Opposite shores of a sea LAST Prt & EPILOGUE Pg 91 - Page 39

Originally posted by: priti11

Hey jazz awesooome upd. dear...

loved it...cont.soon...

thanx for the pm...

take care...

Thanks priti

Thought of the day:
"No one else can make you happy YOU have to do that for yourself."

Originally posted by: anshra

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<font size="4"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Jazz I loved the update👏</font></font>

<font size="4"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Hey don't end so soon</font></font>

<font size="4"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Atleast 5 more updates</font></font>

<font size="4"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">And that too happy ones</font></font>

Thnx Annie
wow 5 updates!!??? Sorry Annie but the story is already near to it's end! How can I extend it into 5 parts?? 😕 but I'll try as much as I can... But no promises 😉

Thought of the day:
No one else can make you happy YOU have to do that for yourself.

Great part...
Plz dont end ...
Loved it...

Part 9

Suddenly her hand moves a tiniest fraction of a centimetre in his hand.

He looked at her surprised and said "Geet?"

And the hand moved again.

He yelled towards the door "DOCTOR!! NURSE!!!!"

In the next few seconds, doctors were examining Geet.

Maan was standing at a side while still holding Geet's hand.

After some time, the doctor said "Congratulations Mr. Maan! She is out of danger now!!!"

Maan felt million emotions passed through him.

Doctor said "Don't worry she will wake up pretty soon... I think your love is very strong! Otherwise we had given up hope as she had so much blood loss and she wasn't responding to the treatment! But I think she is very lucky that she has come back to you after going so close to death."

Maan looks at Geet's face with pain-filled eyes. The pain of thinking to loose her forever was still visible in his eyes. And he said "No doctor, I'm very lucky that she didn't leave me!"

Doctor smiles at Maan and then says formally "But now you have to take extra care of her. Make sure she doesn't stress about anything."

Maan looks at Geet and then looks at doctor and said "Thankyou doctor."

And the doctor leaves.

Maan sits while still holding her hand and looking at her lovingly.

He promised himself that he will never put her in such a condition again. He will love her so much that she will forget the pain and hurt of all these years. He will leave everything for her.

The fear of loosing her has changed him completely. He was a brand new person now.

He was still looking at Geet with love-filled eyes.

After some time Geet opens her eyes slowly and saw Maan looking at her with concerned expression.

She said weakly without thinking "Did I die?"

Maan frowns at her question but remembers doctor's words of not stressing her and said lovingly "No."

Geet opens her eyes fully and looks around her surrounding. She is in an unfamiliar white room with green curtains. And she realised that she is in the hospital room.

She remember the probable reason of her being here.

She remembers his last words to her... His rejection... His harsh words... That he doesn't want her... That he hates her now... And he's gonna send her back!!! She couldn't take it anymore!! The pain in her heart was too much to bear!!! So she has decided to end this pain forever...

She has decided that she will never hope again! She will never dream again!!! Because who would know better than her that how it feels when your hopes shatter in front of your eyes!!! Who would know better than her that how much it hurts when the broken pieces of your dreams prick your eyes!!! The pain of breaking her last hope, her only dream... was too much for her. She was sick of this endless pain and agony. So she chose to end it forever!!! She knew there's only one way to finish this pain... And that is with her life...

Is it so wrong to wish for peace in place of pain???? Is that too much to ask for???

She remembers her slitting her wrist. She hasn't even felt the pain in her hand while the blood oozed out of her hand!! The only pain that she was feeling, was the pain in her heart!!! The pain in her heart has reached to such extent, that she has stopped feeling any other physical pain a long time ago!!!

She looks at her bandaged wrist. She remembers herself sitting at the foot of the tree waiting for the pain to end for forever.

It was so peaceful... Death was so peaceful...

She looks at Maan and then remembers vaguely him calling her name...and then he hugged her maybe?? And had said something more but she couldn't remember. And then everything went dark...

She didn't wanted to wake up to the same pain and anguish that she has been living from last 5 years...

Was it so wrong to choose peaceful death over painful life??? Was it so wrong to choose endless sleep over endless hurt???

No, she does not regret her decision!!! But she do regret that she is still alive!!! Because she knows that this might be her last moments with him. After this, he is gonna leave her to live the life which was worse than hell!!!

She knew that life, and that's why she doesn't want to go back to that life!!!

So if she was ending her life, what was wrong in it??? Doesn't she even have the right on her own life now???

She looked at him angrily and said "Did you saved me?"

He said smiling with unshed tears "Yes."

"Why?" she asked with indifference.

Maan was too happy that she was fine now that he didn't wanted to get into any kinda argument with her just now.. He just wanted to live in the moment where Geet was safe!!! He was aware that Geet is mad at him but he will pacify her... But first, he has to change the mood...

He said teasingly "I must say Geet, its a very good way of saying thank you!"

Geet frowns at his sudden change of behaviour but didn't say anything.

He smiles and says playfully "Hey Babaji! Kya zamaana aa gaya hai!! Log kehne par bhi thank you nahin kehte!!!" he teased her.

Geet didn't know what has gotten into him!!! Did he had some weird case of amnesia??? But still she doesn't say anything and kept on looking at him frowning...

He shakes his head faking disappointment and says "You're welcome Geet!" and smiles at her.

Geet says suspiciously "Maan, are you ok??"

He said playfully "Geet, bimaar tum ho, main nahin!" and he chuckles.

Now Geet was getting frustrated with his behaviour. Here she was...tried to kill herself some hours ago because of him, and here he was...joking around!!! Nothing was making any sense!!!

Maan has decided that he will not give her even a slightest pain now. He will just give her love and smiles, so he was trying to make the situation light in the hope of getting a smile from her.

But who will tell him that it wasn't a good time to joke around. It was a delicate situation in which Geet needed his love not teasing!!!

Geet said narrowing her eyes angrily "For your kind information, I'm not sick! I'm perfectly fine!! And even if I am sick, why do you care?? Aur waise bhi, what are you doing here? Didn't you said so many times that you don't love me?? So why are you here?"

He still tried to keep it light and says with teasing in his tone "Geet, did you hit your head too?? I think it was obvious that I'm taking care of you, because obviously you are not capable of looking after yourself!!" he chuckles teasingly.

Geet narrows her eyes and says "Thank you very much for your concern! But I'm totally capable of looking after myself!"

Maan smiles seeing that his trick is working slowly. Geet's mind is getting diverted from pain. He continued teasingly "Yeah that I saw few hours ago with your little smart act of taking care of yourself!!"

Someone please tell Maan to shut up!!!! Is this what he calls deviating attention???

Geet says angrily "Kiyun Maan, Aap to yehi chahte the na, ke main aapki zindagi se chali jaaoon?? Then I was just fulfilling your wish!! So why are you here?? Is it that you want to see to it that if I reach my home safely or not?? That you want to see that how I die in each second of my life without you??"

She didn't realise how much her words were hurting him.

She said determinedly "Then I'm sorry Maan! Your this wish is not gonna be fulfilled!!! Because I'm NOT going back! And you can't make me either!!! You don't wanna be with me? Fine! I get it!! My life was yours Maan. Maine apni zindagi ka har pal aapke naam kar diya tha!! But you don't have any right on my death!!! And you can't snatch that right from me!!! You didn't let me die today? Fine!! But how far will you stop me Maan??!! As soon as I'll put my foot out of this place, I'll end this life!!!"

"GEEET!!!!!" he couldn't take it anymore. If she hurts him, he can endure it!! If she even kills him for giving pain to her, he will take it with a smile!! But he can't endure her talking about taking her life away!!

And he realised what he has done!!! He has given her so much pain, that she has ceased feeling any other pain!!! He controls himself and says in pain-filled voice

"I'm sorry Geet! I know I have hurted you a lot!! And no words are gonna cover up the pain that I gave you!! But trust me Geet, I have died more excruciating death every time I hurted you! Only I know how much it has hurted me to hurt you!! You saw that I hurted you! But did you saw how much it hurted me?? But did you ever thought Geet? That why did I do this?? Did you ever thought that I could also be breaking inside every time I saw tears in your eyes?? Especially when I was the reason for those tears!! Only I knew how much I wished that you start hating me, even when the very thought shattered me into million pieces!! Because in that way, you would've moved on in life!!! Did you ever thought Geet, that I might be dying too bit by bit, inch by inch, seeing you unable to hate me and giving yourself pain?? My life is just darkness Geet!! Did you ever thought, that how could I drag you into the darkness with me when I have only wished light and happiness for you?? How easily you tried to end your life!" he closed his eyes to control the pain of mere saying those words. "Did you ever thought Geet, that what I had to go through with the mere thought of loosing you??" the tears were not ready to stop from both of their eyes...

Maan cups her face in his hands and said "Don't you ever do this to me again Geet!!! I can't live without you!! I can endure anything Geet, but I can't see you hurting yourself!!! I love you Geet!!! I love you more than anything!!!!"

Geet felt so happy right now!!! How much she was dying to hear this from him!!! And at last he has admitted it to her. She felt out of this world!!!

But then suddenly a fearful thought occurred in her mind. She is definitely dreaming... or worse, dead!!!

And when she's gonna wake up, or 'if' she's gonna wake up, she's gonna be all alone!!! Because there is no way that Maan is confessing his love to her so easily.

So this means that this is all in her head?? Either she's dreaming or hallucinating!! But even if this is her hallucination, this is the most beautiful hallucination of hers.

His next words broke her thoughts and brought her to reality and made her realise that this is not a dream. Life still sucks!!!

Now his mind has slowly starting to think rationally with all the fear leaving of loosing Geet. And he realised what he's doing!! He is dragging Geet into darkness with him.

His resolution of staying away from her has broke but still he thought he will try one last time. It tears his heart into million pieces but he knew he has to at least try once.

He said "But we can't be together anymore Geet!!" One part of his heart screaming at him, crying at him, begging at his feet not to say these words and hoping that Geet doesn't listen to him; while another part of his heart wants her to accept this fact because it's in her best interest. He closed his eyes to control the pain in his heart and said "Please understand Geet! I'm saying this because it's best for you!! I love you Geet that's why I can't ruin your life!!"

He waited with closed eyes for Geet's verdict. He didn't knew if he was strong enough to look into her eyes anymore because he knew that if he does, the selfish part of his heart is gonna win over his better judgement.

He heard her say "Kaash!" He opens his eyes and looks at her. She has unshed tears in her eyes which were acting like daggers to him...

"Kaash aap meri zindagi ke faisle karne ka haq mujhe dete!! I just wish that you let me live my life the way I want to live it Maan!!! I'm not a kid Maan!! I know what I want and whats best for me!! Don't you think that I deserve to have a say about how I want to spend the rest of my life and with whom I want to spend my life?? It might surprise you Maan, but I'm not a doll!! I have a heart too!! And surprisingly that heart beats too!!! And unfortunately, it breaks too!!! Aur jab dil toot-ta hai na Maan, to mujhe bhi utna hi dard hota hai, jitna is duniya mein kisi bhi zinda insaan ko dil tootne par hota hai!!!"

and she says sarcastically "And what did you said? That you are doing this because you love me? Achha hai Maan, Bohat achha hai!! You see it's no big deal!! Break my heart, make me cry, give me pain, hurt me to the core, kill me inside, leave me dying...why?... Because you love me!!!"

Every word of Geet was acting like a sharp needle in his heart.

He said "I'm sorry Geet, I know it's hurting you a lot now!! But trust me Geet, I'm doing this for your future! Because I'm not the same old Maan that was pure and innocent that you fell in love with!! I'm a sinner now Geet!! I have committed worse sins in the last 5 years!! I'm a murderer Geet!! And my sins would ruin you Geet!! You love me now, but with time you will hate me!! And then you will hate yourself for loving me!! I can see you hate me Geet!! But I wont be able to see you hate yourself!!"

Geet saw how much he's in pain. She said persuadingly "Maan, why are you ruining our present in the fear of probable future that might not even gonna happen!! I love you Maan! And I don't care who you are or what you do!! My love is not so weak Maan that it will frightens from some circumstances. My love is never gonna change for you Maan! Please mujhe khud se door mat kijiye!!!" she says with pleading eyes.

"Geet, you don't know what you are asking!! You have a family Geet, who loves you a lot!! Did you ever thought ke unpar kya beetegi jab unhe ye pata chalega, that you are choosing a criminal for your life partner?? Tumhara ghar se bahar nikalna mushkil ho jaayega!! Logo ki baatein sun paaogi???" he tried to reason with her but his resolution is already flickering!!!

Geet says confidently "Maan mom and dad has always liked you, I know they won't object!! And I don't care about what people say!!! I don't care about anybody Maan!!! But if it bothers you so much, then we will go far away from here!!! Where there will be just you, me, and our love!!! I can leave everything for you Maan!!!!"

Maan says "It might not work Geet!"

But there wasn't finality in his voice. Geet could see him resigning and she pressed further hopefully "Maan, it will work!!! You just have to trust me!!! We will go far away from here...the far the better! Where nobody knows us!!! And we will start our life from fresh start!!!" Geet didn't gave him time to reply and starts making plans of their running away.

"We would need some money for our initial days... Don't worry, I have some money in my bank account... I have to call home... I'll tell them I'm going on some friend's wedding or something... And after some time, I'll call them and tell them that I'm with you and we are not coming back..."

Maan looked at her with amused expression. Does she really think that he would elope with her like this???!!!!

Geet continued with her plans "You have to call your men and tell them to leave Pinky.. And maybe make some excuse that you are going out of town or something..."

Maan cuts her in between and says "Geet we are not running away!!!"

Geet tries to protest "But Maan..." Maan puts a finger on her lips and says "Shh!! Geet, I'm not saying that we can't be together, I'm just saying that we are not gonna elope like this!!" he cups her face in his hands and says "Geet, do you trust me?"

Geet nods a yes. No matter what has happened in their life, but it was true that she still trusts him...a lot!!

"Then have faith on me Geet! I promise you Geet that I will marry you in front of the whole world!!! But I just need some time... I will make myself worthy of you!! I will change Geet! I will leave everything!! I'm not gonna run away like a coward!!! I will face this world and I will win!!! We will win Geet!! I want you to be proud to be in love with me!!! I want that you could look in everybody's eyes and say that you love me!!! I don't want you to be ashamed when you say my name!!!"

"But Maan, I'm already proud of you!! I'm already proud that I love you!!! But more than that, I'm proud that you love me!!!"

"I know Geet! But will you be able to look into your parents' eyes and say that you want to spend your life with a criminal!!!"

Geet again tries to protest, but he didn't let her say anything and said "Geet, all I'm asking for is some time!!! Won't you give me just that much??"

Geet smiles sadly and says "I can give you my whole lifetime Maan!!! I will wait for you till eternity!!!"

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Part 10

the confession was too gud 👏 👏
kudos!!! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

so now maan vil change n mat makes a way to know his past dat why he left geet n entered d crime world

but the world is very cruel it vil take hell lot of efforts 4 maan to cum out of it n lead a normal life n though he wants to cums out of it the crime world vil nt let him out easily

Excellent update...loved it...
waiting for your next update...
please update soon...

Outstandng...awesme...superb...plz update next part soon.

aww dat was sucha cute part
finally confession hogaya
cont soon

harneet <3