YOU NEVER KNOW (MAANEET) # 2 - Page 77

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
they r back home but their guilt trip is affecting everyone in the family...
waiting for the family's decision
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Posted: 13 years ago
hai

this is fgreat and...fine
hope the guilty need to be less

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Posted: 13 years ago
oh gosh! poor maan and geet
pls dont separate them
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome story so far... read it in one go... please finish this guilt session soon😔
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Posted: 13 years ago
love the update
only maaneet can heal one another
the wounds
love elder decision
craving more
thnx
bless yu
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Posted: 13 years ago
they both r lost...dont know what to do...

waiting fro the elders decision...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
waiting for ur both ff update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi to All my Friends here
I am really sorry for being so late in giving the update but I was not feeling very well to even come to IF.
But I tried to come up and give this update.
I will try to update other FFs too as and when I have strenght to write.
This update is dedicated to my little sis here- Piya- who speialy requested me to give a quick update but I couldn't.
Hi Piggy- Sorry Dear, could not fulfill your request on time.
Thanks
--Anu
Part 52
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Elders decided that they were right, that Geet and Maan needed each other most at the moment and they knew how to proceed.

Mr.Handa came to Maan who was in Gym restless.

"Uncle aap"

Mr H:"Haan main'. Mujhe hee ana parda '.. khair'. Mujhe tumse aise umeed nahi thi"

"Uncle I know I was unable to fulfill my responsibility and I let you all down"

"Shut up Maan' Do not try to run away from your responsibility"

"Uncle I accept all your blame' all your punishments are acceptable to me"

"I can't believe and didn't expect this from you'. The time when Geet need you most you are here lost in your trouble' this is for what I was so proud of when I decided to give Geet to you"

"Uncle??? " "No Maan, just answer me now, do you want to back out from you responsibility or are you ready to face it'."

"Uncle, aap jante hain main kabhi apne responsibility se piche nahi jata"

"To phir abhi kyun, don't you know Geet is everyday just needing whom' don't you know that Maan'." And he left.

After an hour Maan slowly opens the door of Geet's room' she was in a devastated condition'. Due to what she had undergone and more because she had needed Maan most these days and his not turning up to her and 3days she had died each second'. but Maan had thought she was with her family to support her and that her family would not trust him anymore'.

Geet was lost when Maan came and sat beside her' he caressed her cheek from his palm'. Geet looked at him and hugged him tightly'. Her hug was tight with urge of not letting him go anywhere, of her missing him totally for 3 days. In normal situation she would have shown anger but now she just needed him' to feel him and be in his embrace.

He placed his hands on her back to bring her closer but Geet came even closer, held him tightly , her hand moving all over his back as to claim every part of him, not letting him go away. She placed her cheeks on his chest, feeling his heart beat, feeling him. She separated for a while only to feel his face from her both hands'. She was feeling each part of his face, his eyes, his nose, his lips'. Tears came to her eyes automatically which she did not realise' she just wanted to feel and claim Maan, get back every second of past three days when she needed him most and he was away'..

Now it hit Maan what a blunder he had done and was going to do my aloofing himself from her'.how selfish he had been to not realize how much she needed him'. He had needed her, was dying to be with her but he was punishing himself and missed thinking of what had Geet gone thru'.

He let her do whatever she wanted too' he had no right to interfere' he was all for her now'.

Geet kissed his chest from top of his shirt' ran her palms all around his front, from chest to his abdomen' she wanted her complete seconds away back'. Her present state was just concentrating on Maan, at that moment even what had happened to her wend a little behind'. Maan was too important for her'. he was her world'

She was not satisfied; she started unbuttoning his shirt, Maan closed his eyes realizing what a big mistake he had done' how he had underestimated her love'. All she was doing was a physical act but the feel was completely eternal'. She unbuttoned his whole shirt' now it was getting tough for controlling himself but he will not interfare today' it was his punishment'. Just getting tortured by her closeness, letting her claim him and not interfering her act by making his own move'.

Geet took out his shirt and threw it on the other side of bed and madly started kissing each bare part of his chest and over his vest'. She was madly kissing him, bitting him on his shoulders, on his neck' she claimed his lips '. She bit his lips as to demand him to open it' he did open it' she went inside his mouth and now Maan loosed himself'. They both went into the passionate kiss'..

Then there was aknock on the door'

"Geet Beta" mrs Handa called ' Maan hurridely took his shirt and started buttoning it turning his back to door'.

Geet's Mom entered'. She looked at Maan from back but said nothing'. she quietly kept the food and asked them to have luch in the room itself'.. No one wanted to interfare them'. In three days she had realized the depth of their love'.

"Mujhe kuch nahi khana" said Geet

By then Maan was done "Aunty app jaiye' main khila doonga isse" She smiled and left.

Maan brought the food near her, Geet pushed the plate in his hand'.

"App kyun nahi aaye in dino' Maine usse bilkul bhi apne aapko'. Phir bhi aapko agar lagta'" Maan immediately placed his palm on her mouth'.

"Geet yeh kaise baat ker rahee ho tum' aisee baat socho bhi mat"

"Per usne mujhe pura'" she could not speak ahead and tears started down to her cheeks.

"That was just an accident'. Bilkul nahi baat karogee uss bare me aur na sochogee'. Who sab sambhalna mera kaam hai'. Bass meri galti aur kamzoori thee that I was not there with you when you needed me most"

He paused and the "I am your culprit' per abb ek paal ke liye bhi nahi chorunga tumhe"

She looked at him in anger "aur khud ko kitni takleef dee mujhse dur rehker'.. app jante hain yeh main bilkul bardast nahi ker sakti, for bhi apne khud ko takleef dete hai aur mujhe bhi"

But the Man's eyes went on the bruise marks all over her neck, looked like it went down the neck and also on both hands'. He immediately checked her legs' and it had bruise and sratch mark' Geet held bottom of her pajam but Maan removed her hand and lifter her pajam upto knees and all over was scratch marks'. Marks were fresh

He now got very angry'. "What the hell is this Geet" She kept quite and turned as not to meet his angry gaze "damm it tell me what is this' can you explain this"

Tears formed in her eyes again "uske gandi nazar gayee thi in sab jagah'."

"aur tumne yeh sab' OMG Geet how can you'."

"Uss wajah se app mujhse 3 din dur rahe'."

"Tou' I was away from you'. Then do what ever you have to do here" he showed himself

"this is for you to claim' do whatever you can' how can you hurt yourself'. That's mine, who gave you right to hurt it"

e brought the food plate near her and made the bite for her... Geet was about to say no but his angry gaze was enough to let her know that he will not tolerate her playing around with her health or herself... so she just opened her mouth

After he had feeded her he started getting up to go out

"Maan sorry na'. kahan ja rahen hain'"

"Niche sabse baat kerne'. Tumpe 24 hrs apne nigranee me rakhne ka intezam kerne"

Next to be continued

Precap: Maan talks to elders

Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

awsome update maaneet moments are best but the most beautiful part is maan and geet father converstaion hw easily he said that think maan geet is needed u most eagerly waiting for next part i think maan tell to elders that vo maaneet ki shadi jald se jald kara de i hope ki sach ho jaye update soon n i m soo happy i m first to comment today 😊

Edited by sakshi04 - 13 years ago

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