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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
nice waiting for next geet maan separated😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new thread
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats 4 ur new thread..really luvd it...plz continue soon daadi ka plzn bahut acha hai/...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats for the new thread
the update was nice
i hope this plan works
waiting for some emotional n sweet moments between the father n daughter
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice plan by dadi...eagerly waiting for next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on the new thread..
dadi is cool... curious to c how the plan works..
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Congrats on the new thread
Dadi is very clever
She wil l bring maan and mannat close finally
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hatz off to dadi and her plans!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow kya planning hai

congo for the new thread
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 20


Next Morning

Daddi was waiting Maan to come out of his room so to start.In sitting area she could observe him coming out of room

Ya Maan was out …he had to stay here so not in formals.

Daddi: Preeto ( maid) dekho Mannat uthin k nahi …

Preeto: Daddi Maa Mannat baby to so rahhi hai..I went to her room…per wo uthi nahi ( made pitty fac)

Maan came downstairs..n he overheard

Dadd Maa: per hum aab kya karre…I hav lil pain in my back..acha hota Nandini ya Geet ek janna hota yahan ( she was jst saying to put in Maan's ears.

Maan: Daddi Maan don't worry main usko utha detha hu …

Daddi Maa: sure betay ..aap utha pye gay Mannat ko …its really tough job

Maan: don't worry Dadd Maa I manage (he said ok)

Dadd Maa's : Per Maan she is lil child…pyar se uthaea…jabrdasti mat kejiye..

Maan: Ji

n Maan moved toward Mannat's room..where she was sleeping on stomach.

Maan looked at her..an a his inner happiness was visible at his face.

He sat on her bed..n put his hand on her back head

Maan: Mannat get up ( he wishpered near her ear)

But no response..he repeated twice..thrice…but Mannat…jst rubbed her legs on bed sheet.

So Maan put his hands around her arms n turned her ..She started to cry aloud..

Maan was too puzzed how to handle.Coz he had experience to handle Arya ..but he was too small ..n when Geet fed him he stopped crying

Now what about her.Maan looked at her….irrtation came on his face..but Daddi's words made him calm.

Maan: Mannat its morning get up… b a good girl.

But Mannat rubbed her eyes n she again start to doze in same positin..so Maan had to adopt ..other way

Maan: If u get up now….I ll take u out for ice cream..N new toys also..other wise..sotti rahho fir main nahi le kar jayuga…( he adopted trick )

This worked.She got up..She folded her legs but both albows on keens n interlocked both hands under chin…after thinking for some time

Mannt: Aap Mannat ko ice cream k liye bahar le kar jayegay…n for toys also.( she questioned)

Maan: ya

Mannat: But I hav toys ….so many look..kaise toys hum legay..humko nahi patta ..Manna k pass to har typ k toys hai

Maan: ok I ll take to u toy shop..jis tarah k jitney tumhara dil karre u can take.

Maanat: really ..n ice cream kon se place se lengay…hmko chocolate ice cream.. tutti fruity ice cream donno khygay…

Maan: okey koi aur hai to woh bhi count karlo ( he taunted)

N he took her up …from bed n called preeto…to take her for shower.



lo this part is out...check it ...comment n hit lik plzzz

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago

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