Shabhay - A Love Story

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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG I'm back with another gay love story 🤣
Anyone who reads this will be thinking I have a screw loose 🤣
Okayy, so this is all thanks to Sara, my resident comedian on here (MaaneetLuverr) who came up with the idea. I will put a star next to the parts she inspired because I don't wanna take credit for her imagination. Even if it is a bit odd 🤣
& of course Iqra (Maaneet.Lover) who loooveesss gay love stories with her as a superwoman wife 🤣

This will posted in separate parts, cos theres so many funny scenes to add 🤣

*contains gay love so if offended for whatever reason, avoid.

P.S. I do write normal fanfics. I don't have a fetish for gay love 🤣
This is just random & comical. For my more serious work, I'll provide a link when I can be bothered too 🤣
LOL I'm joking, if you want a link just ask.

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They didn't know how, or where, or when, or why.
But they felt an attraction which neither could deny...

Part 1

Sara & Abhay's big mansion was undergoing some changes. So in mid-June, they found themselves staying at the Khandelwal mansion, which consisted of Shaan & his wife Iqra, who was a very good friend of Sara.

An excited Iqra opened the door to her friend & her husband.

"Sara, hey!" she said, stepping forward to greet her with a hug.

Abhay lurked awkwardly behind in the background when his dark eyes collided with dark brown ones.
Shaan stood behind Iqra, mesmerised by the connection he felt when he looked into those dark eyes...

Sara stepped inside, & turned back to gesture to Abhay to come inside, who stepped in with the suitcases.

The first thing Shaan noticed about him were his killer cheekbones.

Oh wow, what a face... he thought. Dekho chand aaya, chand nazar aaya...

"Shaan?"

He was snapped out of his admiring by Iqra.

"Can you show Abhay the bathroom?"

Abhay's eyes rested on the tall figure that was Shaan & he took in his masculine features, feeling a warm feeling inside.

Shaan walked up the stairs, aware that the new object of his affections was behind him made him extremely nervous.

They stopped before the bathroom, a silence lingering between them.

"Um... here it is," Shaan mumbled.

"Thanks," Abhay said, stealing a glance at him.

Shaan rushed to his room quickly & left the door ajar, taking deep breaths. He grabbed a towel, wrapped it around him like a dupatta & talked to himself in front of the mirror.

"Shaan. Be cool, dude. So he's hot. But control yourself! Act like you're not fazed."

Shaan got lost in his thoughts of Abhay & began spinning around the room, humming 'Ek Ladka Ko Dekha'

* The dupatta whipped around with him, & as Shaan came to a slow stop in his spinning with his eyes closed, it gently glided over Abhay's chiselled face.

Abhay was lost in the moment & mesmerised. He grabbed the towel quickly, causing Shaan to stop dancing & turn back.

He gasped as he realised his towel was in Abhay's hands & looked away, feeling ashamed whilst still holding onto a small piece of his towel firmly.

Abhay loved the blush that appeared on Shaan's cheeks & smiled at the sight.

* "Mujhe jaane do," Shaan whispered.

"Nahin jaane doonga"

"Koi aajayega"

"Aane do"

"Koi dekh lega"

"Dekhne do"

"Aap chahte kya hain?"

The last sentence provoked something within Abhay. He stepped closer to Shaan, whispering gently in his ear.

"Mein chahta hoon kay... tum mere saath... gay hojao."

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Coming up: * 'Abhay reached up to fix the light bulb... but he lost his balance & found himself mid-air...'

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Posted: 14 years ago
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L M EFFIN A O
🤣 🤣
ah foz ur updates are capable of almost making me wet my bed LMAAAOOO 🤣
For the future I have learned to always go to the toilet before reading any of ur os's
🤣
what can I say
I loved this
Those dialogues KILLED me man! 🤣
THE WAY SHAAN WRAPPED THE TOWEL AROUND HIMSELF *DEAD*
Update the next parts soon!!!!
🤣🤣
Edited by Maaneet.Lover - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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LMFAOO I'm already loving it🤣🤣
last part left me in stitches
Hahaha shaan going to the bathroom to get a towel to wrap around him🤣🤣
Loool the famous dialogues🤣
Continue soon foz!!! <333
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aaah this Story brings back precious memories🤣🤣

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