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Posted: 13 years ago

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Thank you friends for your comments. Most of you guessed the base reason right but the handling of the issue will be quite different. I am hoping you will like the next few chapters. Sorry for not responding to your comments but it is festival season and a lot to do. I will definitely try to respond next time. But each one of them means a lot so thanks once again.

Wishing all my friends a very Happy Diwali. Have a great and safe day and wish you and your family a year full of light, prosperity and happiness.

Chapter 90 – The Storm

Maan felt as his entire world was tumbling. His Mishti was crying and in pain….because of him….but what has he done? As much as he tried, his brain could not come up with a reason. Rishab turned him around – "Kya hua hai tum dodn ke beech…woh aise kyon ro rahi hai?"

Maan tried to answer but there was nothing he could say – "Mujhe sach mein nahin pata….mujhe kuch nahin samajh aa raha"

Nisha came forward – "Aap sab log niche chalo" She gave a smile to Maan – "Beta tum fikar mat karo…pata nahin kis baat pe yeh sab keh diya usne….I am sure she doesn't mean anything…let me talk to her and find out what's the matter."

Saying this Nisha went inside closing the door behind her.

Nisha went near the bed where Geet was lying still sobbing hard.

Nisha patted her hair gently – "Kya hua hai meri beti ko….hmmm….aise kyon ro rahi ho?"

Geet just got up and hugged her mom tight. Fresh sobs shook her body as she poured out her pain in her mother's arms.

Nisha let her cry for a bit. She continuously patted her head and back to calm her down. "Kya baat hai…please at least tell me what's wrong….you can tell me na"

Geet parted and hugged her knees. She was still crying hard. "I can't do it mummy….I can't marry….I feel so helpless….so incomplete today"

Nisha kept her hand on her shoulder. She was herself getting very teary seeing her daughter in so much pain but she controlled herself – "Aisa kyon bol rahi hai….kya hua?"

Geet grabbed Nisha tight – "I can never become a mother….I can never have kids mumma…..Doctor told me"

Saying this Geet just kept on crying while Nisha was stunned.

Nisha tried to calm her down and after a good half hour of crying Geet settled down a little. Nisha was worried about everyone downstairs. She laid her down and told her that she will be back with water.

Nisha went downstairs to find all sitting gloomily with Maan burning a hole with his continuous pacing on the floor. Rahul was trying to feed Pari a little bit who seemed totally disinterested in food. As she came down, everyone pounced on her.

Raj – "Itni der lagayi tumne Nisha…aakhir baat kya hai"

Nisha did not know what to say. "Woh…Raj….she is quite upset….hum sab baad mein baat karte hain...aaram se"

Raj kept her his hand on her shoulder – "please Nisha…ab tum bhi chupa rahi ho…please don't do it….batao kya hua hai….please"

Nisha hesitated – "Woh….woh…Doctor told her that she can not…she can not become….I mean she was told that she can not get pregnant"

Everyone drew their breath in at the news….only person who exhaled in fury was Maan – "What….What the hell that means….She has gone mad…..I will talk to her"

As he turned to go up, Nisha held his hand – "Maan…she is quite upset right now….she is feeling very down and incomplete….I don't think this is the right time."

She gulped at the thunderous expression on his Maan – "I know you two need to talk but I don't think now….just let her settle down a bit."

Maan calmed his anger and spoke patiently – "I am saying this for the last time….Firstly as a doctor and her fianc, there is nothing wrong with my Geet….nothing….I don't know from were this misunderstanding has crept in her mind but there is no iota of truth in it….Secondly, why will I lie to her about something like this….There are many ways of getting kids….If there was indeed a problem which is not, I can still get this happiness through other means. So there is no chance that I will lie and wager Geet for this or for anything else. Everything is meaningless for me without her. She is angry with me and I will pacify her"

Raj kept his hand on his shoulder – "It's ok Maan…we understand…tum jao….go and take care of my pagli beti"

Maan nodded and sprinted to Geet's room. He entered without knocking to find her lying on the bed with her face hidden in the pillow.

Maan sat down gently next to her on the bed. He leaned slightly and removed her hair strands falling on her face – "Mishti"

Geet sat up with a start – "Aap…mujhe aapse koi baat nahin karni….leave me alone"

Maan heart cringed in pain seeing her state but he still smiled slightly – "Thik hai mat baat karo Jaan…I will not talk about us at all….Lekin tum hi socho….I am such a well known Nobel laureate doctor….mera bhi thoda bahut ego to hoga na….after all a junior doctor caught something which I missed….toh as a doctor to tum mujhe bata sakti ho na that where did I go wrong."

Geet looked at him with anger – "Oh Please Maan…what are you trying to say….you didn't know about it….do you think I am a fool…haan"

Maan sighed -"Ab main kya boloon Geet….you should tell me this….now as far as I am know, there are some complications obviously because pregnancy involves hormonal changes and your glands are affected by nemocytis. I told you about it in detail in Mumbai itself in two hour long consult I had with you after your surgery. Ab if there is something new and I have missed it….Why don't you tell me exactly what happened in your consult today….hmmm"

Geet looked at Maan with incredulous eyes. She knew exactly what he was trying to convey her. "Aapne mujhse jhut nahin bola"

Maan – "Why Mishti….don't you trust me?"

Precap – Settling Calm
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Posted: 13 years ago
thank god!!! 😊i ws sooo upset wid d last updt..nw evrythng z ok...u really shockd us!!

btw awesome updt as always!!!🤗

wish u a very happy n safe diwali!!!😊
Edited by mishty_shona - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part dear...
happy diwali to u to dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Happy Diwali
loved the update...
oh god mein tho darr gayi ki kuch aur hi hai...
as he said probably the junior has got it wrong even if thats the case i am sure maan will come up with some solution for that...
waiting for the next eagerly...
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Posted: 13 years ago
luvd how maan didn't budge and went ahead to calm his mishti down.
he played his words very well. kudos👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesum update..
nw felt a litl bit relief
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Posted: 13 years ago
Yay
Maan ne pata iya
Im so happy
Geet ne toh dara hi diya tha 😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
hai


this is awesome and great
hope maa n settle this early
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing, loved it. Hope the news is false. continue soon.Happy Diwali.
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome upd...
thanx 4 d relief

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