realisation of love CH 6@PG9

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REALISATION OF LOVE

INDEX:-

CHAPTER 1:- PAGE 1

CHAPTER 2:- PAGE 1

CHAPTER 3:- PAGE 2

CHAPTER 4:- PAGE 4

CHAPTER 5:- PAGE 6

CHAPTER 6:- PAGE 9



She had been crying from the past 30 minutes like a small baby who has lost a favorite toy..

how can i celebrate my birthday on a day when my parents left me.. how can i celebrate happiness when the only source of happiness in my life left me... no ahem ji.. i wont celebrate my birthday... i don't want to disturb the soul of my parents...

ahem:- gopi.. who has told you are the reason behind your parents death??

my mami told me.

ahem:- and you believed it?? gopi i have spoken with your mamaji.. he has told me the truth of your parents death.. they died in an accident not on the day of your birth... Why are you taking responsibility of such a thing which u can never do???

ji... i have always respected my mami... as she was the only one left for me in this world after the death of my parents.. i always tried to make her happy..and find happiness in every little event that happened around me.. U only tell me... how could i disrespect them when they were the only one to provide me with shelter..

i dont know anything gopi.. get ready fast and come down... i have to show you something..

ji ahem ji

downstairs

ahem has called jitu, kokila,hetal,parag and chirag in the hall..

jitu:- kya hua ahem dikra..tumne aise achanak hi bula liya??

kokila:- ha ahem..bat kya hai..kuch to bolo...

ahem:- mom, m gopi ki wait kr rha hun... uske ane pr sab bta dunga...

(gopi enters the hall and greets everyone)

ahem:- gopi come here... mom papa..kaka uncle... maine gopi ko lekr kuch faisle kiye hain..

hetal:- bol na dikra... kya kehna chahta h tu??

mom, kaki m gopi ko kuch dino k liye shimla lekr jana chahta hun... i need your permission

kokila:- pr ahem..

ahem:- mom.. please dont stop me... gopi has already suffered a lot.. now i dont want her to suffer anymore..

kokila:- ok ahem.. you can take her.. i am happy with your decision..

ahem:- thank you mom... gopi.. come with me(he drags her out of the hall and everyone stands there as a statue)

will ahem realise his love towards gopi??? will he confess it to her??? how would gopi react ??


To find answers to these questions... wait for the second part


guys do tell me..how was the first part..should i continue it?? waiting for ur comments and likes...

Any one who wants me to pm whenever i post the next chapter.. please post it in ur comment

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Posted: 13 years ago
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waiting already...
we need answers soon... good attempt nice part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start can't wait for the next part!!
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nice part.eagerly waiting for more
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good start plz keep type
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hello every one!! i am sorry for being very late in posting updates for the ff but i had my exams so could not form a new chapter...

here i am with a new update..



ahem dragged gopi to his room and asked her to sit. she was scared of him so moved a few steps but did not sit. ahem noticed the signs of hesitation on her face but he wanted her to feel comfirtable in her own way. he came towards her and made her sit on the bed and himself sat on the knees in front of her.
gopi, i have always tortured you, harassed you, never thought you as my wife, please forgive me.. i was a fool to think bad about you. please forgive me. i want to have a new relation with you. i would marry you once again and take all the vouches again.. please forgive me..
gopi who was shedding tears of joy, holded ahem by his shoulders and made him comfirtable on the bed and said ahem ji, i am your wife, u have the freedom to treat me as you want.. i am very lucky to get a husband like you. please don't ask pardon from me. i am glad that you are ready to give a second chance to our relation and move on to have a peaceful life. ahem ji, i promise you that i will always be by ur side and support you in whatever you do.


gohem hug and the scene shifts to the hall where hetal n kokila are discussing about the gohem trip..
mota bhabhi hme bacho k jane k liye sbhi intezam jldi se krne chahiye.. acha h thoda samay(time) ek sath bitayenge to ek dusre ko or samajh payenge...
ha kokila yeh tumne thik kha.. ahem bohot khush tha aj.. bs meri to bhgwan se yhi dua h ki in dono ki jodi hamesha bani rhe...

THE NEXT MORNING
gohem are packing their bags and ahem accidently brushes his arm on gopi's waist... they have a cute romantic moment but are disturbed by kokila at the door step..

ahem, sara saman rkh liya na?
ji mom.

gopi, yeh kuch khane pine ka saman h.. ise dhyan se rkh lo..
ji maaji
kokila hugs both of them and blesses them with a long life ahead.. gohem now move towards the car after taking blessings from every one..
gopi keeps all the luggage in the back seat and gets in the car but ahem comes there and asks her to sit in the seat next to him..
gopi blushes and shyly gets in the car..

ahem gets on the drivers seat and whhooosh goes their car..

gopi is looking around very cutely and is amused by the beauty outside.. she is so engrossed in sight seeing that she does not realise that ahem had stopped the car and was smitten by her beauty. she was wearing a beautiful pink net saree

gopi was loving the scenic beauty when she realised a cold hand on her arms.. she immediately turned her face and was surprised to see the spark in ahem's eyes. she could clearly see love in them..


PRECAP:- GOHEM IN THE HOTEL ROOM AND AHEM IS FEEDING GOPI WITH HIS HANDS

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hope you did well in your exams!!!

It was a great update!!
Nice to see Ahem taking charge and moving his relationship on!!
Love the precap, can't wait for your next update!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: NazmaJ

Hope you did well in your exams!!!

It was a great update!!
Nice to see Ahem taking charge and moving his relationship on!!
Love the precap, can't wait for your next update!!!



Thanks a lot dear!! i had rocking exams this time...

will try updating it soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice strt cant wait for the nxt part please do continue 👍🏼
















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thanks both of you... will try and update soon :) :)

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