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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikita-Sharma

The last para left me in Awe of Mayank totally..that was super cute!!..<3

and Nupur, I jst want her to stop behaving so harsh on him now...its high time she forgets her ego n all...n if she can trust Aman she shud certainly trust Mayank..but thenlets see whats nxt..
Do cont soon...love dthe update..seriously :D..take care :)



thanks nikita:)

thnx:)

Originally posted by: SamiraARTiMAYUR

Mayu such a flirt boy lol if wasn't for him Nups wouldn't get info from Kylie loved how Nups kicked Mayank under the table as always superb update Shiv thanks alot for the pm 🤗



thnkx samira:)

Originally posted by: stargurl34

Shiviii ! Fantasticcc update, as always 😉

thnx kiran:)



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurlove

OMG! OMG! OMG!

It was 3rd update of a week.
Shivi u r a true sweet heart.🤗

Now coming to update.I don't know y Nupur is hiding Morgan's matter from Mayank.And i think Mayank has some idea about Nupur's problem bt I think he is waiting for Nupur to trust him and tell him herself.

Thnx for pm.😊



well i do try to be regular in updates when i hv time;
thanks dear:)
thnx:)

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

she is hiding the truth, he will be angry again it cant be tht simple...but i love the way mayank said its only.u..


well lets see wht happens next:)

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

osom

hate that morgon
he is such a low guy
hope mayank will help sort this out
do write soon dear


thnx:)


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

Lovely update
Loved mayank flirting wirh dat girl n nupur getting jealous was soo gud.
Aww...he said dat, he was doing everything fr her.
Cont soon



thnx:)

Originally posted by: shubhsArti

whew !!!!! * wiping my brow* that was a close call. i thought another misunderstanding was in the offing.😆😆😆
but thank you, you managed to head it off.😆😆
loved the update Shivi.😊



lol..thnx shubs:)

Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever

this is truly a treat to read...mayank's reestablishment of his heartfelt feelings and nupur's apathetic outward approach, both hv been there side by side in a sync since last few chapters...but finally mayank did it... i feel this time nupur wont b able to leave behind his earnest yearning 4 her...!! 😍 i m delighted to see his honest confession towards the end...something dats bound to come straight 4m our heart and directly touch opponent's soul...!! beautiful...simply enchanting...!! ❤️

but my sole matter of fear is dat filthy morgan...!! nupur is somehow risking herself and at the same time insulting mayank by hiding such an important truth 4m him,instead telling dat pie headed aman...!! this is so not fair... thus i fear the moment mayank wil get to knw dat throughout he was unaware of the truth where on the other hand aman replaced dat trust & place in nupur's life...Its gonna create a havoc in mayur's world... :( just hope mayu wil b there b4 morgan or ny x.y.x comes or even think of hurting her a bit..!!

cant wait 4 the next chapter shivi..though i knw we do pressurize u a bit too much😳... but ur ff is such an addiction dat it hardly gets possible to live 4 few days without its frequent dose...!!😛



thnks pallabi🤗

as i already told you...u have to wait to see what's in store:)
oh yes d pressure is dere for regular updates...though smtimes i may not live up to it..but i do love the demand;)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Faria-


Nups kicked on mayus foot- lol lol heheheheehe accha hua. i lovedit...
beautiful part shivi
lovelyyy
awww last part was the best part of this update...
awesome job
keep it up



thnk faria:)

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

aww.. shivi!
such an sweet update!
luvd d flirt mayu n jealous nupur!!😆
aww.. its so sweet of mayu, dats he's doin all dis only 4 her!!!😳
cont soon!🤗


thnks supriya🤗


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Annu_Arti_Mayur

sorry 4 not commenting on the previous part...is bar pe bhi kya comment karon...samajh nahi a raha... 🤔
but as u said to comment so...
I LUV U...❤️🤗 I lUv u too😳

😆😆

okay commenting seriously nw...😳😆
gr8 update...⭐️
do i have to say...i luv mayank...😍😆.... i can see that
😳
nupsiee is behaving...Ahhh...no comments...😳
she can trust dat Psycho but not mayank...
(Oh BTW is Aman ur Fav 🤔 y do u keep bring him again n again...besides my warning to u...dat not to bring him again...but u still bring him...😡)🤣

🤣...it's not my fault he is nupur 's friend and still in this city😆
well jo bhi hai..is Aman going to be a trouble...AGAIN...😳
as nupsieee had told him...EVERYTHING...
lets see...😆

well lets see:)


BUT one thing is 4 sure...MAYU will be there...to help her...i knw...😳
its Nupsieee...who is showing attitude now...

i can see a BIG misunderstanding ahead...


i just luvddd the way...Mayu told his heart out to nupur that its only 4 u...Hayee...i luv him...😳😍


"Now common," he held my wrist and turned me back to face him again.

"Don't you know it? All this money means nothing to me. I don't need it. I am here only for you. I came in this stupid restaurant for you. Asked Kylie for information even if that meant flirting, only for you. Morgan and your colleague ' I care two hoots. It's only for you." he added in a low whisper.

Ufff...❤️

i hope Nupur will not behave unnecessarily now to him...
i feel bad when she does dat to him...🥺
😆

u just love mayank😳😆
well a GR8888888888 Update sweetheart...😳👏
i hope this morgan's matter ...to be finished soon...as mayuu is here...😳😆
Do i have to say...U Write...Brilliantlyyy n Beautifulllyyy...Just Luv reading ur Work every time...
Continue Tonight...😉😆
God Bless Luv u...❤️🤗🤗
Annu😳




okayyy Kuch zyada lamba ho gaya Comment nai...🤔😆
Compensation...for not commenting on the previous 1...😉😆

thank u so much di🤗...i love ur comments as i always wait for my freinds comments...and when the person is as sweet as yours...i can't let it go😳...well u can always comment what's ur take on the way the story is shaping😛
ly too
🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
post jaldi now, i gotta sleep😳
Edit
ab i can only read tomm may be😕
Edited by Payal-15 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 28

...#.....Baby, baby, we've got a date; (ooh-hoo, ooh-hoo)
Oh, baby, baby, don't you be late. Oh, baby!

I'll meet you at your house at a quarter to eight. (ooh-hoo, ooh-hoo)

Oh, darlin', baby, baby, just you have some faith!
I promise you, we're gonna (rock it, baby; rock it, baby, tonight);
To (rock it, baby; rock it, baby, tonight);
Gonna (rock it, baby; rock it, baby, tonight);
Baby, (rock it, baby; rock it, baby, tonight)...#

"Hop in!"

"Weren't we supposed to go inconspicuous? "

"Isn't this BMW 6 series Sedan just a tiny eye-sore?"

"I am not going in this. Let me call up a cab."

"Cummon we are not riding up to his house now, are we? We will get off a good yards before only."

"We are to go walking then?"

"Yup. Then out of the guard's view we shall scale the wall and jump inside."

"Okay….I am suddenly not having a good feeling about your whole trespassing plan."

"They may have dogs let loose in the garden to guard. But don't worry, why fear when Mr. Mayank Sharma is near? The end thing is we will surprise Morgan tonight."

"OMG..Dog's are going to be there? Are you serious??"

"Maybe. Who knows? I am expert in dealing with them anyways. Have various breeds in my house."

"I don't doubt your special connectivity with them. You yourself act like one sometimes."

"No way. Dogs are loyal, you see."

I rolled my eyes. "Aren't we getting late now?"

"Jump in. I am dying for our first long drive in this humble piece."

"You are such a show-off!"

I seated myself beside him and started to tie my seatbelt. With a sly grin on his face, he put on his black sun-glass and ignited the engine.

…………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….

"We are almost there."

"Thank god. I can't bear your torturous presence a moment longer."

"It's not my fault if you don't like hearing songs at this volume."

"You got me a headache!"

"That's why it's said, the co-passenger should add effort to make the trip more enjoyable. Not put up a grumpy face for the entire ride."

"Next time, take someone who will go ga-ga over your idiotic self-proclaimed histrionics with women. Spare me, Duh."

"You make me shut quiet if I talk about you and you yourself go quiet if I talk about others. Sorry for being rude but it's you with the problem!"

"Stop the car please."

"Woah..I wasn't fighting Nupur. I swear. Just a healthy discussion on what-not-to –do –to-make- a-road trip-boring."

"Mayank I am serious. It's useless going there tonight."

"What?"

"Well…I just got a text. Morgan is coming tomorrow Sunday morning. "

The car screeched to a sudden stop jerking us forwards.

"Really? We got a postponing of plans. Well who told that? Kyile or Liu?"

"None. I got a text from…umm….my colleague. Morgan called her tomorrow. And………"

"And?"

"…..and she has accepted the deal."

"Finally she grew some guts. You tell her we'll be there on time. Everything is going to be recorded. That bas***d will get caught red-handed!"

"Oh..yeah."

"What should we do now?...I have a brilliant idea. Let's check out our venue for spying tomorrow, his villa now only."

"He hasn't yet decided the time and place. He will text me….her..i meant my colleague, tomorrow itself."

"He wants a change of place?"

"Maybe. I dunno. Hopefully Kyile has not blabbered out anything."

"You can't trust anyone. Well I do hope she doesn't break my heart."

"You think he knows or suspects?"

"I really don't care. We will nail him tomorrow no matter what. On the plus side, Kylie doesn't know about your colleague. So there is still chance Morgan has no clue."

"Anything wrong with you, Nupur?"

"No…I…I am alright. It's ….It's what road trips do to me. Just a bit tired. Nothing else."

Quickly I wiped the brimming tears in my eyes as he looked ahead.

"So it's useless going to his place tonight. Let's go back to the city then. We can come tomorrow here again if this is the place he decides upon."

"NO…no. No need. It's starting to snow outside. The radio gave warning of a blizzard. It's safer to spend the night in a nearby inn."

……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..

"Here are some warm clothes for you. You didn't come down for dinner. I get you are tired. But you need to finish this food here in your room."

"I don't wish to eat."

"Why are you being angry with the food? And why is your window open? Can't you see the snow-flakes falling down?"

"Don't close the window, Mayank."

"Girl, do you want to get sick? Now get yourself a jacket on. You are damn shivering."

"I feel better this way."

He knelt down and turned the chair upon which I was seating towards the fire-place. The burning flames reflected its pattern in his deep hazel eyes which pored intently upon me.

"What's troubling you tonight, Nupur?"

"Nothing. I am perfectly fine." I forced out a weak smile.

"Did I hurt you?"

"No…you haven't done anything. You'd been the greatest help infact. I said I am fine."

"Just tell me Nupur."

"Why doesn't time stand still Mayank? Why it has to go?"

"Time goes for better things to come your way."

"What if the best thing is now present with me? I don't want to let it go."

"Tomorrow a new morning will come with a new lease of life Nupur."

"But I prefer this night Mayank."

"Why are you afraid of tomorrow Nupur?"

"I……I can lose you again."

He smiled a warm radiant smile." Lost and gain- the cycle continues forever. But being forgotten in the process is the scarier thought."

"Why you left without saying goodbye?"

"I did not. Wished you goodnight yesterday."

"You did. At your farmhouse after the party was over. You left suddenly at night without meeting me."

"I left you flowers."

"Those were lovely. I love orchids. But I was waiting for you. But you were gone."

"I was scared you didn't wish to see me again after I'd been so rude to you. I thought you chose him."

"Would I ever do that Mayank?"

"I am sorry. Didn't know that it meant a lot to you. I shouldn't have left that way."

"No. I am sorry for making you think that way. I was never marrying Aman. I should have told you. Thought you could read my eyes."

"Yours are so deep and brown that it's still a mystery to me." He gently tucked away a loose strand from my forehead behind my ears. I shivered some more as his warm fingers brushed against my cold skin." It will take a life-time to read them." He gently blew on them.

I closed my eyes.

"Can you guess what's in my heart right now?"

He placed his right hand over the left side of my chest." It's pulsating so fast. I can feel your heartbeat."

Still with my eyes tightly shut, "Can you decipher what the beats are trying to convey?"

"I can't tell you."

"Oh."

"But I can show you."

My heart pounded louder than before as he gently lowered his face and planted a wet kiss on both my closed eyes. Next I felt the sappy thing on my forehead. He pecked on both the cheeks.

Removing the hair on my right shoulder by the back of his hand, he leaned in to whisper." Are you afraid of tonight Nupur?"

"It's you. How can I be afraid?" I whispered back.

He gently bit me on the right ear-lobe in response and proceeded downwards nibbling gently on the delicate flesh near my collarbone.

"Mayank." I moaned out his name.

He left a trail of butterfly kisses on my throat slowly rising up. He teasingly placed his warm lips on mine with the gentlest touch ever. Digging my nails into his back I kissed him back will all I had been holding up for so long. I moaned some more as his tongue danced to its content inside.

"Okay pause….time for breath."

Finally we broke apart. As I inhaled a large amount of air to get over the breathlessness, realization dawned upon me. I kept my eyes lowered wondering what to say next.

"Errr………..I think we have a busy day ahead. Umm…..lets retire for the night."

I raised my eyes to see him move towards his room. He looked back.

"Sorry. I forgot again. My bad."

…………………

"Good night , Saxena." He winked.

A curve on its own formed on my lips.

Home is where the heart is

And my heart is anywhere you are

Anywhere you are is home

I don't need a mansion on a hill

That overlooks the sea

Anywhere you're with me is home

Maybe i'm a rolling stone

Who won't amount to much

But everything that i hold dear

Is close enough to touch

I'm a lover, I'm not a fighter,
Hold me close and I'll take you higher than you've ever been,

Raise your hands and lay down your weapons,

We could turn this around in seconds flat,
If you believe.

Home is where the heart is,

It's where we started,
Where we belong, singing.
Home is where the heart is,
It's where we started,
Where we belong.


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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update SIS...
i loved it...
i loved it lodsss...
it was such a cute n ROMANTIC part...
i loved it...
i felt bad for Nupur...
i sooo wish she wud hv told Mayank d TRUTH...
i dont know why bt now m lil afraid for her...
i know Mayank will save his Nupur like alwaysss...
dis part was sooo damn cute...
i loved many lines here...so cant mention 1...
dey were sooo cute...
i jst loved it to d core...
gosh...Nupur poured her heart out abt dat day...
i sooo loved it...
n den Mayank's concern was uterly cute...
n d last part was superb...
i was smiling reading d entire update...
i loved it lodsss...
love U sis...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Shivzzz🤗🤗

Sorry yaar...for the first time I didn't unres...My PC had crashed down nd my exams keeping me busy
But koi gal nahi...abhi bol deti hun😃
The story is progressing awesomely👏
and I m loving the fact that Mayank-Nupur are alone now😳...without any haddis...or anhything else...Just the two of them...slowly understanding each other and realising the feelings❤️
and in today's update..Oh man!!...Nupur is soo vulnerable!!...She again sort of confessed before him...and I just love the way she depicted her insecurtiy and apprehensions...awww 😍
and Mayank as usual..The Darling!!...He always makes her go speechless...The end was sooo roamantic..☺️
But I m scared what would happen when he comes to knwo its not her colleague but Nupur herself..He will be heart broken that she lied to him...Ouch
Hope everything sorts out well...
Waiting for the next part
Edited by aysha_mayur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww..dat was touchinggg...😳😍
n the last bit was sooo Romantic...☺️
Ahhh..finally no fighting...n heart to heart conversation...😳😍
Nupur melted...finallyyy...poor girl..she was scared...
But y fear when Mr. Mayank Sharma is near...😉😆
awww...i so luv there conversation in the end...😍
having a feeling...mayank knws ALL...but wants her to say it...may be...??🤔
n lastlyyy I LUV MAYANKKK...❤️😍😆

a gr888 update sweethearttt...😳
luvd every bit of it...especially the end...☺️
without any bellsss...n psycho...a complete MAYUR Update...😎😆
thank u...😳
Luv u sooo much...4 giving us quickkk updates...God bless...❤️
🤗
Continue soonnn...😃
Annu😳

Edited by Annu_Arti_Mayur - 13 years ago

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