OS: All It Takes Is Two Steps Forward

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Sexy Sobti

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome add me to your PM list

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sharneil92

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Posted: 13 years ago

OH MY GOSH! i would love it if this happens!!! damn. i'm drooling.

btw, i love the anti-climax in the end in the form of a smirking khushi saying, I LOVE YOU TOO LORD GOVERNOR!

ahahh!😆 EPIC! 👏

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Hanieya Rehman

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Posted: 13 years ago

AWESOME!!!!

What an update yaar! It seems you have actually done justice to the epi next monday because OBVOUSLY the CV's wouldn't show us a kiss but this...it might happen!!!

Thanx for the PM!

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Amina

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Posted: 13 years ago

awww☺️☺️☺️Dude if this comes true i am so dead..!!

amazing piece of writing yaar..loved it..!!

as weird as i might sound right now..but i have a feeling something like this is very likely to happen..!!😳

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

This was beautiful! Just as we would ALL wish it to be! IF ONLY...! Please PM me if you do one of these again! Thanks!

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..Winter_Soul..

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Posted: 13 years ago

she didn't sense his inner turmoil, she didn't sense his inner beasts fighting with each other, all she sensed was her security, her warmth, her home step away. she looked at him confused. didn't he want her? didn't he love her? he did if he had held on to her things like that for so long. then she recalled what she had said. "Yeh paap hai." she could have kicked herself for saying that. there were times when he had been rough with her when he hadnt shied away from being physically close to her to scare her away. all those times he had never stepped away. he would usually push her away. but this time he had stood back respecting her wishes, of how she wanted to take this relationship. he had shown that he trusted her judgement and it was time she showed the same.

You summed the whole story in these above lines. Honestly I don't know what to say. You bring out such an intense feel in your writing that I seem to be at loss of words at times. Your flow is so amazing and so consistent. Consistency in story is extremely crucial and you have an amazing consistency in your writing which makes it all the more beautiful. I love the story <3

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Mahi

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Posted: 13 years ago

woww😲.. that was indeed intense😳 hehe😆.. loved it dear😃.. beautiful OS👏

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Bristy

@the_rain

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Posted: 13 years ago

This doesn't get better than this!

I just came back home from Uni and logged in and what a soothing OS waiting for me after a hard day. Thanks a lot...🤗

You've written it beautifully, I specially liked the start when she automatically takes his bag and he follows her. I can almost imagine the scene...and the poolside scene..it was awesome, hope the real scene lives up to our expectation...(it would ofcourse, SaRun would make that sure 😛)

Thanksie dear for such a lovely OS, it made me forget the pain of working on a weekend...😃

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603840

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Posted: 13 years ago

haiii! so cute. i swear i'm blushing sooo bad you can even see it through my dark complexion :)

lovely

xxx

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Sakshi Kaul

@sushi-la

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I LOOOVE IIIT! eepp...now im getting so much more impatient for Monday to come! than you for for this wonderful post filled with great wishful thinking. I would really love for this to happe 😍

LOL. I love how Khushi says "I love you too Laad Governor" at the end 🤣 It would be hilarious is she actually did express her feelings to him like that in the show ultimately🤣

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