FF:ARJUHI:Benaam Ek Rishta- CH6 Pg.51..05-11-11 - Page 34

Originally posted by: ...vibha...

awesome update
thanks for a long one
loving romit

Originally posted by: mysticlover

oye i totally loved it!cheerio😳
this frndship wud be fantastic! haina..evn i find it cute [evn if i say so myself lol]
romit and raj are so sweet!yh der super cute
continue soon!wil do...
thni 4 readin it n comnt

Originally posted by: Sp666

I'm so sorry for reading all this late! Didn't have the time to comment as I've been so busy! I have no internet connection and having to use my phone so once again sorry :(
About the updates..m they're brilliant! Especially the last SUPER LONG update! It was too good! Wow I totally love where the story line is headin :) continue soon

Originally posted by: AmnaIsh

Got back to IF and caught up on ur FF..wos wondering wer u disappeared off 2 lol .Super loved it Mish..cheers hun😳You's guys are doing a superb job..!..the way you're explaining the scenes, writing them..everything is fantastic.super duper great..!
good job ..! keep rocking
thnx 1ce agen 4 readin it n the sweet comnt...so glad managd 2 catch up wit it...x😳

Originally posted by: Ruky07

Missy and daya yes ruky😛😆Loved it ! Gosh wanna read more, super long update throughly enjoyed it.thnx hun
The description and interactions between them were very naturally displayed with writing daya ka kamal hai lol😉😆😆😆Romit he's becoming a pain for both of them lol, but they attacking back with a plan ;) hehe yup its war on bth sides lol😆
Loved the t-shirt and eating scene :) oh was suprised by arohi her character is different to what I was expecting. They friends well its a start.yh ikno wa u mean bt she's educated n noot 1 of dos quite shy obident knda quite..shes much more lively n bubbbly...yup atleast der frnds now lol😉
But Arjun that geezer needs to move on ! And he's a workaholic yup n whos beter den aro wit d hlp of romit ofc😉😆
The last dancing scene was awesome, nicely matched with the lyrcis. thnx hun..dnce description credit gos 2 daya n as 4 d song..wel das my job lol
soo... What have u gt in store for us ?hmmm ul soon find out😉

Sorry for the late comment gt really busy with school work :P swating away no problomo😉
Update sooon wil do...thnx 1ce agen 4 readin it n comnt.x
Cheerio :)

Originally posted by: Anupa28

Mishy Mishy Mishy...what a story...absolutely loving it.,..have read all the updates in one go...so much romance and intense passion...love the writing style and the apt choice of words and expression for every emotions...eagerly looking forward to the next update...muahhh

CHAPTER 5...x

Thehre hue paani mein kankar na maar saanwre

mann mein hulchul si mach jaayegi baanwre

thehre hue paani mein kankar na maar

tere liye hu main anjaani

mere liye hai tu begana

begaane ne anjaani ka

dard bhala kaisa pehchana

jo iss duniya ne na jaana

thehre hue paani mein kankar na maar saanwre

mann mein hulchul si mach jaayegi baanwre

thehre hue paani mein

sab phoolon ke hai deewane

kaaton se dil kaun lagaye

bhole raahi main hu kaata

kyon apna daaman uljhaaye

rab tujhko kaaton se bachaye

thehre hue paani mein kankar na maar saanwre

mann mein hulchul si mach jaayegi baanwre

thehre hue paani mein

timhi bataao kaise basegi

dil ke armaanon ki basti

khwaab adhure reh jaayenge

mit jaayegi inki hasti

chalti nahi hai ret pe kashti

thehre hue paani mein kankar na maar saanwre

mann mein hulchul si mach jaayegi baanwre

thehre hue paani mein

Hearing the sound of the applause brought me out of my trance and into the real world. Quickly getting out of Arjun's embrace I tried to compose myself without any luck though. As I glanced up at our audience whom we have seemed to be entertaining for god knows how long, I felt myself go red all over... now why isn't this surprising me huh...God these are the times you just wish the earth would open and swallow you whole, anything to make myself disappear and save self from any more embarrassment.

Arohi not taking a risk of glancing up again makes her self to plaster on a fake smile just so not to look rude while everyone praised their dance. Of course Romit did not and wouldn't ever dare miss a moment to pull their legs butted in. 'kya Bro...Bhabhi..kya mast dance kiya..ek dum dil khol ke...wah mazah aagaya'. 'waise Bhau aapki nazar toh Bhabhi ke chehre se toh hatatich nahi thi kyu...' 'aue bhabhi aap...aap toh bro ke khwaboon mein aise dhobi ke apne sab audience ko bhool gayi...ek dum hero, heroine mafik'. 'Bilkul barobar bola re Romit' Sana [guest] chirped in 'kya dono ne dance kiya..sach mein dono saath mein kitne pyare lag rahe the'. Next Arjun spoke up [guest] 'Haan haan bilkul!! Waise bhi woh kya kehte hain...Rab ne bana di Jodi!!' everyone looked at the two 'love birds' in awe whilst Arjuhi blushed profusely and rather wished for something else . Soon after all the guests left but not without teasing the couple the whole time, Arjuhi had no choice but to go along it all...

After the party Arohi and Arjun, both seemed to be lost in their own world. As Arohi retired to bed early, she couldn't help going scarlet all over again. The thought of Arjun so close, his warm breath was causing havoc, sending weird sensations throughout her body. She felt like there was some kind of explosion inside her when she felt Arjun's grip tighten around her waist. Causing unknown emotions to surface, emotions she never felt before, emotions she never knew existed. 'Man did that feel good...like I'm meant to be here...with him...in his arms...so close. It just felt so...so perfect...mann ne toh chaha keh bas waqt yahan hi tham jaye' she thought dreamily. Uski ek chhuwan se jaaga yeh kaisa Ehsaas...pehle toh mehsus hui na mujhko aisi pyaas... Arohi kept on having flashbacks of their dance, as if her mind was set on replay. 'yeh mujhe kya ho gaya hai..kyun itna soch rahi hoon un ke bare mein...Romit ke ishtyle mein lagta hain mera bhi koi chemical locha ho gaya hai...of oh...I better stop thinking about him man, he's already confusing enough so I don't even want to go there. Plus he's only my friend' Arohi putting her hand on her temple thought irritatingly. 'And a sweet one too. Gosh that smile of his is infectious and his lips and oh those eyes that pull you towards him like a magnet in full force...there was some sort of gravitational pull towards him, which you simple cannot refuse nor avoid but to go towards it. Once you look into those deep eyes, you surely have no control over yourself...chah ke bhi nazar chura nahi sakte..na mumkin hai...pehle toh darr lagta tha nazar milane se. Abh toh aise lagta hai ke abh aur nahi...bas aaj toh un gehri lehron mein dhoobte hi jana hai..bina kisi darr ke..bina kisi jijak ke... yeh kaisa ehsaas hai...bhooj keh bhi nahi bhujhti..yeh kaisi pyaas hai...aaj ki raat mein aisa yeh kya nasha hai keh bin peeye dil behkne laga hai..' she sighed heavily, getting a dreamy look in her eyes once again

Gaalo ki laali dekh aaine mein

soch mein par gari main

aankhon me bhi yeh chamak kaisi

uljhan me par gayi main

mann se poochi tujhe hua hai kya...

tan ko jala rahi baat hai kya...

yeh mujhe aaj hua hai kya..

soch mein par gayi main...

ek raat mein mujhe hua hai kya..

saanson mein meetha ehsaas hai kya..

yeh kahan kho gayi tujhe pata hai kya..

dil se puchi main...

kyun lag raha hai sab naya..

yeh mujhe aaj hua hai kya..

sawaalon mein uljha reh gayi main...

On the other hand, Arjun feeling a little suffocated in that room so sitting outside in the swing in deep thoughts. Like Arohi even his thoughts were out of control today, contradicting his persona very much, he couldn't seem to take his mind of the events of the evening. Trying hard to fight against his wild thoughts. 'Yeh kaise jazbaat hain jo phir se meri zindagi mein chupke se laut rahe hain, jinhe mein kabhi uss ke liye mehsoos karta hai. Aaj woh Arohi...nahi yeh mein kya soch raha hoon...in ankahee jazbaatun par kabu pana utna hi mushkil hota hai jitna...jitna keh tab mushkil tha jab...jab woh mere paas thi...aise hi jaise Gauri...' Arjun stops his thought right there, clenching his fist tighter. Closing his eyes he moves his head up as if trying to take all his frustration out some how. This only leads his mind to wonder around freely...the flashbacks of Arohi in her simple yet elegant salwar kameez...the way her hair fell on her face acting as an obstruction to his view...damn one can easily feel themselves loosing their senses in her long beautiful locks. Dil ki dhadkan ko phir se kisi ne cher khani ki ho jaise...un dabe hue jazbaaton ko phir se kisine jagah diya ho jaise...un anderi aur sunsaan galliyun mein phir se roshini ki ek kiran dikhayi ho jaise...un bikhre huwe hue tukrun ko phir se zinda kar diya ho jaise...[[tried to write a full poem all by myself lol]].

Rather surprised and angry at his thoughts, he suddenly jolts up. 'Yeh kya ho raha hai!!!!' he roared while looking up, his face suddenly gone from slender with a sense ease to stiff..his face muscles contracting...veins slightly more visible as the blood passed through them at a much quicker pace...his eyes had a hint of roughness in them. Suddenly, moments of his past flash before his eyes...with every memory his anger shot up...every thought...every moment...everything coming back. Arjun gets off the swing and hits a pole. What the hell was he thinking...how could he let it go this far...

Dil ka dard ruk na payega,
Jo hui hulchul itefaak se bhi,
To ghamon ka paimana chhalak jayega

Mat de hawa dabi hui un chingaariyon ko,
Warna tera bhi daaman is aag se jal jayega

Kaid hai jo dariya in aankhon mein,
Mat de usko aur ashko ke moti,
Nahi to woh bhi bewajah beh jayega

Kaise bhool pauga woh beete hue pal,
Kaise mita pauga uski yaadein is dil se,
Jab usi ka hi ehsaas meri har saans se ayega

Yeh woh zakhm hai jo mile hai wafa ke badle,
Yeh woh tohfe hai jo uski nishaniyan hai,
Agar kahu usko bewafa to daag mohabbat pe lag jayega

Chala jauga mehfilon se tanhai mein
Aur phir dhoondhuga mehfilon ko hi tanhai mein,
Shayad yehi ek aakhri mukaam zindagi mein ayega

Kyun bichha ke baithu main nigaahe uski raahon mein,
Kyun karoo aaj bhi intezaar uske aane ka
Waqt woh bhi na raha to waqt yeh bhi chala jayega

Waqt woh bhi na raha to waqt yeh bhi chala jayega