a dream o jai and bani romance

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi friends,

i think now dadi will come and mausi will also come and then roshini will come..

so, i think this time when jai goes for a meeting mausi will make sure that bani goes with jai alone.😳

then, they go to the hotel and then jai finishes his meeting the day itself and comes in the evening. jai will look at bani and think that.. mausi sent bani with me and i made her really lonely with my meetings. i should take her out.

so, they go for a ride and then they park the car near a park and just go walking in the park. then after few minutes the rain starts drizzling on and then our poor bani becomes wet and our jai also. they go in the shade of the tree and then bani is shivering with cold and jai looks at our wet bani and would want to hug her or comfort her but is not able to do so...

then they run to the car and now jai asks bani to sit next to him in the car in the front and then starts driving. but he keeps looking at our bani with his side looks and when ever our bani looks back tries moves his eyes away and agian glances at her... and all this while the beautiful song with good words that is always played for bani and jai is played... "jiya dhadak dhadak jaye...."

then, they reach home and first our gentleman gives way for bani to change her dress in the hotel room. so our bani goes to the washroom and changes her self into some warm clothes and then comes out then our jai goes in.. and now our bani has bent side ways and is wiping her hair... when suddenly jai comes from washroom shouting bani give me a towel and our shocked bani just rushes o stand straight ... which makes her hair go sweeping from one corner of jai's chest to the other side.. making jai more romantic and uncomfortable and they stay still and their eyes start speeking..

then after a while he says.. slowly ...bani.. towel ...i was asking for a towel ...i forgot to take it... then he takes the towel and goes in and our bani standing in front of the mirror is not able to look at herself with a feeling of guilt and shy.

then, jai comes and bani is just about to keep her bed down that mausi comes nocks the door and says bani beta .... so immediately bani keeps the pillow up on bed and opens the door.. then our jai says why is mausi here at this time....and mausi very curiously looks at them and says .... i had some bad dream and was feeling uneasy about both of you so came to see you... now i am fine and i will go tomorrow..i thought since it is a near place to our house so i came by car and was able to reach you both.

then, bani has now to sleep with jai on the bed ... because of mausi coming any time in the night......😛.... so she sleeps on the bed and now both are sleeping on the outer ward direction of the bed... and thinking of the thinkings that happended today in the park .. then in car and then in the room.. jai is feeling restless and our bani somewhat shy....

then, they sleep.... and morning sunrise and we see that ... bani is nicely sleeping on jai's chest and having good deep sleep...

now, our jai wakes up a little and opens his eyes to see bani sleeping on his chest... jai smiles to him self and again the song..."jiya dhadak dhadak jaye ..." plays .... then jai finds that its not bani but he has roled in the night towards her and she is sleeping in the same part of the bed where she was sleeping and that he is hugging her ....

so, he immediately tries to remove his hands but... then see the cute.... bani moving and then slowly removes his hands from below her head and sits beside bani and keeps looking at her....

jai is about to just pamper her on her cheek with his hand... as bani is sleeping so calmly and innocently... that he puts his palm on her cheek and then is about to remove when bani just turns on to his hand her whole face and sleeps cosily..... like a kid in her mothers arms....

jai... is feeling embarassed and smiling to himeslf... and then cutely looks at bani and remembers all that happened yesterday.. when mausi comes and nocks the door and bani suddenly gets up and hits jai's head ...

and says .. sorry mr. walia... and jai kind of pain expression says...its ok...you go open the door...

guys, i want you all to read this and say me was i good or bad at writing a romantic episode...

please do reply.....

thanks

rosesh.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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guys please post your views .....good or bad alll are accepted.... but please read and then post your view
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Amazing, really very cute. I'd like to see it in the serial. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#4
thanks for the people who read the review and said it was good...it was my first trial and ....thank you all for encouraging me...

thanks
rosesh
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Posted: 19 years ago
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it was really good .....hope u continue 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#6
Very cute! Are you Ekta or something?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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LOLZ! loved it ! IT was absoolutly FAB! cant wait fer next part! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#8
thanks to you all..... i am over excited. i love you all for the encoragement you show to me.

it was really the first time i am writing something. it was realy kind of you to give such good remarks.

thanks one and all for your encouragement.

yours loving
rosesh.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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fab ff plz cont soon 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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so cuteeeeeeeeeeeee please cont. soon

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