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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part 4
Part 5
oops!!! sorry yet maya introduction is not given right...

Maya is the main lead of this FF she is a 10 month old baby who is crawling well and trying to walk but she will stand by her own little legs by holding some thing...
In maya's dictonary mum...mum.. means muma and da.da.. means dady she don't know to speak much if she want's any thing she will cry badly
she's very adament if she want some thing she want to get it else she wont leave easily she will cry louder to get that...
she is maya very cute lovely and naughty prince of maan and geet...she is very precious in there life...

Maya's introduction over now

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Now
when maan enters geet room she's not there he confirmed that she 's not
there and entered her room to see his prince(Maya) .she's sleeping
peacefully cuddling her favourite teady she's very cute while sleeping.
.maan want to take her in his arms and kiss her cute face but he knows
very well its very hard to maker her sleep again if she wakes up so with
out disturbing her sleep he just rubbed her cheeks with his fingure but
our naughty maya wakes up but yet she didn't open her eyes but started
to rub her eyes maan immediately took his fingures from her cheeks and
patted her stomach to make her sleep but she about to cry he
immediately took her in his arms he felt the little hot while holding her.
he started to check her temperature by keeping his hand on her
forhead and her body yeah she got high temperature but its very slightly
high only but he don't want to take any chance that too about
his prince health

he searched for geet in all down rooms she's not there so he informed
to one servant about maya's health , asked him to inform geet and
rushed to hospital

yet geet remain is in maan's room floating in her past memories with his
maan about there first talking in the same room the very next evening
of there SR
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Flash back

Dadi urged maan to come back soon form office he as usual made some
lame excuse and came late than the time dadi insist he rushed to dadi's
room first to convince her for his late and returned to his room while
entering his room he notice some ones presence in the room he know that
she will be there his newly married wife who is combing her hair in
fornt of the mirror at a glance of her he stuck she's more beautiful yes
her beauty is increasing when ever he see her she remains more
beautiful than before...

Maan self thought: what happene to you maan she is same her beauty
remains same then why you thinking she is becoming more beauty
actually i seen her morning butyet i thinking she is more beautiful than
morning what happen to me

when her phone rings he stop thinking and very keen in listening to her
coversation over phone

she is very excited when she get call from riya

Geet: hi riya how are you i missed you a lot
Riya: dont talk to me
Geet: what happen to you sweety?
Riya: don't call me sweety ok
Geet:hey whats wrong common why you anger on me?
you got married with out informing me now asking what's wrong
hey Riya its in hurry dear i am not in mood to inform this to any one
OK leave all how you came to know about my marriage

just now i called chunny she told every thing about your marriage to me

then you came to know right at what situation my marriage is happen
am not at all interested in this marriage all happen sudden i it self wont
believe now that i got married

hmm yeah fine you are apologized due to those situation and also
am happy for you and also this made me more happy that's you are now
in Delhi ok then when is our next meet

any time you wish

now am in london came here to attend my cousin marriage so after two
weeks its ok for you

after two weeks i wont be here i will go back to Punjab i got admission
for my MBA in the near by college so i will go back ther

so you got permission from your husband and in-laws
no not yet
then how suddenly she got some other call so she's about to cut the call
sorry geet now an emergency call from my hubby if i didn't attend
he will replace me with some english girl (both giggled)
sorry... bye catch you latter...
saying this she cut the call

bye riya

all of sudden she noticed some one is staring at her she turned to see
but before that maan entered his room at straight he went to wash room
to freshen up...

his self thought:So she also don't like this marriage she's going to pursue
her higher studies any ways my problem is over i don't need to explain
her about my hesitation towards this marriage but dadi won't leave us

yet to be continued
precap: geet searches Maya..

continuation of part 5

sorry for the grammatical and spelling mistakes due to my limited knowledge...plzzz comment me with your negative comments too which will help me to improve...

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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago

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blue24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Its awesome..do continue soon and plz pm me.

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Tabinda Areeb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

maya is really sweet, a good mixture of both maan and geet

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Mounika sharma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Awesme part.waitng 4 next part.

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Monali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Its awesome..do continue soon and plz pm me.

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abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

awesome dear plz add me tto ur pm list
waiting for next part

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nai1311_ysp

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Maya is so cute...
waiting for long update...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: nai1311_ysp
Maya is so cute...
waiting for long update...

am also trying to put long update but unfortunately i cant put... today i try my level best to do so..

Edited by nishha - 13 years ago

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Durga

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

i loved it yaar ...awsome one ..do add me to ur pm list ...

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Part 5

continuation of the part 5

Maan self thought:So she also don't like this marriage she's going to pursue her higher studies any ways my problem is over i don't need to explain her about my hesitation towards this marriage but dadi won't leave us..
maan's self thought is break by dadi's voice dadi called maaneet to the dinning table for dinner

maan came late after completing his bath geet and dadi waiting for him in the dinning table they are chit chating some thing very busily maan noticed dadi is very happy today. he didn't find dadi happy like this after his parents.geet bring this happiness in dadi's face again.

geet served food to both and she too served for herself and ate through out the dinner no one speak latter dadi decided to break the silence so she pose some questions to geet regarding her village friends and family
geet just answer to her questions.maan found that she's very comfortable with dadi but his presence in the table made her feel very uncomfortable for her to speak with dadi. so he decided to leave the place soon and he also want to clear more things with geet so he waited for her in his bed room...

Geet entered the room after a long time thinking that he might have slept now but she's very surprised to see him working in his laptop in his room..she didn't speak any thing and don't want to give any reaction in front of him so she just went to wash room and scold him for a while..

why he is still wake up
Kadoos, yet working.. now how i will sleep in his presence
she blame her self for being here early..

after a while she came out and seen he's sincerely working and decided to sleep beside him with out disturbing him but he is not working just pretending as working he's is waiting for her.he don't know how to speak how to start its all very new experience to him

when she's about to slip in bed he stop her "Ge...Geet...i want to speak "

she got fear and thinking#what he going to speak now...#(with out looking at him she said) am sorry am very tired now.. will speak in morning she don't want to speak to him that too in night she had a fear that he will take the advantage of being husband.so she just want to avoid the conversation

But he didn't give up geet only for few minutes i wont take more than that please listen to me
she don't want to speak any more to him so she search for excuse to avoid him

ji vo...vo...dadi maa asked me keep water bottle in her room i forget to do so i will be back with in a few minutes

saying this she's about to move form there he's not letting her go he is standing in front of her way

geet just wait for a while
what you are doing? with low and fear full tone she asked
Trying to stop you from leaving this room..saying this he moved little front she moved two steps away from him in back wards she is dumb now his action brought more fear in her.

his eyes is constantly fixed in her eyes with anger yet no one is dare to go away from Maan while he speaking yet no one is dare to avoid him but she did this made him more anger...
she lowers her gaze and started to pray in her mind # what all this please babaji save me#

she don't want to stay in front of him so she waited for a chance to move from there when he moved slightly away from her. she run out from there and about to near the door he hold her wrist and twist it back
and barked near her ear "dont dare to move away from here"

now she got anger she is trying her level best to get rid form his grip but she can't move a little bit...
she turned her face towards him and give a angry look at him
"leave my hand.."
he didn't react to that just turned her to face him and push her to the near by wall by holding her both hands with his

"how dare you do this to me don't dare to come near me MR. kurana"
he smiled to her words now he understand her protest against him she is fear of him
he decided to make things clear to her...
Miss Geet khanda don't get any wrong idea.. i am least interested in you i don't want to make you as my wife...you clear

he knows very well she's not miss yet but he addressed her as miss.Khanda to make her understand that he is also not interest in this marriage..
saying this he moved away from her..she took a relief breath and thanked god..

If you are not really interested Then why you married me?

Dadi maa trapped me in to this to marry you.. you also seems to be not interest in this marriage right?

yeah right...dadi maa brought a sudden proposal to my house and my parents also don't want to loss this good alliance they collected all details about you and your khandan so they decided my marriage..

And you didn't oppose for this...

No not like that i did my best to avoid this marriage i want to do my business management my parents also with me till dadi brought your proposal..but when it came every thing changed parents also not with me they convinced me for this marriage
i too convinced when it comes for there happiness and also about reji's(her younger sister) future...

now maan came to know she is also trapped for this marriage like him..

so you don't want to stay here..
hmmm..i will go to Punjab next week i got a admission for MBA there
do you think dadi will allow you to go to Punjab for your studies..
i will try to convince her..
you convince dadi... he smilled to him self as he knows very well about his dadi...you think its possible she wont allow you to go..

she made a baby face and starts to think what to do now by putting her nail in her mouth

you don't worry i will made your MBA admission in best college in Delhi with my influence you can study here...under one condition

she's happy now...and question him "what" with her facial expression

You have to act as we are happy in front of dadi...#i know her very well she's not happy with my marriage she will also made me irritate with some other plans in the process of making me happy... so before she start her stupid plan i should act#

what acting.. and why we should act before dadi maa?

geet listen to me she's is very adamant she wont let you study and me to be my self until we are happy...she will start to push us... i don't want that so let us act as we are happy as other couples in front of her and made her to believe that we are happy...then we are free you can pruse with your studies and i can concentrate on my business...

geet understand what he tries #yeah he's right dadi always push me to do some thing to maan and keeps on telling me about him...if it continues i cant concentrate on my dream so need to act as he said#

OK done... i will act but be sure you don't cross your limits while acting...
he again smiled to himself for her childish behavior...
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Now

Thinking about her past geet lost herself and stayed in maan's room for a while but suddenly she remembered of the worst thing happen in the same room and run out with tears...

she rushed to her room went to wash room wash her face with cold water but yet her tears and sobbing not stop her kneels go weak she cant stand.. again and again the past flashing in her mind she kneel down near the wash basin and started to cry...

after a few minutes she console herself and came out yet she didn't notice Maya but she find's some thing is missing in her room when she came out of wash room she finds that maya is missing...

where is Maya,,,, where she went...she cant think further she searching here and there maya was sleeping there peace fully before she went but now suddenly where she went...

Maya used to cry when she didn't see Geet around after she wake up but geet didn't hear any cry sound from her yet so she didn't wake up yet but where is she...

Geet is broken down when she didn't find Maya for nearly 1 hour...she asked all servants securities and roaming inside and outside the Mansion in the process of searching maya...

Precap: Maaneet fights

part 6

sorry for the grammatical and spelling mistakes due to my limited knowledge...plzzz comment me with your negative comments too which will help me to improve...

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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago

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