-|OS: Sabki Baaratein Aayeen|- - Page 3

Originally posted by: jasminedayal18

hey!!
hi.
i love the ff
thank you, glad to know you liked the OS but it's just that, a one time shot, not really a full fledged fanfic.
please continue it dear
honestly, i doubt i'll continue this scene.
n i must say that u are a gifted writer.. .. u write every thing in a flow which takes the reader in a world where he/she can actually imagine every thing happening right in front of him/her...
thank you once again, glad to know you think so :)
about the os:-

i loved the way gopi gave expressions to ahem while singing.. i could actually imagine the scene very well!!

thanks, i figured it wouldn't be much without any expressions. -.-
n the way she potrayed her emotion is just awesome!! i can't seem to stop thanking you.
the gesture of forgiving ahem--even though he does not deserve it, is a lso very sweet(u have actually potrayed a true indian lady here who can never speak ill of her husband)
some deserve a second chance, and gopi has the heart that is far too kind and forgiving for someone so small.
n ya.. i would really want gopi to be as strong as she is in here!!!
if only, right
a perfect os
thank you.
i would surely give u a 100 on 100

a perfect score, 😆 thanks again.