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Posted: 13 years ago

Dear friends this is the last part to my ff. I have really appreciated all your support and wonderful comments...Thank you guys and I love you all🤗


Part 25:


Morning at Khushi's home:

Khushi wakes up and goes to the living area...

Khushi hugs payal

Khushi: Good morning JiJi...

Payal: Bahut thak gayi ho na Khushi...kal raat bahut kaam kiya hoga...dher saari jalebiyaan banaayi hongi...

Khushi gets worried...

Khushi: Haan Jiji...lekin hum thake nahi...kal raat humne keh diya tha Anjaliji se ki hume ghar aan a tha jaldi toh kaan bilkul jyaada nahi tha...

Payal gets up and looks at her...upset...

Payal: Jhoot...Jhoot bolna kabse seekhliya tumne...Khushi ! aur who bhi mujhse apni jiji se ha...

Khushi gets shocked...and is crying

Khushi: Jiji...hum

Payal: mat kahon humme jiji...kal raat Anjaliji ka phone aaya tha...aur who kherahi thi ki who tumse poore din mili hi nahi...

Payal grabs Khushi's arm and says,

Payal: Kahaan thi tum kal raat...aur kiske saath thi...Khushi

Khushi is crying

Khushi: Nahi jiji...humne kuch galat nahin kiya hai...haan di humne aapse jhoot bola...hai lekin hum devi maiyya ki kasam khaate hai...ki humne kuch galat nahi kiya...humme maaf kar dijiye jiji...hum aapka dil dokhaan nahi chahte the...

Payal: toh kaho...kiske saath thi tum...bataaon...

Khushi is crying '.and finally gives up...

Khushi: Hum unke saath the...

Payal: Kaun...

Khushi: Aap jaanti hai unhe...wiping her tears...AAA..Arnavji...

Payal is shocked on hearing this...

Payal: Arnav Singh Raizada...nahi...yeh nahi ho sakta...tumhe pareshaan karta hai woh '..majboor kar raha hai tumhe...

Khushi: Nahi jiji...Arnavji humme pareshaan nahi karte...woh hum aapko kaise samjhaaye...

Payal: tum unse nahi milogi samjhi...

Khushi: hum who nahi kar sakte hai...jiji...

Payal: Kyon...thero...abhi hum rm Phone karte hai aur uss ASR ko sunaayenge

Khushi is shocked...Nahi jiji...

Payal calls RM and ask for ASR...Arnav picks it up...

Arnav: Hello..

Payal: dekhiye hum payal bol rahe hai...khushi ke jiji...aap apne aap ko kya samjhte hai...aap aise khushi ko baar baar pareshaan mat keejiye...pataa aap ki wajah se khushi ne humse pehli baar jhoot bola hai...kal raat aapki wajah se who poori raat ghar se baahar thi aur aap...ab dobara khushi ko pareshaan kiya na...toh hum kehe dete hai...Payal hangs up

Arnav is shocked and has a surprised reaction...like: "What the"

Khushi keeps her hand on her forehead and says..."hai devi maiyya...ab kya hoga"

Khushi: jiji...yeh aapne kya kaha...unhe itni buri tarah se suna diya...woh kya soch rahe honge...

Payal: chup bhaito tum...

Khushi: Jiji...hum aur arnavji...

Payal: kya...

Khushi: hum aur arnavji ek doosre se pyaar karte hai...

Payal has a plate in her hand that she just drops in shock...

Payal: Kya kaha...pyaar...mazaak kar rahi ho aur who bhi uss laad governor se

Payal is laughing so hard, but Khushi is crying...

Payal looks at Khushi...and stops laughing...

Payal: Khushi...toh sach hai...kaise..kab kahaan kyon?

Khushi : who sab hum nahi jaante di...ho gaya...

Payal: accha rona band karo...tumne itni badi baat mujhse chupaayi...kyon?

Khushi: di...humme mauka hi nahi mila...

Payal: pyaar karta hai who tumse...

Khushi: Bahu Jiji...kal humara janam din tha na...isliye unhone ek khaas jagaha par bulaaiya tha...

Jiji Arnavji...humse shaadi karna chahte hai...dekhiye...unhone anghooti bhi di hai humme...sunder hai na...

Payal: Bina amma aur babuji ki ijazhat liye tumne ha kardi...

Khushi: Nahi jiji...Arnavji apne parivaar waaalon se baat karnewale...hai aur kuch dino mein hamara haath maangne aa rahe hai...

Payal: Sach

Khushi and Payal hug each other...


At RM:

Arnav: Di, aap nani se Khushi ke baare mein baat karengi...

Di: Hum...aur nani se...bahut acche chote...itne din tak toh naani se jhagda karte the, ab unki madat chahiye...nahi...hum nani se koi bhi baat nahi karenge.

Arnav: di, please na mat kehna

Anjali: lekin kaise...woh toh tumhare liye ladkiyan dekh rahi... hai..

Arnav: Di, mein khushi ke bagair nahi rah sakta...I will die di...

Anjali: Nahi chote...aise nahi kehte...

Arnav: Di aap bhi ajeeb ho...aap hi ne toh kahaa tha ki jab who ladki mujhse door jaayegi toh meri saasein hi rukh jaayengi...Anjali laughs

Arnav: Di, I proposed to Khushi...and usne haan kehdiyaan hai..

Anjali: Kya...hum bahut khush hai...ki hamare chote ko sambhaal ne keliye ab koi aa gaya hain...

Anjali: hum baat karenge naani se theek hai...

Meanwhile Naani is looking for Arnav and she goes into his room...she isn't able to find him...she looks at his laptop and its open...

Nani: yeh chote bhi na...khud toh apni cheeze sambhaal nahi sakte...aur kise aur ne tod diya toh daat pad jaayegi...Nani goes to the laptop and takes it to close it and

She is shocked...to see Khushi's pictures on his screensaver...its everywhere...and she also finds a small picture of Khushi in his book...

Nani: yeh kya...khushi bitiya ki tasveer, chote ke laptop par...par chote toh unse har waqt jahagda karte rehte hai...toh yeh sab kya hai...

Nani hears Arnav come in...and she quickly leaves the laptop down...and hides the picture with her

Arnav: Nani aap yahaan kya kar rahi mere kamre mein...

Nani: hum aap hi se baat karne aaye hai...dekho chote hum tumhe kuch ladkiyon ki tasveerien dikhane aaye hai..

Arnav: Nani please...i am not interested...

Nani: Hum waada karte hai...ki inmese koi bhi ladki Khushi ki taraha nahi hai...aapko toh khushi jaisi pasand hi nahi hai na...

Nani looks at Arnav's reaction and has a smile on her face...

Arnav: Nahi Naani...woh

Nani: koi baat nahi chote...aap aayiye hamare saath...yeh dekhiye kitni sunder tasveerein...hain...

Arnav keeps looking at the picture and looks at Anjali...Arnav throws the pictures and yells...Bas Naani...

Nani: naahi chote, ab hum chup nahi rahenge, aapko hamri hi pasand ki ladki se shaaadi karni padegi..

Yeh ek aakhri tasveer nahi dekhenge...

Nani pulls out Khushi's picture...Anjali is shocked to look at it and has a smile on her face...

Arnav: meine kahaana nani...mujhe nahi dekhni hai...

Arnav turns around to nani with frustration... and is shocked to see Khushi in the picture...

Arnav: Khushi...

Nani: Haan yeh khushi betiya hi hai...pasand aayi...

Arnav smiles very shyly and runs and hugs his naani...

Naani has tears in her eyes and says,

Naani: Aaj hum bahut khush hai chote...aapki pasand ki daat deni padegi...hum khushi ko bahut pasand karte hai...toh kal hum khushi ke ghar jayenge unse rishta maangne...

Chote, kya khushi bitiya bhi aapko pasand karti hai...

Arnav: Nani, hum ek doosre se bahut pyaar karte hai...

Nani: toh theek hai...kal subah jayenge...hum sab

next morning at khushi's house:

bell rings...buaji opens the door...

Buaji: Hai re Nand kishore...

Nani: Namaste...kya hum andar aa sakte hai...

Buaji asks them to come in...Everyone from the RM family is present including akash and Mami. Pyal comes and greets them...She rushes in to tell Khushi...and Khushi is shocked that they didn't even inform...

Khushi: jiji hum toh tayaaar bhi nahi hai...

Khushi is getting dressed...

Outside Naani ask about Khushi...and khushi and payal come out...

Khushi and Arnav keep looking at each other...and are looking away...

Nani: ji hum yahaan achaanak aa gaye hai...aap ko bura toh nahi lagaa

Babuji: arre nahi...kahiye kuch kaam tha kya...

Nani: hum yahaan hamre chote ke liye...aapki khushi bitiya ka haat maangne aaye hai...

Babuji and everyone are shocked...

Nani: ghabraye mat...hum soch samajh ke hi kar rahe hai...hamare chote aapki khushi ko bahut pasand karte hai...aur jahaan tak khushi ka sawaal hai...aap hi unse pooch leejiye...

Babuji looks at khushii and walks to her...Khushi feels uncomfortable...

Babuji: tum iss rishte se khush ho bitiya...Khushi nods yes and runs away to her room and feels very happy...

Babuji: Hume iss rishte se koi dikkat nahi hai lekin...Payal khushi se badi hai aur hum chahte hai ki Payal ki shaadi pehle ho...

Naani looks at Payal...

Nani: hume payal bhi pasand hai...

Babuji and payal look shocked...

Nani: agar payal aur khushi dono ki shaadi ek hi din ho jaye toh aapko koi dikat nahi hogi na...

babuji is confused...and payal is wondering what is nani talking about...

Nani: Hum hamare doosre pote Akash keliye aapki payal ka hath maangne aaye hai...Akash aapke payal ko bahut pasand karte hai...aur yeh anjili bitiya me kahaan humse...

Akash looks at anjali and smiles...

The whole family is so excited and cant believe their ears.

Khushi is very happy for Payal and they both hug each other...


Raizada mansion:

Engagement preparation going on...in flair...both the dulhas are dressed in sherwani lookin smokin hot...

Payal and khushi's family come in and the 2 brides look absolutely stunning...

Everyone gather around in the living room...

Arnav comes down and looks at Khushi...and is mesmerized by her looks and her beauty...

Akash keeps looking at payal...Payal is very shy...

Ring ceremony starts...Akash puts the ring on Payal's finger and everyone claps...

Our hunk Arnav holds khushi's hand and places a ring on her finger and then he removes the chain from her neck and everyone is shocked . Arnav slowly takes the ring out the chain and puts that on her finger...Khushi smiles...

Arnav takes Khushi to the pool...and holds her in his arms and looks at the stars...

Arnav: Aaj tumhare amma aur babuji bahut khush honge na...

Khushi tears up...and hugs Arnav tightly...Arnav kisses her on her forehead...

Arnav: Marte dum tak pyaar karoonga tumse... "I will always love you khushi"

Khushi: Arnavji, aaj tak hum maan se aapke the...lekin aaj ke baad...tan se bhi hum aapke huye...

Arnav and Khushi kiss and screen freezes...

The End



Edited by shybabe - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

hayyyeee😛... main toh gayi😳😳😳

WOWWW👏👏👏
it was sooo cute😳
i loved it just simply loved it😃

Payal: Khushi...toh sach hai...kaise..kab kahaan kyon? 😆😆😆

hahahahahahaha..🤣 omg.. i laughed at this comment a lot😆.. KYON? hhahaa.. 😆why do people fall in love?🤔 haha.. payal is so funny🤣
im sad that you ended this ff.. please write some more parts😃.. where we see some cute and sweet moments of ArHi😉
please please😭.. just few.. i cant imagine my day without reading your ff😭
please update few more parts😳
but i would say that you are an incredible writer sweetie⭐️.. i love your creativity👏👏...
thanks a lot for the pm🤗
Edited by _mahi_ - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏👏👏 Amazing work hun! Luved the ending! great job!👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shy This Was A Very Beautiful FF. From Begining To End You Had Me Hooked. Great Ending. I Sugguest You Write Another One Soon. (:
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow what a beautiful ending for a perfect love story, thank u dear for the awesome story. We would be more glad if u could start another one soon.👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shy ji!
Man! how do you write so fast and so beautiful yaar!⭐️
I am so sorry jaan, everytime I sit to read this, either net problem or the site crashes!😡
And then I saw the last part, khatam bhi ho gaya dear?
Anyways, I am gonna finish😃 reading this today!

Part 25:
Bestest part, Khusi's photo as screensaver and photo in book?😍 Dude, caught the right spot! amazing imagination!❤️ aha! and Nani was being a little naughty I guess by showing other photos! 😈
A happy moment for Payash as well!⭐️
The last scene was so 😍
I love the last line where he shows her the stars!😍
great Job dear.👏
Off to read the other parts!
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!!! well...wen r u startin a new ff?? pm me wn u do :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey i was waiting for you updates everyday ... it was a v v beautiful ff ... i wish u start another one soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely ending! Just as it should be! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
HAAAYE! I have died and gone to heaven!
That was the most sweetest, romantic, cute, fantabulous, gorgeous, beautiful...I don't have any more words to describe how amazing this whole FF was!
From start to end there were so many twists and turns, cute romance and cliffhangers!
But in the end you produced such a lovely FF!
Keep writing Darling I love to read anything you write!
Thanks a lot for all the PM's and this lovely FF!

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