Her complete submission-Maaneet FF-#1 lnk #2 - Page 30

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...

but cant see geet in this position...

waiting for next part..
thank u...

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Posted: 13 years ago
thnx 4 pm



this is interesting


pls continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
i simply love this ff...
continue writing sweetie
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for next update 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
I hope he proposes her quickly bforeher family any boy for her!
Loving the story soo much.soo much possesive maan and selflessly loving geet is creating awesome chemistry here.waiting for the next part,pls make it a lil early!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piya-

Sorry Di like button is not working
What does this Maanthink about himself if u don't have the courage to accept your feelings that doesn't mean u go on blaming that innocent soul. Poor Geet khud ki behen ki shadi mein khush nahi hai... Geet u leave that jerk yes he is a jerk saduu kahika u go and marry yash...
ok so my guess was partly right andi m sure shadi toh maan k saath hi hogi he can't see her with anyone else...
propose shayad kar bhi le par geet won't get his love atleast not now but Di piggy has a request future mein jab kabhi bhi maan ko apne feelings ka realization ho toh usse thoda tadpana zarur aur usse ye ehsaas bhi dilana k ussne geet k saath kitna bura kiya tha
Di again no song so a poem from my side I hope aapko pasand aaye
" Hum toh bus unhike liye jeethe hai par wo aaj bhi humse bekhabar humse rukhe rukhe rehthe hai
kya galthi hui thi humse jo unhone hume khud se begana kar diya ..ek hi pal mein jism se ruh ko alag kar diya
Har pal bus issi hasrat mein jeethe hai k kaash unki ek pyar bari nazar hume mil jaaye...unke muskurathe hue chehre ka ek mehez deedar hume mil jaaye... hum unke hokar bhi unke na ho paaye aur wo beganee hokar bhi humare dil mein samagaye... naajane wo din kab aayega jab wo hume apnaayenge... issi aass mein hum zindagi ka boj utharahe hai...chahat k do pal bhi agar hum aapke saath bita paaye toh unhi yaado k saath haste haste aapki mohabbat mein fanna ho jaayenge par kabhi bhi aapke alawa kisi aur ka khayal apne dil mein aane nahi denge...kaash aap kabhi humare ho paate toh hum iss jahah k sabse kismatwale maane jaate... bus aapka intezaar hi humari zindagi ka makasad hai... ye intezaar humari aakhiri saas tak kayam rahega...aap mano ya na mano hum bus aaphi k the aur bus aahike rahenge"
Okay Piggy knowa this was bakwas attempt from my side but still likne ka mood kiya kiya iss liye likh diya
continue soon Di
love-Piya( urs Piggy)

Loved it Piggy... wonderful
Aur haan tumhara shauk jarror pura hoga don't worry but it will take time...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks Dear so much...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

wow what a heartfelt update...

Maan was with her in the room but it is a girl's mistake. Only girl's mistake. She has to bear the brunt of what Maan asked her to do. So Unfair but so damn realistic. Even if he sleeps with every new girl around, his honor remains intact. And her own family thinks she is wrong even when she didn't do anything.
I did not like the fact that he left her there. Atleast out of respect for Handa's he should not have heard all those middle class etc statements from Mr Handa. That man loved him like a son.
I don't expect him to support Geet but he should not have let Mr Handa say such things about class etc. They took care of himwhen his dad died.
Frankly speaking, I don't care how restless he feels. I don't care if he comes and proposes. All I want is Geet to say no to marriage...to anyone. She can't marry to anybody other than Maan and she should not agree to marry Maan either as he portrays he hates her.
Let her threaten she will commit sucide...she will run away...whatever to convince her family.

I completely agree with you Dear...
I will try to justify things in next update... But whatever Maan did was wrong... you are 100% right
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
well now thats getting interesting...
wat next...will he let anyone marry geet but how can brij put the blame on geet...
cant wait for the next...
pl cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
Great part!!
Thanks for the Pm

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