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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey update this yaar. its got a amazing start.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 2:

''Veer Bhai'' A tall man who looked like he was in his late 20's (which he was) in plain long white shirt and plain black jeans called out to me. His face became visible as he came out from the darkness of a corner and into the light. He had scars all over his face, making him look bloodcurdling and fearless. His eyes we're huge and dark black making him look even more dangerous. ''Yes Razak?'' I answered while examining him carefully. He somehow looked..worried? That was very rare. He became my friend as soon as I joined Altaf Bhai's gang. He took care of me and whenever I was in need, he was always the one to help me. ''What's the matter Razak, you seem worried?'' I asked looking at him attentively. He looked down away from my eyes. ''Razak, don't do this. Just answer my question.'' I replied irritated. ''Bhai..wo Neil sir-'' Razak tried to explain what his problem was but as soon as I heard my father's name, I became alert and cut him off. ''Dad? What happened? Is he okay?? Razak! God dam it answer me!'' I shouted back getting impatient. My father was my entire world. After the death of my mother, our family abandoned us. Day and nights we searched for help for shelter for homes, no one helped us, and then entered Altaf Bhai, the leader of all criminal gangs. He helped me, he helped us, and he was the one who gave us a new meaning to live. Although dad never lived with me, we we're always close. Razak breathed a sigh of relief for getting this burden out of his head as soon as he heard this news and answered, ''Sir was arrested by the Police.'' He replied not looking into my eyes of fear. Although he was elder than me he called me Bhai as I was the leader of this group. He also looked more dangerous than me, but everyone knew I was more deadly. I froze hearing his words. Shakti Bhushan must have done this, I began thinking bitterly. Shakti Bhushan was the head police officer who has been searching for me for years, and now to get revenge on me he has arrested my father. ''I will not let him get away with this.'' I said to myself angrily as I stomped out of the flat.

''Altaf Bhai, mujhe ek bohat bari musibat mein par gaye.'' I called up Altaf Bhai, the main leader of all the gangs of India, he was the one criminal who did everything yet know no one knew of him. The most threatening criminal you could ever meet but I was desperate and he had always helped me in need. ''Batao.'' He replied and I could tell he was listening in detail. ''Police ne Neil Sharma ko arrest kiya.'' I replied in a desperate tone. ''Theekhe mein tumhe do din ke baad phone karke batao gi ki plan kya hai.'' Altaf replied thinking for a few seconds. ''Thank you Bhai.'' I replied back and cut the phone. ''Shakti Bhushan, you will pay for this disgusting deed. You will pay.'' I gritted through my teeth as I whispered to myself.

I sighed walking back to my flat. I finished all today's tasks, and now there was nothing to do. Suddenly that girl's thoughts headed back to me which had been haunting me ever since our first meeting. Her smile, her voice, her beauty... an unwilling smile formed on my face. I opened my plain red door with the number 41A engraved on it. Walking into the flat, my thoughts started to fill with her. What's her name? What does she do? When will I see her again? Thousands of questions shot through my head to which I had no answer to. All I knew was I wanted to see her again. I needed to see her again. After meeting her, a strange restlessness formed inside of me. Some feelings started evolving inside me trying to bring out a side of me which I've been hiding all this time. I can't let it get out. Not now. Not ever. Who was she? Why did she have this effect on me? I sat down on a nearby chair thinking. Why couldn't I stop thinking about her? I banged the table nearby which was wooden therefore it did not break despite my strong muscular hands which had been used for thousands of murders. Suddenly a certain question popped up which I had been trying to avoid, ''was she thinking about me?'' I whispered to myself drifting by to the thoughts of our first meeting again.

Edited by -shan- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting concept bt plz give it a happy ending.I know its too early to ask for such demand.Bt i don't like sad endings and wo bi death.Life is already full of problems and hectic.😕
Sending u buddy request pm me when u next update. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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updateedd page 2 😉
thankk youu lovelyy people for the wonderrfull comments 👏 I do read, them and each and everyone brings a smile to my face, the only problem is there is so much, I can't replyy to all 😭 but I do love yourr comments, so keep them cominggg 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 3

''Theekhe Bhai, Mein Abhi Kardogi.'' I replied to Altaf Bhai and cut the phone. It's been 2 days and Dad was still in Jail. Altaf Bhai had called up to tell me the plan which was of course linked to that Shakti Bhushan. Bhai knew I could do anything for Dad especially if it was linked to Shakti Bhushan. ''Bhai said Razak was bringing the photo of the girl but he hasn't arrived yet.'' I wondered. Abruptly I heard loud knocking on the door. I knew it was Razak because no one else knocks like that. I ran towards the door and hastily unlocked it to see Razak smiling. ''Why do you always knock like that?'' I asked smiling as I walked inside and he followed me. ''So you know it's me.'' He laughed while taking a seat on the single soft comfortable brown sofa. I smiled while taking a seat next to him on the double chocolate brown sofa. ''So did you get the photo of Shakti Bhushan's daughter?'' I asked bitterly. Razak laughed, ''Calm down, and yes I did.'' He replied while taking out the photo from his pocket and gently passing it to me. ''Vaise wo bohot Khubsurat hai.'' He grinned while I rolled my eyes. As I turned my eyes towards the photo I froze. ''Bhai, kya hua?'' Razak asked me confused as he shook me. I tried to come to my senses but my heart refused to do so. ''Bhai!'' Razak shouted making me come back to my senses. ''Wo mein..mein kuch soch rahe ti, yeh…yeh larki Shakti Bhushan ki beti hai?'' I prayed for the answer to be no but that failed. ''Ha, of course.'' Razak replied examining me. ''Tum isko jaanti ho?'' Razak asked. ''Nahi…nahi wo bas aisa hi.'' I sighed closing my eyes. ''Razak leave me alone for some time.'' He nodded and left.

My sweating increased as I felt restless. ''The plan was to kidnap Shakti Bhushan's daughter to get my father back but the girl…'' I muttered to myself as I drifted off into my thoughts. The girl was the same girl I met who had captivated me. I was perplexed on what to do. On one hand, I needed my father back and on the other hand I couldn't hurt her. Wait, why couldn't I hurt her? She is my enemy. She is Shakti Bhushan's daughter. I sighed closing my eyes harder as I gripped the sofa controlling my anger. What do I do?

Finally after an hour of thinking and gritting my teeth with anger. I decided. I will kidnap Shakti Bhushan's daughter and I will try keeping these unknown feelings in control. I was determined.

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