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it was a terrific update... cont soon...😊
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Fantastic Update
I loved it
wao Mayur nok jhok was super great
Precape is so interesting
thanks for Pm
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Very nice updt ... awesome ...continue soon... thanks for the pm :-)
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lovely updt
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the story is really great nice idea starting frm mayur wedding and sajan proposal innovative idea love mayur nok johk and sajan sweet scenes and the entry of rohan was hillarious it was so cool the nw gang vs old gang was great and the precap is really exciting waiting for both trips sajan as well as mayur do cont soon
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Hi guys mujhe pata hain ki aap log mere late updates se kaafi naaraz hain par kya karun thodi busy hun isiliye late kar rahi hun par koshish yehi hain ki acha update dun yeh raha agla part
part5

M-hi dude good morning kaise ho

S-waise hun jaise kal tha par tum kuch badle badle lag rahe ho kya baat hain

M-baat hi kuch aisi hain

S-kaise baat kahin nupur tumhare saath aane ke liye raazi toh nahin hogayi

M-good guess

S-par aise kaise maan gayi

M-woh ek top secret hain

N-goodmorning

M-goodmorning to you too

N-goodmorning tumhare liye nahin sam ke liye tha

M-nupur I think humein ladaai band karke understanding pe aana chahiye

N-main aur tumhaare saath understanding tumhare sapne main bhi possible nahin hain

M-lekin nupur aise ladti raogi toh trip pe tum aur main dono bore honge

N-ek kaam karte hain trip cancel karenge koi problem nahin rahegi

Peon-deodhar sir ne aap dono ko bulaaya hain

Mayur go to meet him

Deodhar main tum dono se trip ke baare main baat karne bulaya tha

M-aap tension mat lijiye hum dono jaa rahe hain

Deodhar-main kuch aur kehna chahta tha nupur ne kal teek kahaan tha juniors ko bhi mauka milna chahiye

M-par sir college ka reputatin agar unse koi galti ho gayi toh

Deodhar-jaanta hun isiliye juniors participate nahin karenge woh log tumdono ko assist karenge so tum dono ek baar ria aur nirbhay se baat karlo toh acha hoga

N-mera marna confirmed hain

M-mera bhi

Deodhar-kuch kahaan

Both 'no sir

They come out

M-pata nahin ab kya hoga

N-aur kya hamaara brainwash hoga maine pehle hi kahaa tha mujhe yeh trip pe nahin jaana par tumne mujhe force kiya

M-saari galti meri hi hain deodhar sir se maine kahaan tha juniors ko bhi mauka milna chahiye ab dediya mauka

N-mayank mujhe nahin aana

M-agar nahin aayi toh sir ko kya kahogi tum tension kyun leti ho main sambhal loonga sab kuch

N-pucca

M-pucca

They leave to ahemdabad in the bus ria sees nirbhay in front so she goes back to sit beside mayank

Mayank was about to stop her sees nupur and keeps silent

Ria-yeh tours bhi pata nahin kyun hote hain upar se yeh bus travelling pata nahin is journey ke end tak mera kya hoga this pollution oh God pata nahin kahaan fas gayi

M-yeh Mrs Sharma se jyada sar khati hain

Ria-aapne kuch kahaan

M-nahin toh

N-yeh ho kya raha hain

R-main samji nahin

N-tum mayank ke baaju kya kar rahi ho yeh place mera hain aage jaake baito

R-yehaan aapka naam likha hain

N-tumhara bhi nahin likha jaake aage baito warna ppunee nahin pahunchogi

She leaves in anger

R-pata nahin kahaan fas gayi har jagah musibat

Ni-tumse badi koi musibat nahin ho sakti

R-just shut up ok

N-mayank hato mujhe andar baitna hain

M-naaraazgi se nahin pyar se poochogi toh seat dunga

N-nahin poochoongi mujhe meri jagah kaise lena hain ache se aata hain

Just then bus starts and she falls on him

M-tumhein yeh jagah chahiye toh pehle hi kehti khushi khushi deta

N-woh unexpectingly hua tha

M-jo bhi ho mujhe toh bahut acha lagaa (she was lost in his eyes)

Chiru-nupur ji aap yehaan

N-chiru ji aap

M-nupur tumhein andar baitna tha na baito

Chiru-yeh bhi aapke saath pata nahin bhagwan hamesha phool ke saath kaanta kyun lagata hain aap tension mat lijiye mere hote hue yeh aapko nahin satayega

Chiru-meri chod tu yeha kya kar raha hain

Chiru-lagta hain bhagwan ne aapko mere kismat main likha hain isiliye jab bhi main safar karta hun aap mil jaati hain agar aap aise hi milengi toh main roz safar karoonga

M-hamesha safar karega toh kaam kab karega

N-mayank

Chiru-aap mere liye unse mat ladiye hamaara milna toh upar waale ne likha hain jo jochahe keh le kismat ko koi badal nahin sakta

M-haan tumne tik kahaan kismat hoti hi aisi hain isi kismat ne meri pyari biwi komere humsafar banaya (hugging nupur)

Chiru-yeh main kya sun raha hun aapne is sadu se shaadhi kaise ki

M-jyada bola na toh bolne ke liye muh nahin rahega chup chap apna kaam karo aur chup andar jaake baito

She stares angrily

M-sweetheart aap andar baitengi please

She goes inside

She reads a magazine for sometimelaterfeel sleepy catches his hand and sleeps keeping head over him he was busy staring at her

Sajan go to dancepractice rohan ash join them

Ash-sir aap mujhe dance sikhayenge

G-sam tujhe kyun ance sikhayega woh mera partner hain tum apne partner se poocho

S-chashmish aur possesive interesting

G-kuch kahaan

S-practice shuru kare

They were dancing gunjan was shivering

S-tum aise gabraogi toh ek step bhi nahin karpaayenge

G-sam mujhse yeh sab nahin hota

s-kyun nahin hota valentine day pe tumne hi dance kiya na aur drama main bhi

G-par sam

S-tum tension kyun leti ho main hun na tumhaare saath mere hote hue darr kis baat ki ab tension chodo aur dance practice karo

They were dancing

S-chashmsh kitne din ho gaye tumne mujhe propose karke aur aaj tak ek date bhi nahin yeh mere image pe hi suit nahin karta kyun na aaj sham date pe chale

She slips he holds her

She was lostin his eyes he winks

She blushes and leaves

In the night at dinner

M-kuch bhi karke is chiruj ka peecha chudaana hoga par kya karun

He suddenly drops drink on rias dress

M-sorry

R-yeh aapne kya kiya meri itni achi dress ko kharab kiya aapko pata hain yeh kitna expensive hain iski uniqueness ki wajah se

Ni-is hisaab se tum isse jyada expensive hogi

Mayank was feeling embarrased

N-jyada naatak karna band kar aur andar jaake dress ko clean kar pata nahin kaisi musibat sar pe aagayi

He smiles

Sam was waiting for gunjan she comes out looking damn gorgeoues

G-aise kya dekh rahe ho

S-beautiful

She blushes

By the time Ria comes bus leaves

R- bus kahaan hain

N-pune gayi hain tum tension mat lo kal sham tak aajayegi tumhari wajah se hamara bus chut gaya ab tumhare saath hum sab ka bhi band bajega

M-nupur relax humne pata lagvaya hain kal subah yehaan se humein bus milegi kuch gadbad nahin hoga aur aaj raat ke liye maine paas waale guest house main pooch liya hain main hun na sab sambhal loonga

She smiles

M-thank God ab chale

Nirbhay wasconfused with mayur behaviour while ria was saying thankGod

Sajan in farmhouse fully decorated

G-sam tumne yeh sab kuch

S-tum sabse special ladki ho tumhare liye jo bhi karun kam hi hain par maine apni taraf se puri koshish ki is ghar ko beautiful banane main

She hugs him

He miles and hus her back

They reach guest house seeing nirbhay sleeping mayank goes out

M-hello nupur mujhe tumse baat karni hain baahar aao abhi isi waqt

N-mujhe tumsekoi baat nahin karni mujhe bahut neend aarahi hain good night

M-agar tum nahin aayi toh raat bar bahar hi rahoonga

N-mujhe nahin aana main abhi so rahi hum subah tak tum tandh main subah tak era wait karna

M-jaise tumhari marzi(he cut phone)

N-agar yeh raat bhar thand main raha toh

She goes out

M-tum baahar kyun aayi ho andar hi baitna tha tumhara neend kharaab ho gayi maanta hun maine bahut badi galti ki hain par iska matlab yeh nahin ki tum mujhe itna satao tumhein meri feelings ki koi value hi nahin hain(he was blabbering she hugs him)

He becomes silent with her reaction

He smilees and hgs her back

Rain starts he wanted to go but he doesnt leave her

He frees her

Aaa aa'.

Mayur

He hugs her from back and kisses her neck
Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

She trns towards him and was lost in his eyes
Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua

Sam catches her hand and drags her closer hugging her from back
Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai

He keeps hand around her waist and both dance
Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua

Mayank takes nur in arms in rain both faces meet

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

Mayur remember there p ast nenories

She hugs him looking into his eyes a small dance

Tu kahe to tere hi kadam ke
main nishanon pe
Chalun rukun ishaare pe
Tu kahe tho khwabon ka bana ke
Main bahana sa
Mila karu sirhaane pe

Ohhh
Tum se dil ki baatein seekhi
Tum se hi yeh raahe seekhi
Tum pe marr ke mein tho
Jjee gaya

Sajan dance sam lifts gunjan in arms

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

Gunjan goes front he hugs her fom back

Dil kahe ke aaj tho, chupa lo tum
panahon mein
Ke darr hai tum ko kho doonga
Dil kahe ki sambhal zara khushi ko
Na nazar laga
Ke darr hai mein tho ro dunga

She looks into his eyes

Hooo
Karthi hoon sao vaade tum se
Bandhe dil ke dhaage tum se
Yeh tumhe na jane kya hua

Mayank lifts nupur both eyes meet she blushes and leaves him

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

Sajan dance and mayur dance together
Sajde mein yun hi jhukta hoon
Tum pe hi aa ke rukta hoon
Kya yeh sab ko hota hai


Hum ko kya lena hai sab se
Tum se hi sab batein ab se
Ban gaye ho tum meri dua

Khuda Jaane ke mein fida hun
Khuda Jaane mein mit gaya
Khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai
Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

Ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

After dance they hug again

N-mayank chodo koi dekhlega toh kya sochega

M-haaye Mrs Sharma sharmaate hue kitni cute lagti ho par maintumhein nahin chodne waala bade mushkil se haaat aayi ho aise kaise chod doon

N-main chillanongi

M-try karo waise koi faida nahin hain mujhe tum par pura haq hain after all hum aapke patidev hain aur haan yeh tumhara college nahin mera place hain tumhare stupid tricks nahin chalenge

N-tumhein nahin lagta tum khud jyada hi over acting kar rahe ho

M-haan toh sangat ka asar hain acha yeh sab chodo thodi der baahar chale

N-anjaan jagah mujhe darr lagta hain mujhe nahin aana

M-darr kis baat ki main hun na

Sam kisses gunjans hands

S-i am sorry maine jaane anjaane tumhein bahut takleef di meri wajah se tumhein sheena se kitna kuch sunna pada

G-ismain tumhari koi galti nahin thi mujhe bhi apne feelings chupaana nahin tha waise bhi yeh sab chodo puraani baato ko khured ke kya faida aaj hum yeha hamaari khushi celebrate karne aaye hain beeti baaton ko yaad karne nahin

S-acha teek hain kuch aur baat karte hain

G-tumhaare family ke baare main

He becomes silent

G-kya hua sam chup kyun ho tumne apne family ke baare main kabhi kuch nahin kahaan suhaani ko dekh kar hairaan ho gayi thi tumne kabhi uske baare main nahin bataya paruse mere baare main nahin pata

S-chashmish chodona mujhe unsab baato ke baare main baat karke mood kharab nahin karna

G-acha baba gussa mat hona ek kaam karte hain pehle dinner karte hain

On the road

M-acha nupur yeh batao Mrs Sharma banke kaise feel kar rahi ho

N-mayank tum bhi na kyun bura sapne ko dohrate ho

He gives sadu look she starts smiling

N-tm gusse main bahut cute lagti hun

M-mujhe tumse koi baat nahin karni

N-acha baba sorry sach bolun toh mujhe ab tak yakeen nahin horaha ki hamaari shaadhi hui hain mujhe toh us din court main tumhari baatein sun kar yehi lagaa ki agle 30 saalo tak bhi mera kuch nahin hone waala main life long kunwaari reh jangi tumhari intezaar main meera banke reh jaongi par ab aisa lag raha hain ki yeh koi sapna hain shayd us uparwaale ne is meera pe bahut jaldi taras kaaya

M-tumhari liye main kitna kuch karta hun aur tum mujhse ladti rehti ho aaj bhi tumhare liye bus miss karwaya

N-wat

He makes innocent look saying yes

N-mujhe nahin pata tha Mr Sharma itne romantic hain

M-tumhein mera mazak udana bada pasand hain na

N-MrsSharma Mr Sharma ka mazak nahin udayegi toh aur kiski mazak udayegi waise mere Mr Sharma hain bahut sweet (pinching his cheeks)

Suddenly she slips and falls down he falls on her both were lost in each other hekisses her lips

G-sam i think humein ab chalna chahiye

S-jaana zaroori hain kya

G-already bahut late hogaya hain waise bhi kal subah milenge na

S-ok chalo

Mayur get up in embarrasment

M-sorry mujhe aisa nahin karna chahiye tha

(she catches his face)

N-tumhein haq hain

(he hugs her)

M- tum mujhse fir kabhi nahin naaraz hogi na

N-tumhein hurt karoongi toh tumse jyada mujhe takleef hogi I love you mayank

M-tik se sunaayi nahin diya phir se kaho

N-mujhe nahin kehna

Sam stops bike in the middle of road

G-tumne gaadi kyun rokha

S-ek minute abhi aaya

She was standing ash sees her

A-mam aap yeha iswaqt kya kar rahi hain

G-yeh question mujhe tumse poochna chahiye meri enquiry kal subah karna philhaal ke liye ghar jao

Sam comes with tea

S-is tea ke bina hamaari date aduri hain

She smiles and drinks

She suddenly kisses his cheek

G-i love you

S-lagta hain tea main koi gadbad hain

G-samrat

S-sorry

They reach room she was about to go inside he calls her

M-Nupur

She comes near him

He kisses her forehead

M-I love you

She blushes and goes inside

R-mam aap ab tak kahaan thi

N-miujhe neend main chalne ki aadat hain isiliye yehaan wahaan ghum rahi hun tujhe koi problem hain chup chap soja

She recieves a message

Goodnight Sweet heart

She smiles

R-aapko neend main hasne ki bhi aadat hain

N-tu apna muh band karke so ja

Ni-aap mam ke saath baahar gaye the

M-tumne dekha

Ni-haan abhi dekha tha aap dono ko saath main aate hue

M-woh nupur ko baahar kaam tha uske saath gaya use akele kaise jaane de sakta hun

Precap-mayank was dancing with ria nupur leaves from there in anger

part6

Edited by --unknown-- - 13 years ago
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very very nice update...

loved the song...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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mind blowing update
loved mayur part soo much.

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beautiful part
loved the song...
thanks for the pm
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wao that was so beautiful and lovely Update
Finally mayur patch up
i am so happy
Loved It so much
thank u so much dear
cont soon

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