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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#641

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Daksh ka mood bilkul teek nahi hain..😡 impatiently walking here and there in room...

Daksh; ab kaise bhi karke naina ko uss teddy se door lejaana hain..aur usse divert karna hain...kya karu?😲😲

Just then naina makes an entry...😉

Daksh; Naina...main bahut bore ho raha hoon..kahi bahar chale ghoomne.(..comes lil closer.).sirf tum aur main..😛

Naina; haan jaate hain..( daksh ki chehre par smile aagayi).😃..lekin chintu ko bhi leke jayenge.( phir kya smile gayab dakshu ki chehre se)

Daksh; kya?iss ko bhi...nahi naina...agar jayenge tho sirf hum dono.😡.( lil serious tone)

Naina; agar aisi baat hain tho..tum akele chale javo..main chintu ke saaath rahungi.😉..

Daksh; teek hain..main hi chala javunga..tum raho iske saath..main jaa raha hoon..( saying this..he walks towards door..) naina just keeps looking at him with smile...

Daksh; turns back..; sach main jaa raha hoon...😕

Naina ;javona ..kisne roka...daksh angrily walks out of room

Naina looks at teddy and says; ye Kp bhi na. ek baar admit karlega ki ye jalta hain tho iska kya chala jayega?.😛.Waise hamara plan kaam kar raha hain...tum dekhna woh wapas aajayega..mere bina woh nahi rehsakta aur maina uske bina..😆..

...looking at door; ab tho aajvo mere KP...😳..

Just then daksh comes back...😆😆

Naina; kya hua? wapas kyu aagaye?😲😉

Daksh; woh..woh..actually mera mood badal gaya?( impatiently sits on couch)

Naina; ( innocene exp)' kyu?😆

Daksh gives aserious glance at teddy(iski wajah se) 😡and then at naina.( bahut hogaya)...😡

Naina(in her mind);Ab bahut hogaya...aur tang nahi karungi kp ko..warna phir mananna bahutmushkil ho jayega..kya karne se ye kp maan jayega..( thinks of some thing)...haan ye theek hoga...😛

CONTD......

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#642

oho...hamne kaha dakshu bechare ko agle part me baksho, to aa gayi hamari bari...kya yar...ab ye naina madam kya karne wali hai🤔...suspens, suspens...baki ka aaj dalegi ya bechare KP ki tarah hame bhi *sniff* wait karvayegi...lucky no fair yar...

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#643

Daksh ka possessive roop...😡.😳

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Naina ne apna last and most powrful plan implement karne ke liye tayar ho gayi😛

Naina;( yawning); daksh..mujhe bahut neend aa raha hain..das min ke liye sojati hoon ..phir utalena..lunch bhi banana hain.😆

Daksh;( in mind); thank god ..ab tho atleast mujhe waqt milega mere naina ke saath...and says

Haan mujhe bhi..thoda bahut neend aa raha hain..chalo dono sojaate hain.. das min baad ut jayenge aur main tumhari madat karunga lunch banane main.

.( gets up from couch and settles on bed..and is about to slip beside naina...just then naina puts teddy between them both...😆😆

Daksh;gets up; ye kya?😲

Naina is happy that her plan is wrking

Naina; kya matlab? teddy hain..aaj se main iss ko hi hug karke sojavungi..( hugs teddy tightly..)🤗

Daksh; kya..tho phir main kya karu? dekho naina bahut hogaya..ye yaha nahi rahega..nikaalo isse😡.( tries to snatch teddy from naina's hand)..

Naina; kya kar rahe ho daksh? mere isse hug karne se tumhe kuch problem hain?..( fighting to keep it with her self)

Daksh; haan..prblm hain..bahut bada prblm hain.😡.( Finally snatches away teddy after fighting with naina... and throws it down bed).....

Naina; arey ye kya?( tries to get down bed to get teddy back... but daksh pulls her back..)

Daksh; tumhe samaj nahi aata..woh teddy yaha nahi rahege..tumhare aur mere beech main tho bilkul nahi...😛

Naina; lekin kyu?😲

Daksh( in fulto kp mood).😡.holding both hands tightly ; kyu? kyunki main keh raha hoon...maine kaha na... ek baat se ache se samajh lo tum..tum par sirf mera haq hain..sirf mera..tum sirf meri ho..tum se hug ya kiss lena ka haq sirf mujhe hain...sirf mujhe...😛

Naina is lil shocked to see this roop of dakshu...but still manages to utter ; tumhe jalan ho raha haina?

Daksh; haan..jalta hoon main..bahut bahut jyada jalata hoon😉.😉(holding her shoulders) ., jab bhi tum kisi aur ki kareeb hoti hain..kisi aur ki tareef karti ho..chahe woh koi hero ya koi khilona ya kuch aur ho ya. koi aur.😡...tumhara pyar sirf mera hain,,main isse kisi aur ke saath share nahi karnewala ...kabhi bhi nahi..( stresses on his words)

An itense eyelock..but this time..naina with combination of shock and surprised expresssion..daksh with eyes filled with rage and possessiveness.

..Slowly daksh calms down and he realises he has been holding naina's hands and shoulders too tightly...slowly releases his grip...

Takes a deep breath; looks at naina;

Daksh; I am, I am sorry naina! woh..main bhaut jyada rude tha..😕.I am sorry..dard ho raha hain kya( lovingly takes her hands. into his..and starts looking at them...😊

Naina; ; daksh!

Daksh looks at her; hmmm.

.naina hugs him tightly..🤗.🤗daksh also slowly puts her hands around her..both stay in embrace for few min...

Contd...

PS Aish agar tu aisa chehra banaya tho.😕.mujhse raha nahi gaya..iss liye doosra part bhi daal diya..Ab tho smile karle yaar😊..aur rupu 2 parts daala maine😉

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DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#644

Lucky itna bhi Dakshu ke saat saat hume mat tadpav... bechara kaise itna time raha hai bina Naina ke😆... aur ye Naina bhi na ek mauka nahi chodti bechare ko tang karne ka.😊... jaldi se next part please...😍

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Aishwarya

@Aish_21

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Posted: 13 years ago

#645

oh man...itnaaa possesiv dakshu😲😆😆😆...acha theek he baba smil kar li mene😊...finali dakshu admitted😛...poor baby. kitna tadpaya na naina ne😆...lucky darlin aaj ke smiles ke liye ek baddaaa sa hug 4 u🤗🤗🤗thnku, thnku nd phir se thnku🤗🤗🤗...

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#646

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan
Lucky itna bhi Dakshu ke saat saat hume mat tadpav... bechara kaise itna time raha hai bina Naina ke😆... aur ye Naina bhi na ek mauka nahi chodti bechare ko tang karne ka.😊... jaldi se next part please...😍

Yaar rupu dnt wry 😛

dakshu ko tadap ab kahatm hogaya hain😉 and in coming part we will compensate for all the tadap dakshu went through...Naina se karvayenge.😆.kyu..ab tu bhi smile karle😃

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DakshnaFan

@DakshnaFan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#647

Mere reply ke phelehi 2nd part😊...very good Lucky👏... how sweet and cute is our Dakshu😉... loved it😃... finally admitted ki jalan ho rahi hai.😆... Loved this avatar of possessive Dakshu😊... thank u thank u Lucky🤗🤗🤗🤗... u have shown him in each and every avatar.😛...

Daksh; haan..jalta hoon main..bahut bahut jyada jalata hoon😉.😉(holding her shoulders) ., jab bhi tum kisi aur ki kareeb hoti hain..kisi aur ki tareef karti ho..chahe woh koi hero ya koi khilona ya kuch aur ho ya. koi aur.😡...tumhara pyar sirf mera hain,,main isse kisi aur ke saath share nahi karnewala ...kabhi bhi nahi..( stresses on his words)

@ Bold Loved it.👏..👏. Thank u Lucky 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 13 years ago

#648

@aish & rupu

Oh...thank god..finally dono ka mood teek hogaya.😉.kyu nahi dakshu ka tadap jo khatam hogaya..yaar naina se jyada tum logon ko dakshu ki fikr hain...😆...of course Mujhe bhi...😆

Thank u for all hugs and lovely comments...and for u both🤗(

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Neethu

@ntsindia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#649

an Dakshna FF for the current situation

Ayi naggs Naina and she shows bold face. then comng to the room she weeps and Daksh knows it and he consoles her. In the night Daksh lies on the sofa. Naina on bed. Daksh cannot sleep.. he turns this sid eand then other side. Naina is pondering all the happenings and she also cannot sleep. she gets up and comes near Daksh.. then goes back on the bed. no.. she canot sleep. she gets up and sits on the bed looking at Daksh. she find he also trying..

N: Daksh..

D: umm...

N: tujm yeha avona..

D: Kya (surprisingly)?

N: need nahi aati.. tum ithar mere paas let lo..

Daksh gets up and sits near her.. : kuch bhi mat socho.. let jaavo.. he pats her and corrects the wallet.

he gets and abt to go to the sofa... naina holds Daksh's hand..

N: ithar so javona..

Daksh smiles and lies near her

Naina slowly comes near him and places her head on Daksh's arm and sleeps.. daksh feels better..

[isi bahane mei.. at least yeh ho sakta hai to... accha haina..at least for us?? its so boring showing bad words.. ]