NEW FF - KriYaash 2 Lives and 1 world - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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skkm - Yaa my next post will b fully dedicated to KriYaansh , actually i started wid this because i wanted some story line for my topic
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey... i havent read it yet... but will as soon as i get tym!!! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Dude I live it plzz update soon! Nd pm me!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow...nice...!!!
cute story...
please update soon...cant wait to read more...
and please PM me...!

-Saumya
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey really nice start
n reyam scene was much better than at show
when swayam told everything 2 rey
looking 4 next
how rey will bump in krya's house..lol
waiting 4 next n pm me
see yaa soon !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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update (part 2 )

rey - (Tensed) R u sure , yeh Plan work karega naa ?

Swayam - if u ask me this question again , i swear , I WILL KILL U , NOW GOOO , ur baat cutter needs u ...

rey - Thanks bro (with a smile )( Rey climbs through the pipeline to kria"s flat . He sees her sleeping on the Study table with her hair twirling on her face ) Kitni pyaari aur innocent lag rahi hai meri baat cutter sote hue , but jab uthte hue yehi smile kab bomb blast mein badal jaati hai pata hi nhi chalta ( Smiles cutely and the OHHoooHHHooo tune starts and after some tym he gets back into his senses) Rey , concentrate , abhi toh baat cutter soh rhi hai isliye mission kria maaanooee plan kal work out karenge .

(While climbing down accidently hits the window pane and due to its noise kria gets awake )
rey - ouch !!!!

Kria - (goes to the window) kya hua , yeh kiski awaaz hai ? I guess i am dreaming

Rey - ( Hanging from the 8th floor of the Bldg) KRIA , KRIA , HELPPP , NAHI TOH MEIN MARR JAONGAA !!!!

Kria - AAP , aapki yaha aane ki himmat kaise hui ??

Rey - mujhe lec dena bandh karo n please HELP ME , waise bhi kisi ke ghar mein ghussna ne saja ae maut nahi hotii !!!

Kria - (in a hurry )OKKK , fine ( Tries to pull him , but her she was to weak to pull reyz strong body , but finally she tried harder and she succeeded but it caused a jerk causing rey and kria to fall on kria"s bed with rey on her and OhhoooHHHooo HEyhEyhEy aHHHaaahhaa )

Rey -( thought - andhere mein bhi kitni sundar lagti hai meri baatcutter , she tried to get her free but he held her tight , she soo beautiful and charming tht he couldnt help himself , he slowly leaned towards her cheeks and kissed her gently , kria also couldnt get her free as She didnt wanted him to make her free , she felt like staying in his arms like this forever... )

( their romance was cut short by kria"s mom)

Kria"s mom - Kria beta kya hua sab theek hai naa ?

Kria - ARREE BAAPRE jhaansii ki raani , rey , aap , aap chup jaaeyee bed ke niche , nahi , parde ke nichi nahi, haan haan cupboard ke andar .

Rey - okk okk fine
( kria opened the door)

Kria"s mom -( Came inside and began to inspect the room ) Kya hua kria iski awaaz aa rahi thi ?

Kriaa - KKKuch nahi mom , bass UMMM aaa mein gana gaa rhi thi .

kria"s mom - GANA , ladke ki awaaz mein , Kria saach bolo ??

Kria - (pushes her mom towards the door )MOM appne promise kia tha naa app shaak nhi karoge , ab aap jaao , mujhe bahaut neend aa rhi hai

kria"s mom - Fine , sorry , i trust u , byee good nite .
(kria closes the door and opens the cupboard )

Kria - aap please yahan se jaaeye , app already college mein meri pareshniyan badha chuke hai par ghar mein toh mujhe chain se rehene dijiye

Rey - par ms.dehradun , meri baat toh suno...

kria- muhje aapki koi baat nhi sunani , aap please yahan se jaaeye

rey - fyn , (sits sternly on the bed)main bhi tumhari baat nhi sunugaa , jab tak tum meri baate nhi sunti , tab tak evn i wnt goo

kria - (in utter frustration ) FINE kya baat karni hai appko

rey - thtz like my baat cutter (sweetly just chews his tongue for adding MY, awww) i mean uhhh forget it , this is for u (wid a 100 million dollar smile ,gives her yellow flowers and her fav chcolates (tells her the whole story , how he misunderstood her and how he was never knowing the reason why she slapped him and he even told her that he just wanted to end the fights and start their new friendship on the friendship day )

Kria - ( After thinking a bit ) AaPKI toh bacchpan ki aadat hai naa jhoothi kahaniyaan banane kii, mein aapki baatien kaise maan loon , aur agar aap ko itna hi boora lag raha tha humari fites ka toh app ek baar aapkar mere appko thapad marne ki reason nhi pooch sakte the ?

Rey - Mujhe galti ho gayi kria , but even u knw ki mein jhoot nhi bole raha , i m really sorry for what i hav done . tum jo saza doogi mujhe woh manzoor hai , chahe toh mujhe aur dus thapad mar lo but...

Kria - MMMujhe sochne ke liye thoda waqt chahiye , mein aapse phir baath karungi

Rey - fyn kal college mein milte hain
(he turns to go kria notices him go and picks up the yellow roses and her fav chocolates and smiles , rey actually notices her smiling and he becomes happy )

REY - Mission complete , baat cutter is smiling !!!!!!


NEXT PART PROMO

kria and rey come to college , rey tries to talk to her , bt she keeps ignoring him , bt finally he gets a chance to talk to her .

Please do comment😊 . thanks for reading

If u wanna be added in the Pm , either request for it in your post , like my topic or simply Msg me😊


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Posted: 14 years ago
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yaar i loved the new update ⭐️especially the part of how rey is saying sorry to her its sooo cute loved it plzz pm me :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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AMAZIN ... really very nic...😊😊👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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jaldi upate kro n den PM me@!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I have to say only one word that is





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