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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
loved it...
waiting 4 the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thanks to All of you for your encouragement buddies. You don't know what it means to you.

Keep encouraging

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Thanks Anu
Part 6

Hum toh bus unhike liye jeethe hai par wo aaj bhi humse bekhabar humse rukhe rukhe rehthe hai

kya galthi hui thi humse jo unhone hume khud se begana kar diya ..ek hi pal mein jism se ruh ko alag kar diya

Har pal bus issi hasrat mein jeethe hai k kaash unki ek pyar bari nazar hume mil jaaye...unke muskurathe hue chehre ka ek mehez deedar hume mil jaaye... hum unke hokar bhi unke na ho paaye aur wo beganee hokar bhi humare dil mein samagaye... naajane wo din kab aayega jab wo hume apnaayenge... issi aass mein hum zindagi ka boj utharahe hai...chahat k do pal bhi agar hum aapke saath bita paaye toh unhi yaado k saath haste haste aapki mohabbat mein fanna ho jaayenge par kabhi bhi aapke alawa kisi aur ka khayal apne dil mein aane nahi denge...kaash aap kabhi humare ho paate toh hum iss jahah k sabse kismatwale maane jaate... bus aapka intezaar hi humari zindagi ka makasad hai... ye intezaar humari aakhiri saas tak kayam rahega...aap mano ya na mano hum bus aaphi k the aur bus aahike rahenge

-- Piya

Geet locked herself in room'. Rano, Mohinder, Brij and Nandini all tried' but she did not open.

Rano:"Geet beta' teri marzi ke bina kuch nahi hoga beta'aise darwaza band mat kar"

Brij :"Geet come on open the door or I am gonna break it"

Geet was very hurt that her family did not trust her and are forcing her into something''

Maan on the other hand is also upset with whatever happened'.. "why the hell did she come behind me' na woh mere piche piche aate na main apne aapa khota'.. this girl always create mess"

Maan(ST):" you must have controlled yourself Maan ' kyun uske samne behak jata hai'. Ek raat ke to baat thee, you must have controlled'."

Everyone in Geet's house is marching quietly until Geet opens the door'.

Rano brings a food plate immediately to Geet and shows eyes to Brij to say nothing'.

Rano:"le kha le'. Bhool ja jo hua'. Chad na'"

Mohinder:"beta you are getting us wrong'"

Rano:"bass ho gaya na.. khana tak nahi khane doge kya isse"

Then after Geet was done Mohinder followed her'."mujhe kisi se koi baat nahi kernee.. you all don't trust me"

Mohinder:"it is not that way beta' we trust you and Maan both, per tere shadi hum uss karan se nahi kisis aur karan se kerwana chate hain'. Brij ne jo karan mujhe bataya' tere khushi ke liye'. We just want a you settled with someone who can take care of you like princess not with money but heart'. "

"I am happy' I don't want to marry" "Puranee baton ko chor aage badna seekh beta'. Don't kill yourself like this' unless you say yes to the proposal we will not go ahead'. Give it a thought beta'."

Geet didn't understand what her dad meant'. But then Brij came' she turned her face to other side' he was the one to bring this marriage thing up' she was really upset with him' how could he do so

Brij kept his hand on her shoulder "naraz hai bohut'.pagli tujhpe bharosa nahi karoonga main" She jerked him and turned more away'

"sare nakhre hamare liye rakha hai'. Kuch usse kyun nahi dikhatee jiske liye yeh sanyas rakha hai"

"main kisi ke liye kuch nahi ker rahee' I just don't want to marry and that's it"

"Do you think I am a blind or have no mind'. Manane gayee than a usse wahan'You met him after what more than 2 yrs right aur phir bhi janab ko teri kisi baat se narazgee ho gaayee thee' am I right'. Aur tu bhagee chalee gayee usse manane' right"

"aap kya bol rahen hain' I am not getting, I simply don't want to marry"

"don't want to marry and then what, devote your life to someone who treat you like a jerk'.."

"aisa kuch nahi hai Veerjii ' mujhe kisi se shadi nahi kernee'. Unse bhi nahi.. bass"

"unse bhi nahi'. As if he is coming to propose you'. don't fool yourself'. By the way, kiss baat pe naraz hue the janab"

"mujhe kabhi pata chala hai kya' bass naraz the'. Veerji mujhe shadi nahi kernee hai' please veerji maan jao na' main bohut khush hoon"

"Nahi' kal jo hua abb aur nahi'. Bohut manmanee ker lee usne tere saath aur tune bhi aabb bohut ker liya'. I am not going to let you waste you life for someone who keeps treating you like waste'. Meri behan ko ek se ek pyar kerne wala milega' I will find a boy for you jo tujhe palkon pe bitha ke rakhega"

Brij leaves from there telling her his decision'.. Tears flowed down her eyes' till now it was she alone taking all the pain from his side but now her family was getting involved'. She can not even imagine marrying to anyone, giving herself to anyone, she will die'. Living alone was best option'. "Maa-aan" she cried helplessly in pain, she was restless, wanted to tear everything' it was badly hurting. "I don't know why I'"

Mohinder got a call from Maan: "uncle bass ek galatphahmi thee'. Kyun usse shadi ke liye force ker rahe hain' meri wajah se koi force ho"

Mohinder explained him that it was not for that but just they needed to marry her' "bete aap chinta nahi Karen'. Bass ladki hai shadi kernee hai to bass'." He cut the call

Brij asked who it was and hearimg Maan's name "kayar kahin ka" came out from Brij's mouth'.

They started looking for boy for Geet'. After Brij's talk she could not say no but started rejecting all the boys' as Dadima also visited them frequently she too came too know that they are looking for match for Geet and she keeps rejecting them. Brij didn't want her to know but Rano told her and also asked help for finding a nice match'.

So she too started looking for a proper match'. It was then that Maan realized that they were seriously looking for the match' he didn't like it, but he knew somewhere Geet will not be ready' then one day Dadima brought pictures of some boys and she was discussing it with Annie'

Maan came just in "yeh kya hai'." He took some profile "yeh kya Dadima' abhi Annie kee Shadi nahi kernee mujhe'"

"Yeh Annie ke liye nahi, Geet ke liye hai'. Maan tub hi apna idea de"

It hit Maan badly, profiles dropped from his hand'. "Geet kee Shadi' are they serious"

"Aur Geet" came out from his mouth

"Usse mana lega Brij" Maan left for his room'. He could not believe Geet will marry "No she will not, I know that"

He immediately left for the Gym, he could not tolerate' kept torturing himself for long'. His night was sleepless'. The thought that Geet can be someone else's was unbearable to him.

Then the process goes on and Dadima also gets involved and the news keep coming up to Maan'. His restlessness is increasing' missing office, frequent torture to self in Gym'. He cannot himself justify his act to his own self'.

Geet on the other hand became emotionally numb'. kind of blank' let them do what they want to do

One day when Dadima said :"Geet to abb koi rishta dekhtee bhi nahi'. Kaha jo sabko pasand ho wahi Karen' shayad woh samajh gayee hai ghar wale uska bhala hee chate hain'. Brij keh raha tha aisa ladka hai uske dhyan me jo Geet ka bhoot khyal rakhega and he is sure Geet will be happy with him"

"what"

Maan went to his room, not sure what to do'."yeh kya ho raha hai mujhe' I just hate her' how can she even trouble me like this'. Kyun pareshan hoon main in sabse' I just hate that girl'" and he threw everything here and there in his restlessness'.

His night became sleepless' now Dadima got worried not knowing what was troubling Maan' his behavior became towards himself and everyone became erratic.

This news also reached Geet as when Dadima would come she would pour her trouble to Rano, not knowing the cause'. Brij hated the fact that Geet knew Maan was disturbed, everything was going so well, he was not in favor of involving Dadima in this whole marriage stuff but Rano had leaked the news and now all this'. He wanted to fix things fast before it got out of control

Geet was now more restless'. She had compromised for herself but Maan was so much troubled'. She could not bear it'. It was hurting her' his condition was giving her unbearable pain'. Sometime she felt like leaving everything and go to him' console him' not caring at all what he will say'. But her family's love binded her legs'. One side their immense love and other side his hatred but he was in trouble'. She was getting tore apart'..

"who meri wajah se pareshan hain' mujhe pata hai"

Next day Brij announced that he had talked to Yash and he is a good friend of Geet and will take care of Geet and that he was sure he will keep Geet happy as he have seen them together enjoying. They did not need Geet's approval for this and proceed by calling their family for the talk.

Next to be continued

Part 7

Precap: Yash or Maan???

Please let me dears how I am going... all your suggestions are very very welcome
--Anu
Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful update
hope now atleast maan undersatnd his feeling
pls continue can't wait for next part
Edited by sweet mamtha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks Di u included my poetry in this beautiful update
Hmm... I like brij he is a good bro he understands that his sis is actually wasting her life due to that jerk..yes piggy does not like this Maan he is a coward what does he want from geet
he thinks that he hates her...he does not like her presence then fine na let her get settled with someone who will realize her importance in his life why r u getting so restless...
poor geet...maan bechain hai sunkar khud pareshan baithi hai
Piggy ka suggession sunlo geet maan does not deserve u... u r a gem listen to your family forget that stupid
A poem for explaining Maan's restlessness
" Nafrat k aag mein jal raha hoon
Har jazbaat kar ehsaas ko bhula chuka hoon
Uski jhalak se bhi takleef hothi hai
Har hawa ka jhoka jo usse chukar gusre uss jhoke se bhi nafrat hothi hai
Barso ki khwahish thi k wo mujhse dur ho jaaye
Toh phir kyun uske mehez dur hojaane k baat se dil se aah nikal rahi hai
Ek aawaz chheek cheek kar keh rahi hai rok lo usse rok lo usse
Aakhir kya lagthi hai wo meri...humare beech ye kaunsa anjaana rishta hai
Kaash main kabhi ye samaj paata toh shayad zindagi ki iss uljan ko suljha pata"
love u Di
urs -Piya (Piggy)
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely part dear
so maan still hate her
cant he think about his feelings
hope in next update
dadimaa say about his feelings to her
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Posted: 13 years ago
the update was awesome dear

and wht the hell is wrong with maaan
can't he differentiate the difference between hate and love?

continue soon dear

and let me say u r going pretty well
all the best for the rest of the story dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
stupid maan singh khurana though the update was awesome u know what i am in luv with your ff can we have one more update please
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww loved it
i seriously want to slap maan
god these two are big idiots hopelessly in love with each other
but now yash
i think brij has seriously lost it
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Posted: 13 years ago
brij is the best bro geet can have...

he understands everything n is trying his best to make her happy...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
even i was angry on brij but now understood y he did that...
sach mein brij teek kehtha hain kayar hain woh...
opps yash...not sure how maan is gonna react now
waiting for the next eagerly

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