa..? baat kya hai naina? kahi bat aisa to nahi hai na... tumhe priya ko pasand nahi ayi??

N: priya priya priya... muje uske saath kya lena dena hai...? tum bar bar yeh kyu poochte ho?

D holds Naina's shoulder and asks... : to tumhara problem kya hai?

N: Problem? muje kya problem...? problem tumhe hai na.. voh ladki khar ayi to mein dekh rahi hoo tumhara change.. oho... uska haath pakadtha hai... hug karte hai.. haste hai.. phir bhi mujse pochta hai problem kya hai.. [bachon ki tara rootthi hai.. Daksh hears with a smile inside.. she turns behind and start to walk]

D holds her hand and stops her.. naina not turning towards him: usse itna jalan hone ka kya bat hai? voh hamari Akruthi ki bahein hai.. na...

[hearing this Naina bites her toungue... voh to sahi hai.. shamefully thinks. oh... mein yeh pehle kyu nahi socha? ]

Daksh continues: bachpan mein jab vo vacation mein rahne ke liye ayi thi...tab hum sath mei khelthe the.. Naina turns towards Daksh with a shameful face... and comes forward to him.. and puts her finger on Daksh's lips..

Daksh looks at Naina... Naina with a childish regret: I... i am sorry Daksh.. pata nahi mein kyu aisa nahi socha ki voh tumhari bhi bahain hai.. [comes forward and starts to play with Daksh's shirts button ] tum kis aur ladki se itna comfortably baat karna nahi dekha na... shaayad islye hoga... jab.. jab tum usse itna confortably baat karna dekhi to... muje.. muje kuch uncomfortable feel lag rahi thi.. [Daksh feels very good now..] pls muje maph kar do... [she hugs him]

Daksh: muje itna pyar karthi ho kya? [naina shakes head] sach mein aaj bohot khush hoo.. [Daksh hugs her back...]

N: tum sirf mera ho.. muje yeh bilkul acha nahi lagta, ki tum kisi aur se kareeb...

D smiles..: kya baat karti ho naina... mein sirf tumhara hai na..

N: I love you...

to be conitued...

Edited by ntsindia - 13 years ago

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#673

Hey neetu😛

Super cute and damn sweet scene👏.👏.loved it..yaar.🤗...and loved the way dakshu made her admit jealousy...GR8 job as usual👍🏼

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Neethu

@ntsindia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#674

thanks lucky... we always see Daksh as jealouse hai na?? so i thought why naina cannot be jealouse...??? he also deserves it right??😉

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Neethu

@ntsindia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#675

Continued...

Dakshna in Lake Park

The time is getting dark.. they are in embrace. after sometimes they wake up reallising that they are in public place. they come out from each other's arm and look around.. luckily nobody was near them... yha.. it is quite calm atmosphre with a cool breez. they look each other. Daksh sees glimpse of sadness in Naina's face.

D: Kya huva? udas kyu ho?

N: Daksh, tumhe bure laga hoga na?

D with a naughty face: umm.. thoooda sa.. but bohot zyada khush hai..

N: Shut up Daksh.. masaq band karo..

D: Mazaq nahi Naina.. sach hai.. yeh dekhkar tum mere bare mein itna possessive ho..

N: phir bhi...

D his usual mischief: umm haa... hota hai kabhi kabhi... [smiles.. ] i undertand.. muje bhi kabhi kabhi hota hai na..?

N: Daksh...?

d: ha naina.. tum believe nahi karogi.. kabhi kabhi muje ayi se bhi jalan ho raha hai.. ki tum use mujse zyada pyar karte ho..

Both laughs..

Naina: Daksh.. tum bhi na..

D: Ok.. so let walk for sometimes..

N: Ha.. chale.. [they crosses their hands together and walk through beautiful lake shore... the cool breez embraces then and they walk with a cool lovely smile... in a corner of the park wheer ther is no such crowd... the sit on a bench facing towards the lake. Naina slowly places her head on Daksh's shoulder.. daksh pats her hair.. ]

D: Naina.. kya soch rahi ho...

N: bas yooo hi... yeh lake kitna saanth hai na... [the lights of the park are lit.. ]

D: um.. yeh hai prakrithi ka jaadooo...

N: Daksh..?

D: umm..?

N: Kal raat tum bohot pareshaan ho gaya tha na...meri vajah sa...

D: Koyi baat nahi.. lekin.. mein kuch zyada hi over react kar raha tha.. tumhe boho bura laga hai na?

N: Nahi.. tum muje itna pyar kyu karte ho Daksh?

D with husky voice: Pata nahi.. sirf itna janta hai.. i love you so much...

Naina lifts her head and looks at Dkash.. Daksh also looks at Naina... romantic cute eyelock... Naina's hair flies and drops on her face.. Daksh softly moves it... comes closer to her.. gives a kiss on her forehead.. Naina closes the eyes.. hugs him lovingly..

http://www.flickr.com/photos/aous-pics/3793735647/

to be continued..

Edited by ntsindia - 13 years ago

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#676

neetu di...wow👏👏👏👏...super cute scenes all...loved d jealous naina😛...nd d walk in d park...sooo soo cute nd sweet😍...loved it🤗🤗

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DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#677

So so cute scene Neetu 😉 loved it 👏 We know that Daksh loves only and only Naina but there were so many girls crazy for Daksh and he didn't give a damn about anyone but naina getting jealous was really very sweet... And he makin her accept that was really too good... These sort of light moments are the. Ones we really missing in SSBN yaar... Oh that was gr8 u included him saying that he is jealous of naina's love for Aai too much sometimes... 😆
Thank u Neetu 🤗 for such a beautiful and cute scene... 🤗

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#678

wow..neetu👏

Kya scene hain!.👏..awesome..and super duper cute...

Its just not dakshu but we all are feeing same way..more imp to ayi..

And the last part..😍😍..loved it

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#679

😆Contd...

Ek pe Ek( dakshna deal)😉

Naina arranges everything on table with help from our pyare dakshu.😛..

dakshu setteled on dining table...and says

Daksh; naina.. jaldi se khilavo..bhaut bhook lagi hain..

Naina gives a cute smile..aur plate main roti sabji daalkar dakshu ko khilanewali hain

Daksh; arey.. mera country map kaha hain??😆

Naina; woh roti? woh tumhare liye nahi..mere liye hain.mera kp ne itne pyar se banaya..main usse kisi ki saath share nahi karnewali..tumhare saath bhi nahi..samjhe( with lil attiude)..and says..chalo ab mooh kholo.😛..

Daksh gives broad smile😃( kyu nahi uski roti ko itne tareef jo mil rhae hain)..and opens his mouth..naina pyar se khilarahi hain...😍

Daksh;. meri jaan..tumhare liye tho main har roz ek naye country ka map bansakta hoon.😛..and says tum bhi khavo..( takes a piece and naina ko khilaya)..😍.

Dono ek doosre ko khila rahe hain...

Naina is about to put one more piece in daksh's mouth..daksh stops her

Naina; kya hua?..abhi teek se khaya nahi tumne?😲

Daksh; bas bas..bahut hogaya. ab aur nahi...pls naina

Naina; no way..tumhe ye khatam karna hi padega..aaj kal teel se khana nahi khaa rahe ho tum..daksh ab itna bhi zid mat karo...😆

Daksh nodding his head no no..naina usko khilane koshis kar rahi hain..

Naina; thinks for few min) teek hain..ek deal karte hain..

Daksh ( qustion mark face)...deal.?? tum deal ki baat kar rahi ho😲..wow..batavo..batavo😛

Naina;hmm. deal hain ek pe ek...lekin uske liye tumhe ye piece khana padega.😛

Daksh; woh kya hain? ek pe ek?.😲...ok..ok..khilavo

Daksh ne khaliya..naina asks him to close his eyes.😍. daksh follows her order

Naina gives him a kiss on cheek.😳..( a long one).😳..and asks him to open his eyes

Daksh as usual..at verge of getting lost..comes back..naina is about to get up..😆

Daksh ; bas ek?

Naina ; haan tumne abhi abhi ek piece khaya..us ke liye ek kiss😆...aur chahiye tho.(points at plate)..khaana padega..har ek piece pe ek kiss..kaho deal ya no deal.??😆

Daksh oh..naina.tum bhi na..agar tum aisa deal rakhoge .tho. (thinks for a while)...deal deal... ab jaldi se khialvo..( opens his mouth.closing his eyes)😛

Naina smiles ki her plan has wrked👍🏼...and completes the dinner along with deal...

Dakshu ko tho lotterry lag gayi..fultoo khush.hain dil dance maar raha hain.kyu nahi...khaana khilake uss pe kiss dene waali biwi...wah wah..

While cleaning up kitchen..

Daksh; waise naina ,ye deal sirf mere liye..naaa.😕..hum dono ke liye ho tho.. ..(comes closer to her)😳; ab meri baari..(pulls her closer;, eye lock😍..) ek ek nahi..saare ek hi baar de dunga.😳.kyu?kaho deal ya no deal.??( low romatic naughty voice)

Naina lil shy; looks at him and says; Mr.DP..agar aap aise deal denge tho...hum mana kaise karsakte hain.puts hands around him..and says; deal..lekin..😳

Daksh; abhi nahi..yahi kahoge na.ok.😛.interest ke saath milakar doonga tho chalega...( kiss on cheek)😳

.Naina; haan bilkul chalega.( cute smile on fce of dakshna)😛..naina says..ab kaam karne do..daksh nods his head

and both get back to work...

Contd...

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#680

Originally posted by: lucky.m
Daksh;. meri jaan..tumhare liye tho main har roz ek naye country ka map bansakta hoon.😛.😍.

dakshu kitnaaa sweet hai...roz ek naye country ka map😆 sweetu *pulls cheeks*

lucky thnku🤗🤗🤗🤗...aaj ka cutie FF jaldi dalne ke liye ek chintu wala (chintu utna cute bhi nai hai bt itni jaldi wahi mila) hug bhi...thnku thnku thnku🤗🤗🤗🤗

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