MAYUR SS Heavenly Punishment ❤️

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Posted: 14 years ago
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MAYUR SS - Heavenly Punishment 😳 <3

( guys i wrote this for simply time pass plz criticize if u don't like it because I m nt at all gud in writing romantic stuff dis my first try )plsss comment

Mayank's pov

Hi I m Mayank sharma , the luckiest person to be married to Nupur bhushan oppps sorry she gets angry when she is called bhushan she likes to be called Nupur bhushan sharma becozz its related to me J I love her for that . Today is my wedding night I m waiting to go inside my room but these my friends arghhh are sooo irritating Samrat n Benji.

Samrat - kaha kho gaye mere bhai bhabhi ke khayaloan main ho kya .

At this I couldn't help but blush its so stupid of samrat to ask me that wat am I thinking of.

Mayank ' samrat plz yaar jaane de dekh tera time aayega toh bhi tuje help karonga plzzz aur agar tu nahi help karega toh dekhne main tuje puriii raath tuje teri chashmish ke paasss jaane ne nahi doonga sochle jaldi aur benji tuje bhi apne candy ke liye shayad tum log bhool rahe ho woh meri saaliyan pehle hai aur tumhari girlfriends baad mein at this mayank smiled wickedly

Samrat got frightened becozz agla uska number hai aur mayank ye baat bhoolega nahi bilkul nahi

And smiled weakly .

Samrat ' ahhh mayank yaar tu mera best friend tere liye kuch bhi yaar

Mayank ' acha hmm toh main jao kya

Benji ' haan jao jaldi bhabhi intezaar kar rahi hogi

Mayank ' good bye n good nite

Samrat ' nahi have a romantic nite from us

Mayank ' shut up guys grow up he almost ran to his room but was stopped by his cousins at the door for shagun n he gave it immediately

Suhani ' as his cousin

Suhani ' bhai aapko pata hai aap sabse pehle dulhe honge jis ne bargain nahi kiya hmm maana padega bhabhi bahut lucky hai

Mayank ' haan I know dat now can I go in plzzz

Suhani ' haan why not but muje pehle check karke aati hoon ki bhabhi ready hui ki nahi

Mayank ' its ok main suhani interrupted

Suhani ' plzz bhaiya 1 min

Mayank ' jaldiii

Nupur's pov

Shit he is outside the room he is so exciteddd and here I m blushing at his behavior I hope I m looking good ohhh God plzz help me I m sooo nervous I heard dat suhani is cumin inside first I sighed in relief dat I can ask her whether I look gud or not. At the moment she entered '''. She shouted bhabhi u look sooo beautiful bhaiya toh aaj gaye kaam se I blushed at this .

Suhani ' main bhaiya ko abhi bhej rahi hoon all the best said dis and winked

Nupur hit her and blushed

Mayank's pov

Ohhh gosh I gonna go crazy I so want to see her

Suhani came outside finally

She said ' bhaiya wo aapka intezaar kar rahi hai aur ek baat kahunn aap bhi lucky hoo suhani said teasingly all of the girls went and I finally entered the room my heart beats were raising.

No povs

Mayank entered the room he could only see her whitish back which was totally bare becozz of her haltered blouse making him go speechless . She was wearing a simple and beautiful red saree

Which was showing off her tiny waist and back .

Finally after gaining some courage she turned

And looked in his eyes where mayank was lost seeing her she blushed seeing this. Her blush brought him back to earth she was looking gorgeous with her red cheeks . finally mayank thought of starting a conversation he went a bit closer to her. Mayank came and stood extremely closer to her making nupur's heart beat audible.

Mayank smiled at her nervousness and said

Mayank ' hi beautiful at this nupur lowered eyes

Mayank moved his hands to her waist and clutched it which made her land on his chest making her speechless but then she immediately gained composure in his arms and looked back in his eyes but a bit shy

Mayank ' kya baat nupur tum kuch bol kyu nahi rahi hoo tumhari tabiyat toh thikkk kyunki jis nupur bhushan ko main jaanta hoon uska kuch bole bina khaana puchta hi nahi he said chuckling and hiding his face in her neck taking her fragrance in he was loving it.

Nupur thought of replying at last

Nupur ' nupur bhushan nahi sharma ( at this mayank smiled ) aur nahi bol rahi kyunki she said this a bit slowly.

Mayank came abit more close if possible and started caressing her bare back giving her goosebumps and said

Mayank ' kyunki..and started kissing her on her neck slowly and lovingly and moving his hands on her back

Nupur ' she was totally lost in his caressing and kissing but still said kyunki

Mayank ' his kisses became more passionate and started licking her neck slowly while kissing he again said kyunki ''

Nupur ' mayank's closeness was intoxicating her she was loving it just then she felt a love bite on neck she came back from her dream land and couldn't help but blush deeply and pushed mayank slowly and said kyunki main bhool gayi saduuu at this mayank gained composure .

Mayank ' tumhe toh main nahi chodunga mrs sharma

Nupur ' pehle pakdo toh sahi mr sadu sharma and started running around the room finally mayank caught her hand and twisted it

Nupur ' ahhh mayank chodo

Mayank ' nahi pehle bolo sorry said while still holding her hand

Nupur ' sorry mayank

Mayank ' aur bolo ki main sabse handsome hoon

Nupur ' tum sabse handsome ho

Mayank ' shahrukh se bhi zyada

Nupur ' han sabse zyada

Mayank ' aur tum muje sab dogi jo main maanguga

Nupur ' haan sab dungi promise baba and then he left her hand only to catch it again and pulled her towards himself and caught her from her waist again and said

Mayank ' acha toh do muje

Nupur ' kyaa ???

Mayank ' Kiss pointing towards his lips agar tumne nahi di main wahi karoonga jo main pehle kar raha tha soch loo

Nupur couldn't help but blush and lowered her eyes and thought to give in becozz she was already his and then again looked in his eyes which were full of passion for her and then stood on her toes and very slowly and lovingly gave a peck on his lips and was gonna move back just then again pulled her and he also gave her a kiss on the lips to which nupur also gave equal response and they were kissing passionately with their eyes closed feeling the love for each other. They were totally lost in the moment. Mayank was caressing her neck lovingly feeling her soft skin in this process nupur's pallu fell down from her shoulder. But she didn't realize this becozz she was totally lost in the kiss to realize anything in the world and mayank's hands went below her neck and then realization struck but she didn't react because she didn't want to break moment between them. Soon they broke the kiss and mayank said I Love You nupur and she replied I Love You Too

Mayank ' nupur can I make you mine fully

To which nupur blushed and nodded her head and tightly hugged mayank and mayank instantly hugged back and then picked her up in his arms led her to the bed and softly placed her on the bed without breaking eye contact and mayank cupped her face in his hands and started caressing her cheeks and said

Nupur pata hai main kabse iss raat ka intezaar kar raha tha ki iss din dunia ki sabse sundar ladki hamesha ke liye meri ho jayegi said this looking in eyes and continued I love you a lot plzz muje kabhi chodke mat jaana

Nupur ' I love you too aur koi apni zindagi ko chodke jaa sakta kya said dramaticly at this mayank chuckled and said

Mayank ' hayye meri drama queen

Nupur ' hayye mere S2

Mayank ' S2 ??????

Nupur ' matlab my Sweet Sadu said chuckling in his arms .

Mayank got annoyed at this and then smiled mischeviously and leaned on her fully making her speechless and started caressing her body and started kissing her cheeks , nose , forehead and before kissing her ear said iska toh tumhe punishment milega chuckling said this and bit ear to which nupur also chuckled and said I love this punishment before claiming his lips. Then after the kiss mayank couldn't control himself he start kissing her neck and her chest and soon freed her and himself from their clothes and they made love for the first time .

At 7am in the morning ,

Mayank asked nupur sooo how was ur punishment hmmm ??? while kissing her fingers

They were lying on the bed covered with a white satin bedsheet .

Nupur ' umm let me think at which mayank got annoyed seeing this she twitched his nose causing him to frown and nupur know how to remove his frown leaned in and kissed him on the lips passionately and then moved back

Nupur ' the punishment was heavenly she said softly

Mayank ' how about I repeat it now said mischievously coming close to her

Nupur ' I would love to but sorry and pushed him and wrapped the bedsheet around ran to the bathroom and mayank smiled at this tactic of her but then she called him she opened then door slightly at threw the bedsheet at his face and then chuckled and kept on frowning but passed him a flying kiss which caught it and placed it on the lips and smiled '' <3

I m converting this os into a short story :D

i promise to make it very cute and romantic :)

INDEX -

Part 1 - page 1 ' new beginning ' 😳

part 2 - coming soon :) ' first morning with the Sharmas ' 😛

Edited by cuteritz - 13 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey really romantic update i just loved it really mayur r so romantic in ur os plzzz do write more os and pm me and also send me frnd req so that i can add u in my buddy list
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romantic os❤️
loved it...
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WOW it was Wonderful OS
Veryyy passionate and romantic
beautifully written dear
plz do write more


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Posted: 14 years ago
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vryyy romantic😳😊😳
omg it was the epitome of romance
nic update
do wri8 more
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may god bless u
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its really very very romantic...

lovely...
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damn ROMANTIC!!! 😳
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Thank you soo much for ur lovely comments !!!! 😳
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That was romantic n verry passionetly OS verry well written do write more plzzz
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Heavenly romantic OS. ❤️
Do write more. :)

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