Ss The Realizations. the end.. pg 19, 27th sept

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-Nafisa-

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Posted: 14 years ago

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for a moment I thought Aham was turning into a warewolf...🤪because of this

'Ahem ji'' you alright?'

'No I am not alright damn you Gopi..' he seethed. Gopi shuddered she then looked at his face closely and then his hands his legs.

'You hurt ahem ji?'

Ahem grunted.

like is hair growing out of places his face, ears, hands and legs...😆

My favourite line was this one ..."'Bas Gopi ganwar, give me a chance to prove that I am a good husband.. and.." You made this derogative word Ganwar into an endearment...👍🏼

Great job on the story.

Edited by Nafisa_blossoms - 14 years ago

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-Nafisa-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

Hey, enjoy this it's Gopi and Rashi at they best Ghawar moment. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=07l8Cp0EYvk

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kamarunnisa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#133

thank u all for the feed backs..

Nafisa thanks for the link i remember watching the scene.. hehe

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-Nafisa-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: kamy
thank u all for the feed backs..
Nafisa thanks for the link i remember watching the scene.. hehe

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swasthi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#135

Thanks for a super story of Ahem and his realisation of his love for Gopi.

The last update was so intense and stressful to cope with but well written. Expressing how he felt was very hard to come by for your Ahem but he finally had to let her know literally at the '11th hour'. She would have never known at all had he not told her.

As Anshu had asked for an epilogue - any chance of this showing his love for her???