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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is my one shot for rimar. My inspiration for this os was priyanka saraswat, who wrote the swaro0n os-"without you". This isn't as gr8 as her os, but still I gave it a try...

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"October", some of her best and worst memories were associated with this month. It was her big day and her parents expected her to be happy, but she wasn't .everything happened so fast and amidst of all of this, everyone forgot what day it was. She didn't, she could never forget the day...

Sitting on the big teak wood desk she was probably writing him the last letter.

It's been two years since you went away

I still remember that very day...

I remember that moment, that time and place

I remember trying to picture your sweet gentle face.

My whole body sank to the ground

And my whole world was dead around.

I couldn't believe how fast this all came

I couldn't deal with all of the pain.

We were so young and carefree

We lived our lives with joy and glee

This didn't come into our heads

It wasn't what was being talked about or said.

Now i am here, sad and lonely

You were my first love, my one and only.

Whenever i was down and blue

I would turn to you.

I wished this hadn't happened from the start

Now the only way i can keep you is here in my heart.

I can only wait until it is my day to see you again.

As for now...take care my love

I LOVE YOU!!!

Sharon was waiting for her to finish. As she finished writing, she sealed the letter and put it in her diary. Sharon went up to her and hugged her. Sharon knew she needed her.

While keeping the letter in her diary, she saw his photo. He had a huge smile on his face as if he was smiling at her. She closed the diary and put it in her drawer. She could see all her friends standing behind her...she knew that even if she had lost "him", her friend would be there by her side...ALWAYS!

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Parvathi12 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww...that was so nice...sad...but nice...love the way u write man...i could totally feel rinni's pain...nice 1
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Posted: 14 years ago
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That was really great, interesting, and sad. I really liked it! :DD
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Posted: 14 years ago
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luvd it !!!!
kep it up
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aw really very nice OS i like it so much :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome. you created an awesome mystery. I really loved it. write an OS if u cn
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww.. Dats sooo sweet!!!! Luvd it!!!!! Awesum!!!


-Ishita

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