Entangled, Broken.. Your Grief Kills Me..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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18/Oct/2011


Pride and Glory : A Broken Angel with no Wings, she enfolded him in her Arms deeply, her pain was like a Thunderclasps. Bright, Excruciating and Descended in Black Shadows. Her Heart ran away straightly to him and sank in the Ocean. He wanted to be her brace, and stand with her but his regrets for not to made her clam made him berserk perpetually.




Glory ( I Feel Comfort In Your Arms)


Devastation, tears tore her apart into bits
She ran away in his Arms and break herself in a sole strings
Her body was shaking from the core within
She can't make sense of all this, and the more she try, the weaker she get,
Her emotions were all running in circles thinking what should she do
A broken heart is what I feel; it leads to flowing tears
The sorrow from this anguish; gives way to deeper fears
Reality striked and she Lost his warm touch
She flee away from his sight like a Gale and didn't turned back
Suddenly she became alone in the Dark
Feeling of something that unexplainable ; with grievances and pain
Why did I hurt inside from losing you ?
Why did i need your shoulder to cry upon ?
Why did my Heart desire to Embrace you ?
My Soul seems empty when I Lost you for a seconds
Deep down inside she became empty
Pretending to be happy to escape the fears of her Heart
Wanted to burst out infront her; slightly the shackles bound her.




Pride ( I Can Feel Your Pain)


My Eyes were shattered once i saw your tears
The look on your face says it's all over
The look in your eyes says you want to burst out
The way you changed your avenue hurt me inside
Wanted to Embrace you In my Arms; but i was tied in chains
I wish i could wipe away your tears with my Lips
I wish i could take your boulevard of pain in my hands
I wish i could told you that everything will be Fine
I wish i could depict my sentiments which i grabs for You
Your glum stucked in my head thoughts of you swirling round
and round, like a tornado, i can feel you pulling me down,
This twisting, burning, breaking; this pain inside me,
aren't seem to stop; Its burning, breaking pain again and again
My mind is entangling, rushing in hustle and bustle
Without You nothing is Colorful; Without you I'm a Hollow Spirit
Your pain and tears making me bewildered and motionless,
Her tears stained on his Blue shirt, it wasn't simple
It was her Deep distress which made him subtle,
Now that you're gone, It's too dark at night
It's constantly cold, and nothing seems right
Now that you're gone; and have left me behind
I'm loosing my focus; and have already lost my mind.
Now that you're gone; nothing else will matter
Each day I'm without you; my heart won't cease to shatter
On my Lips there's Only your Name
My happiness lies within You.






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Posted: 13 years ago
#2
loved it as always..the poem is so good..
Each day I'm without you; my heart won't cease to shatter
On my Lips there's Only your Name
My happiness lies within You.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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You have amazing skills my dear!! 👏 pure brilliance!!

ever thought of publishing?

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Posted: 13 years ago
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My Eyes were shattered once i saw your tears
The look on your face says it's all over
The look in your eyes says you want to burst out
The way you changed your avenue hurt me inside
Wanted to Embrace you In my Arms; but i was tied in chains
I wish i could wipe away your tears with my Lips


OH M geee!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it as uaual sadaf😍 you are too good❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sadaf, loved the way you have explained both the ArHi's pov. Beautiful lines...brilliantly narrated by you.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing job...u r really in the talented writers list
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really really loved it...all the lines were beautiful and magical...superbly written👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely poem.. I was in ArHi dreamland while reading... 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Deep down inside she became empty
Pretending to be happy to escape the fears of her Heart

Now that you're gone; and have left me behind
I'm loosing my focus; and have already lost my mind.

😭
How did you manage to beautify this scene to this extent... my heart wanted to cry rivers at reading your poem. Beautiful darling! just mind blowing! ❤️

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