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Posted: 13 years ago

gr88 update shalini!!

so deli has showed her true face to abhay!!!
wen abhay wl come to knw abt d past, dat deli was d one who earlier killed pia!!
do continue soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superb update deli is so mean hope does'nt misunderstood pia
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Posted: 13 years ago
OHH tht was oozing hot.Abhiya romance rocked lke always & deli is such a bitch.She had 2 ruin Abhiya's romance & wht she did wid Abhay in forest was so cheap.I hope Pia dont misunderstood Abhay.Awesome update😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

<font color="#ff0000" size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">OHH tht was oozing hot.Abhiya romance rocked lke always & deli is such a bitch.She had 2 ruin Abhiya's romance & wht she did wid Abhay in forest was so cheap.I hope Pia dont misunderstood Abhay.Awesome update😳</font>

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: heena_mehta

gr88 update shalini!!

so deli has showed her true face to abhay!!!
wen abhay wl come to knw abt d past, dat deli was d one who earlier killed pia!!
do continue soon dear
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thank u heena!
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey that was an awesome update
deli is such an evil
i hope this won't create any misunderstandings between abhiya
thanks for the pm and do update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

<font color="#00CC00" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">hey that was an awesome update
deli is such an evil
i hope this won't create any misunderstandings between abhiya
thanks for the pm and do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
So Abhay knows Deli's truth
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Abhay looked up with tearful eyes.He couldn't believe that Deli,his bestest friend had such a dirty side.She tried to hold his wrist but he shoved her aside and turned on to his heels.Pia saw tears in his eyes.She was so mad at Deli for behaving so cheaply with him.She saw him running away from the place at supernatural speed.She quickly wore a heavy jacket on her and went down to go after him.She met Naina and told her about Deli's acts and it enraged Naina.Jeremy offered to walk with Pia till she reached Abhay 'cause Deli could vent out her anger in anyway.Jeremy took her on his shoulders and said,"Come sis lets go for a vampire ride!".She held on to him tightly and soon he stopped after a few kilometres."He's nearby,I can smell him",he said."Thank you so much!",Pia said.She was walking away then suddenly turned back."You know it feels so special to have an elder brother.I had Sam but he had his own selfish needs.But you're so nice,so caring.I wish I had a brother like you",she said."I am your brother Pia,be free to call me your bro",he said.Pia smiled and he gave her a brotherly hug."I've to go and help him,he's really depressed",she said.He smiled and went away.Pia folded her sleeves and took a deep breath.She went ahead quietly.She saw Abhay resting on the root of a huge banyan tree on the bank of a flowing river.His sea green shirt was totally wet.His arms were above his closed eyes.Pia understood that he had been swimming.She went down quietly and sat beside him holding his arm.He freed his folded arms and pulled her on his chest.He kissed her hair and asked,"I'm sorry".She said,"Why are you saying sorry?I know Deli approached you but you remained faithful to me.I'm proud of you".Abhay tightened his grip on her and bowed his head on her shoulders.She felt his cold wet flesh stick to her warm skin.She asked,"Are you hurt?".He nodded."Come lets get back to our room,you'll feel good",she said.He got up after some time and walked back with Pia at human pace.He had his arm around her protectively.Deli watched the duo from a distance."Get ready to die Pia,you're getting on my nerves",she said with a revengeful eye.Pia got back in half an hour and it was like nearly midnight.Abhay had a sad betrayed face.She tried a lot to cheer him up but he responded vaguely.She made him change and he wore a grey vest over grey shorts.He sat at the window looking at the moon with vague expressions.Deli's words were hurting him repeatedly so he closed his eyes.He opened his tensed blue eyes at her sweet lingering scent.He turned and saw her standing before the grand mirror combing her wet hair.She had a black ladies shirt on her and black shorts.Her pretty delicate hands were moving like magic on her hair as she applied some serum.Her dark eyes smeared with messed up kohl gave her that irrestible look.She was taking off her earings when he switched the lights off and made the dim nightlamps glow.She turned around and her wet hair stroke his face lovingly.He slowly removed her hair from his shoulder and touched her neck making her go weak.She came forward reducing the distance between their faces and he moved his fingers down her rosy cheeks and ultimately touched her lips with his passionate ones.The kiss started slowly but soon they sucked each other hungrily.Abhay moved her impatiently to the fluffy white cot and crashed in.She sat on his lap folding her legs around his waist while he unbuttoned her black shirt.He made her lie down on the pillow and removed her earing with his lips and then kissed her neck while holding her tightly.She gasped for breath and felt the air suffocating on her.She unwillingly pushed him and he fell down with a loud crash.A short crack occured on his knees but healed up instantly.Pia widened her eyes and said,"Oh God! I didn't mean to hurt you baby,I just couldn't breathe".He got up and Pia saw he had only his shorts on him."It's my fault,I went beyond my limits",he said.Pia hugged him and both fell down laughing heartily.She tore off from him and challenged him saying,"Catch me if you can!".Both started running around and throwing things to each other playfully.After some time,Abhay grabbed both her arms and locked her in his arms in a serious grip and pinned her to the wall.She went quiet all of a sudden.He came too close and she closed her eyes not in passion but in fear.He understood and freed her.She slided down and Abhay held her hands in concern."You're okay?",he asked."No,I'm frightened",she said."From me?",he asked.She embraced him and hid her face on his bare chest."I never wanted to tell you this but I have to.Deli is much more evil than what you saw.You know we had a past which you don't remember.We were together.But Deli stabbed me to death before you.You couldn't bear my pain so Naina erased your memory.And I'm very frightened that she'll hurt me again.I don't want to die Abhay,save me",she said crying.Abhay was hell shocked.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Very nice update...wishing u a very happy diwali to ... 😊
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