Book 2::Eternally Waiting 4 U Update3 JAN 12 PG149 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: missglam


Nice update
i feel so bad for piya! :(
i hope, T pays for her shameless act !
Awww. . Abhay is cho chweet , always there for piya!
I like alina but i'm tired of this jealousy track . . I hope , atleast there r no misunderstandings b/w abhiya. .
thnx 4 d pm
update sooon . .tc

I know T will cop it bad from AbhayHe will give T a taste of her own medicine.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: annokhi

good work.👏

u r a fab writer.👏

thanks for pm.😊

continue soon.


Thank U
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: peehu24

awesome update..loved it...i loved abhiya convo..their little alone time..and finally..alina makes her entry...lets see whats in store for we readers..update soon..thanks for pm..

I have plenty in store. Be ready for my favourite character to enter.
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Posted: 13 years ago
aw...
poor piaaa
luvly part
plz cnt soon.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 13 years ago
Gr8 update Ayesha 😃 So Chand is telling off Abhay for flirting with Dipu? 😆 Is he being a protective father or a jealous dude whose son gets all the attention by women? 😉 Update soon.
Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

:::PRECAP 22:::Gossip Girl:::

There little looks, gasps, whispers were driving Pia crazy. Most of the girls were glued to their phones getting updates on the web with the local news. Now the new gossip was all about Alina and why she looked so pitiful. It made Pia very cross at how presumptious her class mates could be. Jeh had supported through the entire day but Pia only wanted Abhay around. He was like a ghost almost blending into the background. It was unfair to have him so near yet so far. He'd left everything he had for her and was left all alone. It cut through Pia's heart to see him sat all alone. Se wished she could run to him and hold his hands.
Pia threw daggers at T who'd been the main ring leader in this with her snooty looks-I swear i am going to murder her Jeh.
Jeh held Pia's hand-I'll join U.
Pia took her hand away from Jeh-Look i'm happy U are here for me Jeh but this is not done. I am trying to send U no mixed signals here. All we can be is just friends Jeh.
Jeh nodded still hopeful-I know Pia but i can't switch my feelings off.
Pia mused scratching her head looking rather ill-I don't feel too good. All of this is putting a strain on my mind. I need a little time out. Maybe U should sit with Alina. Poor thing is all alone.
Jeh turned to see his sister sat next to Abhay-Oh i think she'll fit right in. She has Prince of darkness with her. Abhay will make her feel right at home.
Pia rolled her eyes at Jeh wanting to scratch his eyes out for being so mean-I don't appreciate U making fun of him like that especially after i am getting a hard time over here. I know how it feels.
Pia stomped off feeling very blue. Pia gave Abhay a quick glance to signal him to go out back and meet her somewhere private with her eyes. Abhay got the hint and followed Pia after a few minutes leaving Alina all alone. Alina was intrigued by Abhay Raichand. It wouldn't be long until she becaem friends with him after a loner can only understand another loner. She had her own agenda regarding ABHAY. Alina Khurana had been waiting a year in solitude. A tumultuous year where she'd lost two brothers and gained an ally. One she'd kept hidden away from all prying eyes. He was her saviour in reality and one who had belief in her. Abhay gave a simialr aura as him but he was completely different. Getting close to Abhay was now her main goal.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice precap 😊 Please update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Caught up with the update only now Aysh...
Abhay will always be Piya's emotional support...
None can replace him I guess...
Jeh to an extent but he should really start seeing the light...
I mean a girl can't be more clear you know...
Precap-
Some juicy AbhIya moments I guess...
Alina is here, sweet...
But why the hell is Jeh so mean to her😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanx for the PM and sry for not commenting for ur Other ffs u send ur pms of all the ffs and os Together and i get confused and don't even remember for which did i commented b4...and as for ur updates i always say u r an amazing Writter...and i love and Enjoy reading ur FFS
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Posted: 13 years ago

:::UPDATE 22:::Gossip Girl:::

Pia was now being stared at by onlookers passing by her like she was filth and some with pity in their eyes. What was wrong with these people? They were behaving like she'd been ...Is this what they all thought? Her reputation was at stake here. And all these people had time for was to talk about others misfortunes. Pia gritted her teeth placing her hand in her bag to call Abhay again. She had to talk to someone. Pia had never before felt so intimidated and so small before. Pia had to focus on her present and not look back at her past. Pia toyed with her mobile in her hand until she turned around to see Abhay there observing her like he was trying to get a read on her mixed up emotions. Abhay took Pia with him away from prying eyes. It p****d him off to hear the foul thoughts of people. How dare they think Pia was ruined by that animal? He wanted to shout at the world insisting Pia was still in tact but he was her ex and openly discussing such matters would only raise eyebrows. Finally he found the spot that was their own near the waterfall.

Pia encircled Abhay wrapping him with her arms around him feeling just how muscular he was and how much warmth resonated from him-This is so hard Abhay. I never thought being with U would be so difficult. U are so near yet so far Abhay. I hate seeing U so alone.
Abhay lifted Pia's chin pragmatically asking Pia-It never botherd U before Pia? When we were sworn enemies U had no problems then? (He smirked) After all i am a loser right?
Pia hit Abhay with her fist playfully smiling at Abhay forgetting about her woes-Oh U are a loser Abhay. U are my Loser. Only mine so U better keep Alina and all of those girls showing any interest at U at bay or t will have to satrt cuffing U to my wrist forever.
Abhay gave Pia a dazzling smile he only had reserved for her purpose-Pia would i openly flirt with another girl and risk my neck on the line with my secret girlfriend on my case huh? Maybe U should start making your claim over me Pia to keep me coming back for more i need a few demos.
Pia blushed in Abhay's suggestive talk-Oh you'll get plenty of demos Abhay. So long as U earn them. First stop U know my demands?
Abhay pouted teasing Pia-Sheesh if i'd have known about having to earn my stripes i'd have stayed a million miles away from U Pia. Then at least i would have had U all over me. Maybe i should have taken U up on last nights offer huh?
Pia continued to glow red with Abhay enjoying the reaction he got out of Pia. Pia gave Abhay a light kiss on his cheek-There. U have a little taster the rest will be offered as a reward Abhay Raichand. U have a years worth of making up to do starting from tonight. I am expecting something big for all the tears U made me shed for U.

Abhay racked Pia in his arms side to side admiring the low cut top she had on with her milky skin on show with her bare shoulders. Abhay kissed her there and the trailed his kisses to Pia's neck nuzzling her there and then towards her lips making Pia feel like she was moving on air.

Abhay smirked loving Pia's reactions to his lips-U never said i couldn't kiss U Pia. (He gives Pia his seductive smile) Am i weakening your defences Pia?
Pia whimpered at Abhay's hypnotic voice-U are a bad boy?
Abhay whispered to Pia's ear-I know! Don't worry Pia i won't take advantage of U. I want U to come to me willingly. (Abhay let go of her sitting down on the edge. Pia gave him her sulky look at feeling a little disappointed at their embrace being broken sitting beside him.) Pia U look so hot when U sulk. But U were the one who stipulated on rewarding me for my efforts.
Pia leaned her head against Abhay's sitting next to Abhay clasping her hand entwining them with Abhay's-Abhay when i'm with U i lose myself. I immerse myself into U and when we aen't together i feel like i've lost a part of me.
Abhay kissed Pia's forehead-I know. How are U coping with the gossip mill in full swing? I am here for U Pia even if it can't be in public. I know U are hurting but this phase will be over and then someone else will be the hottest flavour of the week.
Pia smiled listening to Abhay sexy raspy voice making her tingle inside-U sure know what to say to me Abhay.
Abhay caressed Pia's cheek-Pia how are your parents? And your sister's coping huh?
Pia admitted-I can't talk to them about it. Its too personal and a little hard to see them swallowing my bitter pill Abhay. I can't believe am relieved that monster is dead. In a way i have him to thank for getting U back Abhay but i fear something big is about to kick off.
Abhay had a bad feeling something big was about to happen-Pia i want U to be ready tonight. I will take U away for one night and show U Abhay Raichand isn't a stingy old vampire who always takes his love for a free ride through the jungle in the night. I called a few favours with a few friends.
Pia was getting excited-That was fast!
Abhay laughed revealing his dimples making Pia lose her breath-U didn't think i'd forget did U Pia? (Abhay pulls a face frowning) U did? Now U will have to get punished for this Pia. (Kisses her soft warm rosy lips) Better.

Abhay takes Pia back and they separate just in time for Jeh to show up giving Pia a crooked smile and then the evils to Abhay glaring at the vampire. Alina was with Jeh who was too busy staring at Abhay with her young eyes following him like a love sick puppy loved up eyes making Pia angry at the audacity for another girl to even try to take was hers. Little did she know Alina had an ulterior motive in this game of deceit. Alina had plans for Abhay and they were going to throw everyone out of the water. Her family always saw her as the weakest link. Alina had a few aces up her sleeves. Abhay was her target. First being lure him into a false sense of security. He liked Pia. She could tell and Pia liked him back only thron to their love track was her good self and her brother. Jeh was in love with Pia. Alina knew Jeh would belittle her and Alina thrived on Jeh's hatred for weakness. It would make her look even more pitiful.

Alina stammered pushing her glasses forwards to both of them-Is he always so alone? Abhay i mean. He is a tortured soul. Poor thing needs a freind.
Jeh sarcastically mocked-Are U offering your services Alina? I am warning U he is bad news. He is a jerk. A spoilt rich kid. He has no respect for people. He thinks he is better than everyone and don't forget U are my sister. U can never date my enemy. I swear i will kill U myself. He is off limits. He is a leech.
Pia gave Jeh her irritated look-I am not in the mood for name calling Jeh. He has a name Jeh. ABHAY RAICHAND. I would prefer U call him by his name. In case U haven't noticed everyone in this town is calling me by god knows what name! Even my own classmates are at it.

T came over with her friends mocking Pia folding her arms looking side to side-I see U people are hanging out with the charity case. (Tuts) There was a time Pia when U were dating the hottest guy in College meaning Abhay but since him your taste in men have slipped a notch. Don't get me wrong Jeh is fine and all but he is chasing U around like a dog on heat is a turn off in case U haven't wondered Jeh. Pia is only after what she can't have right girls? The guy all over U the other night must have been pretty desperate if he wanted a piece pf U.
Pia slapped T hard-That's for bringing the sucker into discussion (Another slap) And this is for insulting me and filming everything like some despo. Can't get any attention so U go seeking after it huh? Using others misery as your gain. U think i care about tags? U think i even care about the boys in this college? I don't need a man on my arms to prove i am hot T. I know i am because i have confidence in myself and in my talents than putting everyone around me down. U can't even hold on to your own man and U come running to me with your high horse.
T tried to slap Pia but Abhay came and grabbed it-T i wouldn't bother wasting your time with a lost cause. Some girls will always think they are special. U might as well be talking to a wall.
Pia glared at Abhay with Jeh muscling in-Abhay...
Jeh cut in-U and T deserve each other.
T slid her arm through Abhay's and smiled with glee-Oh i am sure we can make it happen right Abhay? After all we were together longer than U were with miss Sunshine the might charity case.
Abhay had the last word-U best run along Jeh before i snare your sister into my trap. U should keep a close eye on her after all it won't be long before all the girls start flocking in my direction now the real prince of darkness is back (He winks at them) See U around Alina.
Jeh wanted to smash Abhay's face in-How dare he? If he thinks Alina would ever...

Alina was already lost in her own world. She was imagining Abhay and what she would do to him. She had big plans for Abhay. He was going to enter a world he had no idea existed. Abhay had a surprise coming his way and Alina couldn't wait until the time was right. So Abhay was interested in her? Alina wished she could read Abhay but she couldn't.

Alina heard Jeh repeatedly call for her attention but Alina wasn't having any of it. She had to relay her news to her freind. The only one she had in the world.

Jeh muttered under his breath-See i have good for nothing sister. If she so much as breathes near Abhay i will rip his head off.
Pia remained quiet. She had every faith in Abhay. He was hers alone. This had to be a cover up. It was all pretend-Jeh! Don't.

Jeh drove Pia home to find there were paparazzi's waiting for them there taking pictures of Pia with Jeh holding her protectively into her home where Panchi and Madhoo were waiting with fear for Pia. Madhoo gave Pia a hug.

Madhoo kissed Pia's cheek-My poor child. I jope nobody's said anything to U.
Pia shook her head-I am fine Mom.
Misha slammed the table with her fist-Fine my foot Pia. U were on the verge of tears. I know this is affecting U badly but people talk. Let them. U are our sister and we know no sucker can ever get to U. Don't forget U have an Angel on your shoulder always protecting U.
Madhoo was a little disturbed holding Pia in her arms-My daughters have been through so much Jeh. Girls are the greatest gift from God but a mother always worries about them more than sons. One day U girls will understand my plight. I fear U girls will be ostracised by our society. Who will accept U?
Jeh was quick to answer-If U are ever looking for a suitible groom for Pia then i am available.
Pia rolled her eyes-U people are crazy. I am only 17 mother. I haven't even turned 18 yet and U are on about marriage. Panchi Di is still left. We will all find someone when the time is right but for now let us be kids ok? Your daughters are stronger than U think. I have to go freshen up. Jeh thanks for the lift but i think U should head home and check up on Alina. Its not right for her to be alone when both of U have lost a sister.
Jeh felt shot down again by Pia but he was still hopeful after all Pia wasn't with Abhay his foe-Take care of yourself princess and the offer is still there if U want it. Marry me and you'll never regret it.
Pia giggled turning her back on Jeh-I think if U married me Jeh you'll regret it for the rest of your life. I'm a little high maintenance, with a motor mouth to ask question after question boring the life out of U, I like my own space and most importantly i am a headache to any normal guy out there. So U being a human is a definite no no.
Jeh was puzzled but Pia had no idea how inhuman he really was-Oh Pia U have no idea what i am.

Misha teased Pia taking off her shoes with a thud across the room sat on the bed-Now how could U reject a marriage proposal like that Pia? Jeh is cute.
Pia threw back searching through her wardrobe for the most hottest outfit she could find to wear on her date with Abhay-Then U marry him. I am reserved for one guy who is still hidden away somewhere from me waiting to come out of the darkness until then i can be nobodies.
Misha blew her hair out of her face laying on Pia's bed hugging a cute pink teddy bear-U are mad Pia. Still living in your fairytale huh? U will never change. So why are U rummaging through your entire outfits huh? U got a special date lined up?
Pia dragged Misha out of her room-No! (Lying) I am doing a clear out. Diwali is round the corner and i need some asian outfits and i don't have any.
Misha giggled pointing to the chinese number she had sprawled under the mass amount of clothes splayed across Pia's bed-This one is cute.

Pia had this in her closet for ages. Where was Abhay taking her?-Whatever Misha jjust get the hell out of my room. I need to clean up.
Misha knew whenever Pia cleaned up or cleared out her closet it meant she was emotionally troubled. Misha felt Pia's pain. If she needed time alone then she'd get it.

Abhay saw Jeh heading out of Pia's following him to see where he was headed straight into the heart of the Jungle. If Jeh was a werewolf it mean Alina must be a She-Wolf along with their perverted mother. And for some reason they wanted him. Alina freaked the darkness out of Abhay. The girl was all wrong. She seemed mentally unstable somehow. Something about her unsettled him. He had the same vibe from one of his own who betrayed him long ago. Alina was giving of this air of doom and gloom. He knew the Khurana's had a grudge against him. For some reason Alina was showing a little too much interest in him. Maybe his parents had a point? He should follow in this avenue. Pursue Alina or let her pursue him and find out what sinister plans this family had because they had involved Pia in this. He couldn't allow them to know that he knew what they were.

Jeh muttered from behind-I see U are following me lover boy! U think i didn't know it was U. U reek Raichand. (Jeh whizzed straight to Abhay holding his jacket) U sure don't know when to change your clothes do U?
Abhay in an odd way found Jeh a little fascinating and stupid at the same time losing ones temper was the fastest way to going up- I was already on my way home. U don't live this way. So tell me Jeh why are U looking at me like i have stolen your favourite toy. Its not my fault T doesn't want U or your little sister has developed a crush on me.
Jeh threatens Abhay-Stay the f**k away from my sister Raichand.
Abhay smiles-I am staying away. So long as U keep your sister away from me then we won't have a problem.
Edited by matwamango - 13 years ago

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