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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome update
wa did ayaan do 2 er fam
plzz cont soon x
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg dat was soo sad
ayaan did dis or wat ?
cont sooon

harneet <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updates
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh GOD...!!!!! ye kya hogaya...POOR Geet ...write now she was facing a horrible time... Oh my God...that's why she was very rude to everyone...this was the reason ...
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Posted: 13 years ago


PART 13

The Previous Night:

Geet : Kya ye sach hai??

Ayaan : Haan!!!

He took her hands away from his collar , Haan Geet!!!

Ayaan : Maine kiya hai ye sab!!!

She was unable to beleive the truth , everything just stopped for her ,She was almost numb

Geet :Why the hell did u kill my family!!! Her pitch grew louder!!!

She shouted !!

Tears started falling from her eyes , her eyes were red with anger..Why did u do this??

Geet :Kyun kiya tumne aisa??

AYaan : Kyun ki mujhe mere baba ko bachaana tha!!!

Kyun ki tumhara bhai mere baba ko jail me dalne wala tha , zindagi bhar unhe kaid karne wala tha!!!

and mai ye nahi dekh sakta tha , he is the one who took care of me while i was an orphan , and i had to do this for him, i had no other option left...I respect him more than anything else in this world GEET!!!

Mujhe jab pta chal ki wo tumse paar karta hai , i entered into your life , i wanted to save my baba through you. U were always just a medium GEET!!!

Mai use maarna nahi chahta tha , par jab use sachai pta chala , to I had no option but to kill him.

There was a sudden silence all over.

She slapped him , she slapped him again.

Geet : You used me and took my life away!! Sab naatak tha?? Ayaan???

AYAAN!!!

Unhe marne se pehle ek baar bhi unka pyaar tumhar samne nhi aaya??

Ayaan : NAHI GEET!!

JUST SHUT UP!!!!

He shouted at her angrily , He grabbed her towards him , looked into her eyes.

Ayaan : Woh isliye kyun ki maine kabhi tumse pyaar kiya hi nahi , that was a lie!!!

Woh har baat jo maine aaj tak tumse kah hai , woh sab jhoot tha

Woh har waada jo maine tuhare liye tumhare mama papa ke saamne kiya tha ,woh jhoot tha!!!

Everything was nothing more than just a lie "Sirf Ek Jhoot" he whispered in her ear

She opened her eyes.

Us din mere ankhon me sirf nafrat thi Ayaan ke liye...sirf aur sirf nafrat!!!

The next morning on the empty road ,

She saw he was standing on the empty road Everything was silent around them . No-pne was present there , except Geet and Ayaan.

She looked at him

She went near him .

Geet : Maine tumse pyaar kiya tha Ayaan , I loved you.

Tum mere liye sab kuch the par aaj tumne mera sab kuch hi chin liya...

Now i can't even spare you for another moment

But i'll not leave you forwhat you have done to my parents.

U'll have to pay for it , I'll go and file a complaint against you and your criminal family!!!

Main tumhe itni asaani si nahi jaane doongi .!! I'll not leave you so easily Mr. Ayaan remember.

Ayaan looked at her.

Geet :Kya hua mujhe bhi maar daloge , Will u kill me??

Bola Ayaan waise it should not be difficult for you.

Bolo Ayaan...!!

Ayaan :SHUT UP GEET!!!

Geet turned back to go away from him without listening to him ...jut then a lorry rushed towards her ...She saw it ...but there was no time for her to respond , She could see her death infront of her...!!! She knew that every thing was going to be over , she closed her eyes to be hit by the lorry...

It was a matter of seconds ,She heard him screaming her name GEET!!!. She opened her eyes , just to realise that she is alive ,nothing happened to her..She opened her eyes , and saw Ayaan lying lifeless on the road , dead.

She was hell shocked , It was her who was in that place ...How did Ayaan come there.

She soon realised the truth , she relaised that Ayaan sacrificed himself to save her.

He saved her , someone who snatched her life away , saved her life!!!

She kept staring at his lifeless body .

It's the same person whom she loved dearly ,

It's the same person whom she wanted to marry and start a new life

It's the same person Who killed her family, who snatched everything from her.

It's the same person who told her that she was nohing more than a medium.

It's the same person who saved her life few minutes ago by killing himself.

Why???


She knelt down , He was lying lifeless , blood was all over , she touched the blood and she looked at her hands which were now filled with blood.

She called him : Ayaan...!! Ayaan!!

She didn't know want to do , she lost him forever .

Even though she hated him but still there was pain in her eyes.


Why did he save her life after ruining it???

Did he love her ???

He had feelings fo her somewhere in the corner of his heart.

She stood there not able to understand why a persom after ruining her life , saved it.

She opened her eyes, she saw Maan infront of her.

Present

Mai ye baat kabhi nahi samajh payi...Usne mujhe kyun bachaaya

Mujhe khud se nafrat hone lagi..

Jis insaan ne mere parivaar ki jaan li , he loved me , He killed himself in order to save me.

His last scream made me hate myself more and more.

He ruined everything.

He left me in a stage where living a life is as difficult than losing it!!!

I still remebr his touch , the last touch to save me.

I still hate myself for lving and trusting a prson who destroyed my family...

I still hate the fact that i'm leading a life given by him.

It's unable to lead a life that's given by the person who took away your life.

Kuch hi dino mein I lost everything ,Each and everything there is nothing left in my life...!!

It was a matter of few days , and everything was destroyed...I lost everyone because of whom i am alive.

Geet looked at Maan ...There were no tears in her eyes.

She woke up and left the room , before leaving the room , she turned back

"Mere ye sab bataane ke baad tum samajh gaye hoge ki I can never include another person in m life , nor can i enter in any other's life.

I cannot share love.

Main sab si hamesha door rehne ki koshish karti hoon, par pata nahi kyun tum mujhe ...There was a sudden pause between hr words



She went away without turning back again.

Maan just stood there , he had no words to speak.

Precap :

Maan : Mere saath chalo Geet.

Geet :Kaha

Maan : Geet , just come with me

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PART 14

Edited by World-of-Dreams - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update loved it
so much pain
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
heart touching part dearbut still loved it
can understand why geet was hesitating to be with maan

hope maan can fill her life with love and happiness again

eagerly waiting for next part

thanks for the pmplease continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
her life is surely captured ...
but with maan around there is hope
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Posted: 13 years ago
am also confused like geet...y did ayaan sav her when he didnt love her...poor geet...she had had such painful times...continue soon n thnxxx...
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful part dear. i loved it. do continue soon... 😃

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