****REHANA'S CREATIONS****

Mohit's heart touching act:

"I do feel bad Pakhi that you are hiding the truth from me but it is more painful that you don't trust me enough to tell me the truth... I held your hand when I saw you in pain and misery but today when you are happy, why am I feeling bad? ...I never knew myself that after accepting you as my wife, my perspective about relationships will change drastically... I never believed in any traditions or customs, but when I see those vermillion on your forehead, I find those moments beautiful when I accepted you...but I suppose it's just all my thought, you never considered me as your own..."

I was watching the scene and after a moment I felt tears flowing down my face, I know sounds quite weird considering the fact that I am a picky critic when it comes to appreciating performance by a fine actor... Mohit's voice modulation along with the background tune touched my heart...mostly it's the blend of the painful tune of the flute and his helpless feelings within that soft heart of his did the trick for me...

An excellent piece of work executed by the actor, Mohit Raina, and the entire team behind that scene... the tune is still echoing in my ears...it indeed managed to touch my soul...Kudos!!

1st Analysis:

This is the first time, I am doing an analysis on a character...all thanks to Mohit Raina and his character... this is the first time I am watching his show and darn it he had made me fall for Agantuk... a character, which is quiet yet daring... loves his mother for being an ideal lady while sympathizes his father for failing to be an ideal husband... and the moment he met Pakhi, his entire world seemed to end up thinking about her...

Their first meeting was signified by Pakhi's broken bangles and all thanks to Agantuk ... as the very first time his eyes fell on her, for a moment he was taken a back by those attractive eyes, he remembered those familiar eyes from before...those eyes, that instantly caught his heart right then, when he found himself to be drawn by her innocent beauty...but then to disrupt his sudden unfamiliar mixed emotions, he accused her of being a thief and decided to drag her out to the hall ... later, the moment she fell on his feet to ask for fogiveness, he smirked yet didn't bother to leave her hand, as he believed it was destined for him only to hold that hand forever ...but the next moment he let her go and vanished from there when she informed him about her wedding... right at that moment, it got marked as the shortest love-story of the history...

However, his heart refused to let go of her when he decided to check on her to see if she was indeed here to cook, and yet again his eyes spoke the state of his heart and he moved towards her in the kitchen when she hide her face with the part of her sari ...he stopped right behind her and felt her closeness...then to show an excuse he drank some water and again his eyes followed her while the attention remained rooted to its spot in his mind... his gaze followed her from the top and scaned down to her wrist and it pained him to see the blood there... then again without waiting for her permission he grabbed her wrist and decided to battle with the pain of her wrist... at first the contact with those attractive eyes hit him to the core and his gaze got intense even more ...he could live the rest of his life staring at those eyes... coming back to the world, he looked at her hand, and very tenderly he touched that one bangle and removed it out of his way down the wrist to take the broken piece out of her smooth skin...

a sense of satisfaction was visible in his eyes for taking that pain away from her as he gave a victiorious look to the piece squished in his fingers... then his eyes softened towards her as if apologizing for being the main cause of her pain...but then she looked away, every time she turns her gaze away, his desire to stare at her increments exponentially... after that he left her hand with a jerk, all of a sudden, hating her for making him feel so deeply drawn to her... and a moment later he left the place battling with his own heart... *sigh*... only God knows how many times I have watched this kitchen scene Day Dreaming

and not to mention the background score during the scene was the icing on the cake... his intense gaze, her nervousness and the bg score, got blended together to present the scene in a best way ever...hats off to the actors/crew members

2nd Analysis on Asking about hand:

Not for a single moment, his eyes bothered to blink once they caught hers... again she succeeded in hiding her face from him but not those attractive eyes... they were bound to be held by his... and he could feel her soul by his powerful intense gaze...but she had to break her eye contact as she looked everywhere but him... trying to avoid those "passionate yet mysterious eyes that was hiding a story behind them..." on the other hand, he carefully walked towards her...not giving a damn to what she was thinking...all he was doing was letting himself follow his heart...and finally reached his destination only to find her turning away from him... but that did not stop him from inquiring about her wounded wrist... like hell he would miss the chance of being close to her... blame his heart for its' desire, since "the poor soul was still unaware of the intention of its' own heart... the growing feeling was playing hide-n-seek within itself... the only part the brain could not catch was the definition of that feeling... darn it! the word was 'Love'... yet he failed to recognize it..."

the moment he opened his mouth, she did not spend a single second and ran away...leaving him behind to watch after her ... she ran away from him, yet again... the more she ran away from him, the more he fell for her... weird heart with weird desires...

moving on towards the mandir, his eyes searched for the girl, who happend to rule his heart and once they found her, they refused to blink yet again, too busy to capture her feature in his heart... he didn't bother or rather care to look away even after getting caught by her... and yet again the bg score did its magic on the scene...

3^rd Analysis on The "Supposed" last meeting:

Following his mother, he entered the yard and had a good look at the surroundings before catching her with covered face, standing behind an old man... even in the crowded area, he managed to steal a couple of glimpses of her... once her father invited him inside, his gaze chose to shift its' direction back to her for a fraction of time... how he loved her lowered gaze...then gathering himself, he gently declined the invitation with his reasonings, unintentionally hurting their beliefs on tradition... but once he caught her innocent eyes, he felt the urge to apologize as he refused to hurt her again...

"Finally, before he could disappear from her life, his heart stopped him just to steal a last glance at her and again he witnessed her running away from him causing his heart to mock at its' broken pieces...yes, it got shattered at the thought that she was to go away from him...she was to become someone else's... perhaps, she was never meant for him...but little did he know the destiny had something else stored for him...something exceptionally beautiful..."

4th post on The Magical Moment:

Those weird chattering of people clicked his mind when he decided to check on the scenario himself... looking down at the crowd, his eyes scanned through the space until it caught the sight of her... Oh Damn! She was in trouble... definitely not acceptable when she looked up at him all confused with a very little unknown ray of hope...and he decided to make his presence with the interruption...

Coming down the slanted hill, he was stopped by Mahamayi, who shared her disappointment to his presence...whereas, he kept his gaze at the woman without any expression, like hell he gives a damn to wut she thinks about his interference, 'gimme a break, woman'... the moment Mahamayi announced about Pakhi failing in her purity test, his intense gaze gradually moved away to catch the sight of her and remained still until he was instructed to leave the place ...and there comes his famous smirk, this time dedicated to MahaMayi, 'keep dreaming woman! as if I care...so better get outta my way'...passing across her way, he walked towards the bride, who was in the custody of two followers of MahaMayi...he yanked off their holds from her and grabbed her wrist yet again without her consent, 'Buzz off people, SHE belongs to ME only'...

She watched him as he escorted her to his direction when MahaMayi interrupted & started her argument saying the girl was proved to be 'indecent'... "who proved it?" Damn it! He demanded to know who got the guts to prove that She was NOT Pure...he was NOT convinced with the nonsense explanation and he walked towards one of the followers to make him go through the purity test...ALL done!!... Feel it dude!!...

when the follower being a man could not tolerate the pain then how cud they bloody expect the girl go through all this? Point to be noted! And his mom finally decided to interfere but in vain as he refused to let this bullsh*t take place in the name of religion. But Alas! now it was the turn of the villagers to disapporve his interference. He was surprised to realize how these people can be so cruel to their own daughters?

Consequence! Yes! He did not prefer the consequence of this whole fake purity test. It was supposed to be a special day for the girl when she should be happily sent to her in-laws BUT no! they were talking about sending her to the path of death for something she was NOT worth of...at least to him, she was NOT worth of death but l-o-v-e...

This is exactly when he felt as if someone has just squished his heart as soon as MahaMayi announced that the girl's supposed-to-be groom was responsible for her state...he was Shocked! Hurt! ...and helplessly watched them taking her away from him... it pained him to see her in that state when he made up his mind to screw the damn world & follow his heart...

Turning her around, he applied the symbol of his desire or was it love? ...whatever it was, He was in heaven with true satisfaction...'All you Losers, Go to HELL...now, SHE is Traditionally, Religiously & Officially MINE...Dare to touch her, you are dead!'...

To be continued...

Edited by Rehana86 - 15 May 2011 at 1:04am

He felt lucky as those innocent eyes were directed towards him... I promise to love you till eternity ... There! Done with the first out of seven wedding promises... his eyes spoke up for himself as he watched her observing the red symbol scattered in her fingers...she was puzzled! ...

Finally, it was time to fight for his wife... the moment MahaMayi informed DD-Bhai about the "anarth" taking place, he retorted back, "why? you decided that no one will marry this girl. But, Guess what, darling? I just proudly DID because I do carry a brain UNLIKE you guys. I do NOT give a damn about whether she is pure or not" ...She is Priceless for me!...

It was enough for DD-Bhai to tolerate watching his own son hell adament in destroying his creation of "religeous tradition"..."Tradition? My Bloody Foot! the word is HYPOCRISY! Damnit! Because NO tradition allows to play with someone's life, but these brainless creatures send the innocent girls to the path of death in the name of bloody 'religeous tradition' ... and trust me! I will NOT let this happen to her...because now she is MY wife...& I will NOT let my wife follow such baseless crap, which I don't believe in, period!"...

There she goes again with her 'inauspicious crap'!...sing a new song, would ya!...People!! just shut her up!!... your MahaMayi is getting on my nerves now...& tell you, do not make me volunteer or else I swear, you all will regret for the rest of your lives...

"I disapprove his decision" announced MahaMayi...She WHAT?!?!?...Oye! Hello! Look here!! Excuse Me?!?! Who the HECK are you to butt in??...It's my life for heaven's sake...argh! one more word! you are officially dead!... "... and this girl will go to Narak Ki Dwar..." she concluded... THAT'S IT!!..."...she is going NOWHERE...get that straight, woman!..." and he was shut by his mom, the first lady ruled his heart...

"Fine!...if it's all about culture, I'm in...your culture tells you to send an unchaste girl to Narak Ki Dwar and my culture allows a wife to spend the rest of her life with her husband...for your kind information, I'm her husband now...our marriage allows us to stay together for eternity...How can my wife go to Narak Ki Dwar without her husband?? ... RIGHT MahaMayi?!?!" he reasoned his points... NO way I'm losing her again...

Finally, the order was passed! "...send them BOTH to Narak Ki Dwar...period!.." commanded DD-Bhai... and he smirked!...BINGO! Guess what? I'm NOT surprised dad...once again you failed to be a 'father'...

Another outstanding piece of work done by the GKD team...thanks :)

Final Analysis on "Rain sequence":

Ok, so I decided to include the "unedited" part of the sequence into my analysis...read the entire analysis to find out what I mean here...Wink...By the way, It's completely based on what I feel about the entire sequence...therefore, you will find some changes from the actual scene Smile...that's it!! and feel free to kill me!!Tongue...I'm all yours !!Day Dreaming

A fraction of fear came across her heart when she did not find him there...it can not be just a dream!...and she took a sigh of relief when her eyes caught him...a smile of joy appeared on her face, giving it a fresh glow...she admired him when he was busy enjoying the first touch of the rainy season...

The cool breeze & the droplets of the passionate bliss had blended together to bless him... it was the heaven on earth!... when all of a sudden everything ceased to exist for him as soon as his intense gaze caught the ravishing sight of her...he was fortunate to own this elegent piece of art created by God, just for him ... scanning her delicate structure wrapped by his gift, he stopped at those innocent honey brown eyes and watched her walking up to him ... not for a single moment they looked away from each other...

With a gesture he invited her to join him in the pleasant aura of Love, when she gently refused with a smile... then walking upto her, he splashed a few gems towards her when she turned her face away as she felt the cool droplets against her skin... like a gentleman, he then offered his right hand with a smile and this time she could not refuse him but extended her left hand, letting him escort her to his love-land...

The moment, those sensuous breeze & fresh drops of rain embraced her figure, she opened her arms, letting them accept her with a warm welcome... entering his paradise of love was indeed a blissful moment for her... she could feel every single piece of his divine love around her...she spun around to enjoy every bit of the heaven when he gently pulled her into his arms as she bumped into him...and eyes refused to let go off each other...

The poor heart reacted abruptly to her proximity... 'Dear God! She is Beautiful'...his fingers had the urge to feel her soft skin as they removed those drenched hair away from her face... when his eyes caught the sight of her lower lip and an instant desire took place in his heart...he wanted to taste those luscious parted lips and feel them against his... but before he could fulfill his desire, she just ran away from him, leaving his heart yearn for her...

His proximity was not doing any good to her heart as it started to beat faster than ever... God! She Loved Him... Turning back, with a smile she watched him coming towards her, then standing a few feet away, he decided to admire her beauty when her eyes asked for his wish & he honestly answered her to come into his arms, where she genuinely belonged ...

Even God had decided to send his will power to fulfill the man's wish, when she just ran into his arms, thanks to the lightening...and he tightend his hold around her...he wanted to hide her in his heart forever...away from this cruel world...she was destined to be in his heart, the true heaven...

He sighed to witness her again going away from him...gradually walking upto her, he removed those long wet hair from her back to leave a gentle kiss on her lower shoulder, causing her to react instantly to his heated passion against her skin & she turned around to face him when their gaze met... then very carefully his left hand slipped into the right curve of her neck while thumb was caressing her soft jawline, he moved forward to taste those wet lips only to miss her yet again... But this time he caught her on time, not ready to let go of her again...

He was aware of her state of heart, which had an equilibrium reaction with his passion... it seemed to be increasing exponentially when he placed a soft peck on her left hand followed by a series of intense kisses tracing up to her arm all the way to her shoulder ... it was a journey to heaven... the exotic aroma of her soft soothing skin was driving him crazy to let her go...she was the cure to his passionate desire...

She again moved away from him when he attempted to feel those lips against his... and he smiled to himself...he loved her for her sweet & pure innocence...

Right on time, he got to collect her from falling... Like hell, he would let any harm come towards her...she deserved love & only love from him... she was born to be loved by him... she was destined to be loved by him... he could never think of hurting her... she was a priceless gift from God & he would treasure her for the rest of his life... with this thought, he held her face only to let go of her ... he did not want to nervous her away again when he decided to walk away but to his surprise, he felt her hand, stopping him from leaving her all alone in the paradise of love ...

She needed him for support & company... if she was a priceless gift for him, then he was her 'silent prayer', a symbol of every beautiful part of her life... in fact, he would turn all the hardships of life into wonderful moments for her to cherish... he deserved to be appreciated ... but she had got nothing to give him except her unconditional pure love, when she touched his finger with her lips... it was just a small coin of love dedicated to him for showering his love on her... but he deserved more than that for his constant sincerity, honesty, support & love... collecting all her courage she moved forward to express her gratitude through a simple & gentle kiss on his cheek... another coin from her, but this time, it contained her true feelings for him...She had her eyes closed...tried to embrace all the overpowering emotions that were developing inside her...

He felt blessed... he was indeed truly blessed when he cupped her face into his hands and decided to reciprocate her divine love as he moved closer to leave a kiss on her forehead...then tracing down her face, he dedicated two kisses to her diamond-like eyes... finally, it was time to go through the emotions together when he finally closed the distance between them... the first touch of her parted pink lips was sweet... she tasted like silent heaven as he intensely explored her...

She grabbed onto his shirt for support as she felt her knees going weak before his strong passion of love...she could hear her heart pounding... it was a blend of love, passion, commitment, sincerity, honesty, support, trust & faith... she felt each and every emotion in his successful single attempt of touch... before he could lose his sense completely & end up hurting her, he came back to the world & picked her up... She perfectly fitted into his protective arms... and both headed for a trip to heaven, when he took over her heart and soul ... they belonged to each other in a true meaning...