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Posted: 13 years ago
beautifully written payal😳...the past is being beautifully envisaged where as the present is equally heartbreaking...!! this time i m seriously anxious to know the real hidden reason behind their distance...is it only related to sending varun in boarding or some other sorts of misunderstanding also hv overpowered them due to circumstances...cant wait 4 the next chapter payal...continue soon dear🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks all for such sweet replies🤗

and am glad all are liking the old MN parts and I know the present seems gloomy this story will have no point without it...I know no one likes to read such sad stuff but please bear with me some more...

i think this is a long enough update😆

i have 2 Enemies😉 special dialogue in this 😳 pardon me if I was not supposed to...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 9 :

Nupur came rushing to the terrace all worried, looking for eyes following her. Dreading to reach the terrace in her own house was not a usual practice with her, after all.

Somehow after reaching the terrace she slowly opened the door to the open space on the 3rd floor and looked around for any signs of him while she checked her watch for she had too little a time.

She was taken aback when a known pair of arms enclosed her from behind and pat she shouted, "Mayank!"

Mayank casually came to stand in front of her and said, "Don't over react Nupur, you knew it was gonna be me!"

Nupur frowned and said, "What is it Mayank? Why exactly are we meeting here? You know my whole house is full of relatives and I have not much time so quickly out with it!" She contnually kept a check on her watch.

Mayank nodded hastily and pulled her towards him and said, "Yeah, we should hurry"

Nupur looked at him strictly and said, "THIS is what you wanna do?"

Mayank chuckled and replied back, "What? Isn't THIS important?"

Nupur smiled and replied, "And so its time to say Good-Bye then coz I don't want any of my Chachi-s or bua-s to catch me red-handed 2 days before my marriage, you know its not a very good thing"

Mayank smirked and said, "Madame, this is not a random guy you are meeting here. Its your very own Lover…Fiance'…ahh Husband!"

Nupur smirked back and said, "Not yet!"

Mayank smiled and replied, "Oh yeah! So how bout we celebrate this very thing. You know stealing moments with you"

Nupur looked back startled, "Mayank Sharma and stealing? Am afraid I have left some bad impressions on you"

Mayank said assuringly, "Mayank Sharma was never this crazy, all blames to you certainly"

Nupur blushed unsure what to say next and replied, "So tell me the real reason now!"

Mayank smiled and said, "Okay, I wanted to have a dance with you"

Nupur was perplexed beyond limits, "NOW!!??? When we get married 2 days later, we can dance all our lives if you wish but why are you endangering your sane impression on my family for that?"

Mayank laughed and said, "Because this is not fair! Its OUR Sangeet and I am at my place and you at yours, dancing with God-knows-who but each other"

Nupur giggled at his remark and asked, "But we can't play any music here, its risky. Someone might show up sooner"

Mayank nodded his head and inspite of it gave his hand to her while asking for hers.

Nupur gave her hand to him confused and he pulled her into a dancing position and sang almost whispering to her, "Tumse milke aisa laga tumse milke….armaan hue purey dil ke, ae meri jane jahaan"

Nupur was taken off guard with this guesture of his. This is what Mayank was all about, surprising her every moment and makiing her love him more than before. He was being more romantic by day, if that was possible. She couldn't help blushing when he transfixed his gaze to hers.

Nupur sang along in the same pitch as his, "Teri meri, meri teri, ek jaan hai….saath tere rahenge sadaa, tumse na honge juda" as they both swayed slowly to the song.

"Mere sanam, teri kasam" Both smiled. This beautiful song meant lot more than just adding up to their melody or acting as a catalyst to their dance.

"Chodenge ab naa yeh haath" Mayank took Nupur's hand upto his face and gently placed a kiss on it and pressed it lovingly.

"Yeh zindagi" Twirling her he made her back to lie against his chest.

"Guzregi ab" and after completing this sentence he lost track of the song while he couldn't help kissing his 'beautifully dressed for the occasion would-be-wife'

"Humdum tumhare hi saath" Nupur still tried to sing while she felt him changing his tune entirely now.

"Apna jahaan mil gaya, Tumse na honge juda" and she couldn't anymore keep up with it, so turning around, and gently pecking his cheeks, she left smiling and showing him her watch from the door of the terrace.

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Sharmas reached their apartment in Gujrat. A 3 bedroom flat with furnishing which was a little un-coordinated and seemed as if it had been done without much ardent views for a home.

After keeping their bags at one corner, when Mayank noticed Nupur noticing the pictures of the 3 of them endorsing a specific wall, he felt unprepared as if he had't had time to take out her recent individual pics off the series of them that were not there earlier when she had last visited.

He announced he was gonna get fresh and leave for his meeting while they relaxed after the journey and left in a hurry to not get late.

Nupur had a nostalgic mushy feeling in her heart when she saw those pictures hung on the wall. Was there hope still?

Had she had been taking his reactions too strongly? Perhaps not, since that is what he seemed to want to convey to her.

Leaving that topic aside for the while, she went up to Varun and kissing his cheeks , she hugged him and said, "Varun! I missed you Beta! I wouldn't let you go anywhere now!"

Varun felt strange at Nupur's sudden statement. He had not expected to hear the last part from her.

His Mom had asked him not to be afraid of anyone and be the same Varun that he was, 6 months ago. And he was doing just that now and yet again she was changing her decision for him.

He had actually strated to like it there and had started to look at things the way Nupur had told him to and now he felt confused as to what was he supposed to do - yet again shift schools and all.

He decided he wanted to ask Mayank about it first since Mayank was the one who always took his side and specially in this matter.

He hugged Nupur back and felt his mother going emotional and trying hard to wipe out all her tears from the corner of her eyes with an affectionate smile, she cupped Varun's cheeks and said, " You want to eat something?"

He said a confused, "No"

Nupur looked at him questioningly but with a smile and with a dis-heartened heart coz Varun looked at her estranged and this was even more unbearable for her than what Mayank's enstrangement meant to her.

But she knew her decision had been right somewherebecause she didn't see the same helpless and hurt expression on his face that she had seen almost 6 months ago when he had come for his half yearly holidays. She didn't want him to feel failure.

But the distance that she felt now, reminded her of Mayank's words to her. He was not completely wrong either but to her.

She thought of a way out of all the things to make all fine before it was too late. She wanted both, her husband and her son back in her life and she wanted them back before she ceased to exist without them.

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Their marriage preparations had been extravagant, their feelings mutual and their promises seemed ever lasting.

Here they found themselves seated in the Mandap of their own marriage finally!

The scenario was glittering and glimmering. The whole dcor had white lilies as a dominant essential combined with blue orchids for contrast. The lightings above and around, matched up the flowers, subtly and decently.

Nupur was seated where she was supposed to, in place of the bride, decked in heavy jewellery and with shimmering works on her Red coloured Saree and Mayank, seated beside her with a dazzling smile to match up to Nupur's reason for a shy and contented smile. He had worn a dull Golden Shewani that co-ordinated with the work on Nupur's Saree and looked certainly better than Nupur's once perfect dream.

The rituals seemed important and their reasons appeared reasonable and with a new admission of their love in the institution of marriage, life seemed easy, adventurous and intriguing and the new partners felt themselves ideal for that life.

With the fulfillment of 7 vows, they had found their hearts officially attached now. Every Vow was crystal clear in its words – life, happiness, sadness, rights, responsibility, respect, moments, families, thoughts, dreams, development and everything belong together!

And if they, God forbid, they ever happened to miss out those - then they were in for a good lesson out of this institution of marriage where difficulty and pain were not just words and had to be dealt with together too, no matter what!

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Nupur and Varun had had a great time after long as if nothing had ever gone wrong; certainly it hadn't between the two of them, but the distance between a parent and a child living short, suggested strong bond. Well, it was true that none of their love had ever reduced but this difficult time had surely increased a longing for the family, a family that once existed flawlessly complete with all its flaws.

Nupur was finding her son to have grown a little mature in thoughts and words. She was more than happy when she compared it to how it reflected Mayank in him. She had missed his everything for 1 whole long year, and it was only showing up now. Mayank had been right in his words again.

Nupur and Varun had gone to a super market around the corner, to get hold of all the ingredients so as to make Chilly Cheese Toast Sandwich which was Varun's choice for today's special.

Varun had suggested that they would order it from a hotel but Nupur insisted on making it herself for him since he liked how she added up ginger garlic paste and extra cheese for Varun always.

Varun had ended up talking more than he was used to except for his 1 query which was reserved to be asked to Mayank.

He had got his grades right for pre-exam unit tests, along with a profound interest in football leading him to win a complimentary prize too. Just his final results were due, not for long though.

Nupur encouraged him like none other and had opened up a scope for him, in case he wanted to, to turn out a complete sports person. She knew Mayank would never go without making his studies mandatory with merits though.

Varun understood his Mom's Point Of View for the first time in his case. What she said usually came out right. The way she had said and he had now liked it there and had made some great friends too without any fear for his place in his new school and now football looked like a right choice too. He felt ambitious, the way kids of his age did for new things being explored. It made him feel good and now his Mom too felt proud of him.

He wondered what Mayank has to say about his football?

He made a point to ask Mayank about that too, praying that he would approve of it though it was not related to studies.

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Sorry for the mistakes, if any😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
finally payal ji aapne update kar hi diya...i loved that first part with the pictures...no doubt he still loves her but who knows what is holding him back...i feel so bad for nupur...its like shes all alone in all of this...the fact that her own kid is so distant with her...i cant wait for varun to join her in bringing the family back together

though im confused...does is varun not gonna be going to boarding school anymore but wants to now that he has adjusted?...hoping for some present day mayur moments in the next update (which i hope will be soon)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sumonetolub

finally payal ji aapne update kar hi diya...i loved that first part with the pictures...no doubt he still loves her but who knows what is holding him back...i feel so bad for nupur...its like shes all alone in all of this...the fact that her own kid is so distant with her...i cant wait for varun to join her in bringing the family back together


though im confused...does is varun not gonna be going to boarding school anymore but wants to now that he has adjusted?...hoping for some present day mayur moments in the next update (which i hope will be soon)

Gosh u are so fast!!!! i was still sending the PMs😆

and about Varun...u gotta read ahead...he is a child and such small kids do not have very concrete thoughts...i hope am making sense😆

and about Mayur Present day moments...i wish that too😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wao lovely update
I wish to see Mayur as a complete family again
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice update.
contindu esoon
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
nupur is trying hard. but the problem is trying hard is not enough always.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt payal
loved mayur dance moment
cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update dear
osomly written
hope everything will be well soon

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