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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry Sorry Anu...Kaan pakad ke sorry yaar
work, kids, festivals, Diwali...all just taking a toll on me so sucha late response.
Update was very very good. I am glad she said no intially. But I don't like how numb she has got. Only positive was that Maan is feeling restless. But it is heights that instead of accepting his feelings he is still blaming it on ehr and on the other side she knows he is in pain because of her.
Sach mein yaar...this is love at the deepest level.
Trully awesome.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Sorry Sorry Anu...Kaan pakad ke sorry yaar

work, kids, festivals, Diwali...all just taking a toll on me so sucha late response.
Update was very very good. I am glad she said no intially. But I don't like how numb she has got. Only positive was that Maan is feeling restless. But it is heights that instead of accepting his feelings he is still blaming it on ehr and on the other side she knows he is in pain because of her.
Sach mein yaar...this is love at the deepest level.
Trully awesome.

Was waiting for your comment dear... thanks for coming and doing so at last...
I understand... its a busy time Dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi All ' Jazz question

Why Geet love Maan so much

My POV

Geet and Maan were friends when he broke' the situation changed him but Geet felt deeply for his change and the pain he was going'. He used to be in pain of lose, not telling anyone anything but he was struggling'. Geet wanted to console him but was not getting any chance' he did not give her' but staying in same house seeing someone change for some sad cause and struggling to get out can take you heart away' this must have happened to Geet when she fell for him'.

They stayed in same house at very vulnerable age where you don't think from mind'. Then maan's personality, his hard work, dedication must all have contributed and she kept on falling into the pool of her feelings which went deep inside'

Then a kind of opposite reaction'. He threw her away, she knew there was a reason but did not knew' she felt there was pain' so tried to come close' falling even more for him'.

These are the reason I can justify of why she loves him so much'.. Anyways crazy love like this never needs a reason' she just loves him'.

Hope I am at least little successful in explaining'

Part 7

Nafrat k aag mein jal raha hoon

Har jazbaat kar ehsaas ko bhula chuka hoon

Uski jhalak se bhi takleef hothi hai

Har hawa ka jhoka jo usse chukar gusre uss jhoke se bhi nafrat hothi hai

Barso ki khwahish thi k wo mujhse dur ho jaaye

Toh phir kyun uske mehez dur hojaane k baat se dil se aah nikal rahi hai

Ek aawaz chheek cheek kar keh rahi hai rok lo usse rok lo usse

Aakhir kya lagthi hai wo meri...humare beech ye kaunsa anjaana rishta hai

Kaash main kabhi ye samaj paata toh shayad zindagi ki iss uljan ko suljha pata

By Piya-
Next day Brij announced that he had talked to Yash and he is a good friend of Geet and will take care of Geet and that he was sure he will keep Geet happy as he have seen them together enjoying. They did not need Geet's approval for this and proceed by calling their family for the talk.

Yash was all confused, he very well knew Geet had deep feeling for someone else but Brij somehow convince him to do it all for Geet' he got ready but did not have the positive feeling for all this'. He feared loosing his best friend

Geet let them do whatever they did' she was not thinking about herself now, her life is anyways going to be ruined but she can not go against her family when all they are doing is for her' But her all concern was Maan' he was so much trouble and she deeply felt it was all due to her'

Maan in his room after being continuously tormented by the thought: "no it cannot go on this way' kya ho raha hai mujhe... what am I doing'. Why can't I bear her being someone else's' kyun pareshan ho itna main'"

Maan:"No, whatever is happening is all wrong'.. I can't let my self bear this for life long'. Just need to funish this up'.. "

He sat still for a while

"Whatever I am going to do is not wrong, what they are doing is all wrong'. Uske liye bhi to galat hai' she is not happy too'. Who kisi aur he saath'No'. it's wrong I know "

"I am going to finish it up all, today' just finish this all stuff, whatever it takes'."

Maan was getting down for his mission when he saw Dadima all set to leave somewhere'.

"Are you going somewhere'."

Dadima:"yes to Geet's house' today they are finalizing her marriage with Yash"

"What???? And who's this Yash??? "

"Geet's best friend'."

"Ohhh really'. Chaliye main aapko le chalta hoon'"

And he made Dadima sit with him' he was now more determined to do whatever he was going to do today'. Finish the whole marriage drama going on for long'.. Whatever it takes him to do'.

Then after driving a little far "Dadima how do you like Geet'. Aapko kaisee lagtee hai who'"

Dadima: "Mujhe to who bohut he pasand hai' bohut hee achchee ladkee hai"

The reached Geet's house' Geet was sitting like a statue within her family and Yash and his family's. Yash felt uncomfortable too.

Then Maan enters with his Dadima' Dadima smiled and took her seat but seeing Maan there everyone was surprised'. Especially Brij and Mohinder'. Geet was shocked and surprised' she involuntary immediately stood up from her seat'. She had been dying to see him, know how he was but seing him she knew he was not at all fine'. She felt pain'

Yash saw them both'. Seeing Geet's reaction on seeing Maan he somwhwere got idea that this is Geet's invisible BF' Geet face could say it all'.

Maan knew today his ego is going to break into thousand pieces but whatever it takes he have to do what he have decided'. Maan Singh Khurana can not lose'

He directly looked into Geet's eyes who was looking at him already'. He came near her and and stood directly infront of her'.

"Geet will you marry me???? " Everyone there was shocked and surprised except Yash who thought it was right'. Others could not believe their ears' Geet stubmbled'. She could not even imagine this to coming up in her weirdest of dream' she knew he hated him' she collected herself and got strainght'. "Geet jawab do will you marry me??? "

But Geet didn't answer anything' she was completely in complete shock' he hated her then why this

Dadima:"Maan yeh aap kya keh rahe hain'. Yahan Geet ka rishta aaya hua hai aur aap'"

"Main aapka bhi permission lunga Dadima' per mujhe Geet ka jawab chahiye pehle'."

Geet looked ant Brij and Mohinder and left from their'' Maan could not believe how could she do this, not answer him and go away from there'. But he will not give up in middle of any task, he had taken the descision and he will complete it'. Whatever it takes

Brij came forward but before he could say anything "tou tumne apnee behan ko sulee pe chardhane ka soch hee liya hai Brij'"

"tou tumne kya socha hai Maan kee main usse jindagee bhar tumharee rahon me paken bichaker tumhara intezar kerne eke liye chor doon aur tum usse bass apne tewar dekhate rahoo'. "

"do you really think main tewar dikha raha hoon'. I am asking her if she will marry me aur not'." He turned to Mohinder "Uncle, main kuch galat ker raha hoon kya'. Kuch choree chupe ker rahan hoon' nahi na' app sabke samne Geet ko propose ker rahan hoon' then what ever you all decided"

Mohinder:"bete per yun achanak'." "mujhe in dino ehsas hua'. You achanak' isme meri kya galatee hai'. What is wrong with me that I don't deserve her' aap hee sochiye kya who kisis aur ke saath khush bhi rahege'." he had so many logics that Mohinder had to agree with him ( I am cutting short his logics)

Brij:"you have to promise tum usse dukh nahi pahuchaooge"

Maan now knew that he was on winning side but they did not knew his next step immediately after everyone agrees

"Maan Singh Khurana never turns back from the responsibility' if I take one I will fulfill it'"

Brij too knew Geet only wanted Maan and Maan looked changed so he decided to say yes and watch his behaviour for few days' this will make Geet most happy'.

"So I will call Geet'. You have to propose her in a manner to show us how much you want her"

Geet was in deep thought of why Maan was here with marriage proposal' she knew he was in pain, how can can she break his words'. it was 1st time he had come to her and how can she deny him'. Only she did not know why he was doing so

Brij called Geet and asked Maan to show how he could impress Geet

Maan came forward... he closed his eyes as he was going to do something that he would have never done but now loosing this would break it more

He held her hand :"Geet kya main tumhare layak nahi' kya main tumhe pasand nahi"

Geet kept looking at him'. She was not getting anything'she said nothing, was just lost'.

Maan the sat down on his knees and "Geet say something'. Will you marry me'"

Geet could not bear more' she could not see him bending this much "yes I will"

"Dadima Geet aapko pasand hain na'." Dadima who knew nothing' was very happy and placed her hand on both their head as blessing

The moment she said so, Maan held her hand and took her to the puja place'. No one knowing what he was upto'. They ran behind him'. Maan joined his hand to God, took the Sindur and placed it on Geet's Mang'.

Everyone was shocked'. This was not at all expected'. "Done'" Geet was completely blank on his act' what was this' "Geet take everyone's blessing and you are coming with me"

Next to be continued

Hope you are liking the flow... Please let me know your views...

I have randomly replied to some of you, could not reply to all

Edited by tellyme - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
i dont have a very good feeling about maan's prposal...it looks more like he is trying to soothe his ego and he is trying to win and show that he never loses...i have feeling that geet's condition is just gonna worsen and maan is going to continue his high handed behaviour...
hope i am proved wrong
keep writing
love u and ur ff
reva
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww

my mouth is still open
after reading the last lines


i just doubt maan's intentions
i mean itni jaldi shaadi?
continue soon dear
Edited by ana56 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Same here!! im with dreamy mystique... somethings not right about this proposal... he looks like he is trying to prove a point which even he doesn't know himself...
Geet won't be able to handle the situation hense make herself ill and more confused
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Posted: 13 years ago
hai

awesome and great...
maan married geet
so sudden...
piya- thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
r --------edited--------
Di this proposal is not right Maan is just satisfying his ego nothing else
he wants to proove that MSK can never lose
but Mr. Egoistic u have already lost yes just for ur satisfaction u want to ruin that angel's life
Sach kahu Di mujhe wo proposal nahi laga balke aisa lag raha tha jaise k maan geet ko order de raha ho
and Geet her uncondional love has to bow down in front of that jerk
that last scene was like😲😲😲 maang bhar diya aur keh diya she is coming with me
maan u will never understand her love nor her sacrifice and i bet the day u will realize it will b too late...
Thanks for including my poem Di I feel so blessed
Di pls next update U never know ka dijiyega and yes maine aapko kuch testimonials bheje hai pls accept them
love u always
- urs Piggy (Piya)
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
humazuban thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
im totaly shocked yaar pata nahii k aage maan kya kya karega 😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
its going good. always waiting for the nxt updt

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