IRREVERSIBLE DESTINY(MG)PART 21 UPDATED - Page 24

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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb so maan kidnapped her
luvd it
@wana ask u why u put spce n btwen ech letter tht makes readng a litle awkward i mean aftr word space s there
bt n update its like ths b r e a k f a s t
bt anyways realy luvd d update
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Posted: 13 years ago
naintara's role is far better than geet serial..loved it...and geet is kidnappped???

waiting for next part...
punam
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Can't wait now Maan kidnapped Geet.😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
IRREVERSIBLE DESTINY
CHAPTER-11

PAST…

As Geet came out of her office….she called up Naintara and Dev once again just to tell them that she was leaving and to and that she will be fine…she also told them not to call her as she will call them whenever necessary….as their phones may be tabbed..

She was oblivious to the intense pair of eyes looking at her and following her every moves and words…

"She is making it even easier…as no one will suspect her disappearence for a week…"Maan said to himself….he had to plan her kidnap as she was suspected of having more than necessary info about them….

Then the next moves followed when he dressed himself as a cab driver and kidnapped her….

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PRESENT-

Maan kept driving through the highway with an unconscious Geet beside him…..he at times looked at her face…and thought to himself…

"Such a simple,serene beauty in her sleep ….who could even in wildest dream imagine the wild cat she turns when she sees me!"

He was having a great moment noticing her beautiful face….the car jerked and her already injured head…(which he injured!) was hit against the window…and then she jerked back to his shoulders….

"Was her proximity doing anything less …that now she decided to land up on my shoulders?!!"he said to himself flustered…

He continued driving…..it was a long drive from Mumbai to Gujarat…..yes he chose that place…as no one would discover him there…..and CBI well he always regarded them as a bunch of FOOLS!!

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They reached their destination….Geet was unconscious……Maan was also a little exhausted due to the long drive……he stopped the car….and looked beside to check on her……….

There lay an unconscious Geet with her brown locks and tendrils covering her face…making it all more attractive and irresistible……as he raised his hand to push her locks aside…he suddenly got aware of his doings and withdrew himself….he stepped out from his car…and went on her side…and carried her….to the king size bungalow….

He carried her in his ever so strong arms….upstairs…at the second floor and made her lie there in a dark room with orange dim lights……he placed her on the bed…for a moment he paused and stared at her face….which was radiating more beauty…due to the moon light coming from the window….

"You are beautiful" he said looking at her closed eyes and with that placed a gentle kiss on her cheek…and walked away…..smiling to himself and content………….

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Geet and Naintara's house

Naintara and Dev made their way home about 9pm…..well it was a usual duty for Dev to drop his lady love to her home safely…….

Naintara:You just sit here…I will make some coffee…its pretty cold today…

And saying so she headed towards the kitchen…….

Dev looked around the drawing room….at their childhood snaps…Geet,Nt and his….yes they were indeed close…and he loved them…he always loved Naintara…but never tried to force her in a relation as he was aware of her hesitation….being the only member to take care of Geet…Naintara never allowed herself to be swayed at any such emotions…be it attraction or infactuation…though she very well knew that what Dev feels for her…but she always decided to pretend unware of it….

"Coffee is ready Dev.."he looked back to find Naintara carrying the tray and placing it on the center table….

"Dev…are you okay?" she asked finding him quiet…..

"Yeah…I am absolutely fine.."Dev answered her..

"Come…have your coffee.."she told him

As she poured the coffee from the pot it accidentally fell on her hand…

"Ah…its too hot.."she winced…

Dev at once took her hand and kissed it ever so gently as if to soothe her pain away…she at once removed her hand from his….and told…

"I am not a kid Dev…it will be okay…no need to worry so much…"

Dev stopped and looked at her…she tried to maintain her calm and strict face….when he told..

"I always worry and care about you….its just…you don't ..rather don't want to understand.." and saying so he stood up to leave…

Naintara looked at his retreating figure and did not utter a word…Dev stopped at the door and said..

"Its never to late Naintara…I will always wait for you.." and he left…..

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It was almost 9pm…when Geet slowly opened her eyes….she slowly sat up and tried to adjust her drooping eyes due to a long sleep…and tiredness…as she woke up fully she found herself in a not so familiar surrounding….she slowly looked around the room…

As she tried to stand up she felt back feeling dizzy…she hold her head…in pain..and she could only remember Maan's face when he pressed a cloth in her nose and then everything went blurr….

"I have been kidnapped.." she said to herself shocked as realization dawned upon her……

PRECAP:You can't leave…😉

thank you for your precious comments😃..keep commenting...and press the like button..😳.because next time i will only update when it crosses atleast 9 pages...😉

cause i am planning to update this thursday again...cause i have some time then...😉😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
me first
dekha fir se bina pm ke
muje bi kidnap hona hai aur maan ke saath same house me rehna hai aur☺️
but i know i m not geet 😭 aur maan muje kyun kidnap karega🥺
lovely update
Edited by muraadlovesdd - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

i knew it

humare maan ke alawa aur kaun ye kaam karega...😉

awsome update

yaar humare dev-NT ki nayya bhi paar lagao

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Posted: 13 years ago
luvd dev-nt relationship with so much understanding...
waiting for more maneet moments..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting for update.😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update dear
loved it

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