ArHi-THe Beautiful hug...!!!!!!(updated part14)

guys im a rookie..pls bear with this amateurish attempt..

all guys have written it soo beautifully...

the doctor comes in "pls let the patient take rest.."shyam is so relieved..

al the four ladies come out crying of the ICU...

after some time..shyam goes to buaji and khushis mother to go home and take rest and reassures the that he is there...after lot of persuasion they leave...

a smile on the creeps face..

then he goes in the ICU where payal and khushi are sitting next to their father and crying silently holding his hand..

shyam says" payal ji aur khushi ji ap dono ghar chale jaie...hum.."

payal interrupts.."shyam ji pls jab tak babuji bilkul thik nai ho jate hum yaha se nahi jaenge...

khushi looks at bauji again..she cannot control her emotions and runs out to sit on the bench..

-----------meanwhile in RM

arnav fighting with his emotions.."damn it...y did i behave like that wat is wrong with me..."

anjali comes to his room "chote tum aa gae...tumhe pata hai khushi k bauji ko heart attack aya hai..woh life care hospital me hai..are tumhe ye chot..??

arnav forgets everything..he takes his car keys and rushes to the hospital..

anjali.."chote magar suno toh..

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hospital..

khushi crying on the bench..suddenly feels his prescence...

on seeing him she runs towards him...and hugs him so tight..

arnav did not know how to react..whether to hug her back or not..he wanted to comfort her..stop the crying...but he went to his chain of thoughts again then was interrupted by khushis crying and hiccups...she said.."arnav ji..babuji.. babuji..

arnav pushes her softly.so that he could see her face..

he cupped her face with both hands.."khushi khushi,,rona band karo..main hoo na..sab thik ho jaega..

tum chalo mere sath..."

he took her to the canteen and gave her a glass of water..and asked her "did u eat something..??

khushi nodded no as a reply..as her mouth was filled with water and eyes with tears..

arnav(closes his eyes) FB 1-khushi feeding him jalebis

FB 2-khushi helpng anjali with the brace thingy..

FB 3-khushi dancin on the bed and enjoying..

FB 4-the hug..

he opened his eyes...(a small tear came down his eye..)

he wanted her own khushi backk..the smiling and the laughing one...

every litl tear of hers was like a needle piercing his heart..

he still did not know the reason...

he told khushi to sit there as he wanted to meet the doc..

---------------------ICU

shyam asks payal about khushi..

payal says that she doesnot know..

shyam goes out looking for hr and sees arnav cumin from the other side.."ye saale sahab yaha kya kar rae...??"

arnav who is lost in his thoughts does not see him..the crep escapes yet again...

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canteen.

a litl smile appeared on khushi face on thinkin how arnav comforted her when she needed him the most "ywe arnav ji itne bure bhi nahi hain"

the smile vanishes when she thinks about her father...

"hey devi maiiya,hamare babuji ko jaldi se accha kar dijie..."

pls guys.. do comment..

i know it is really silly..but my first attempt..

Originally posted by: Kamalika..

its really awesome dear

its goood to kill time..liked it.

for the first attempt...its good dear. Don't get dejected if you don't get comments...u should appreciate it that people have liked it...keep writing and watch the response u get.😛

nicely written

Originally posted by: shybabe

for the first attempt...its good dear. Don't get dejected if you don't get comments...u should appreciate it that people have liked it...keep writing and watch the response u get.😛

thank u yar...

In no way is it silly! Especially for a first attempt amazing. You've got a really sweet Arnav and Khushi storyline running through it and even though you've got the CREEP in there, his descriptions, his actions are SPOT ON! I am so glad you took my advice and wrote. Arnav and Khushi moments are beautiful. I can totally imagine the caring, caring way he acts with her. I hope this happens now on Monday and the part where Arnav says, he is here and everything will be fine is so romantic and lovely! Keep it up girl! 😉 So glad you wrote, it has helped pass the time right? 😆

Originally posted by: YPNHK_kiFANno.1

In no way is it silly! Especially for a first attempt amazing. You've got a really sweet Arnav and Khushi storyline running through it and even though you've got the CREEP in there, his descriptions, his actions are SPOT ON! I am so glad you took my advice and wrote. Arnav and Khushi moments are beautiful. I can totally imagine the caring, caring way he acts with her. I hope this happens now on Monday and the part where Arnav says, he is here and everything will be fine is so romantic and lovely! Keep it up girl! 😉 So glad you wrote, it has helped pass the time right? 😆

wonderful first attempt dear...keep it up

Originally posted by: Arhi-Sarun

wonderful first attempt dear...keep it up

thank u..