it sounds great..waiting to read chapter 1..do post soon..and all the for best ur ff..! am sure it will rock!! :)
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it sounds great..waiting to read chapter 1..do post soon..and all the for best ur ff..! am sure it will rock!! :)
Originally posted by: ~~ MICK ~~
kya dhasu intro hai re... looks so promising... :) :)PM me everytime u update..
Vancouver
It is early morning and the sun is jut rising. The birds chirp their first sound for the day as if to represent sun's first rays falling upon their nests. As the sun rises above the horizon, the place is filled with musical beats. In a silent, deserted corner of a park, the sound is coming from the small portable CD player. A bench is nearby and iPhone along with car keys are kept there. A girl is dancing vigorously to the hard beats of the music. As the beats increase, the speed increases as well and without any hardship, the girl keeps up with the beats. Dancing as passionately and graceful as no one else.
It seems as if she can dance forever and ever with no stopping. No mistakes and none of the steps were off beat. She danced adding pop and gymnastic movements at points. Hair falling on her face but not seeming to disturb her at all. She was wearing lavender sweat pants and matching tank with a white and lavender color mixed hairband. She also had a white sports wrist band on.
Few minutes later, on the other side of the park yet close to the girl, a middle aged women close to her 30's stops jogging as she hears this amazing beat of music. She removes her earphones as if to make sure she is hearing the voice and not imagining it. Curiosity gets the best of her and she starts following the sound. With each step, she comes closer to the dancer. She freezes seeing the scene in front of her. She had seems amazing natural sights before, but never had she came across this natural dancer before. She herself was one and even she couldn't think of dancing like this.
All the emotions could be seen through her dance. The girl suddenly stopped dancing and stood in the pose for few seconds catching her breath. It seems as if she stopped when she could no longer bear the pain that was subsided inside of her. She dropped on the floor and her head was slow. The women gathered up the nerve to say, "Excuse me?"
Hearing the voice, she moved her hair aside and looked up. She saw the women and immediately stood up. She hadn't noticed her there. In her melodic voice, she spoke, "I'm sorry. Didn't mean to disturb you."
The woman walked closer, "No you didn't. You're an amazing dancer. Hi, I'm Vaibhavi."
"Who wouldn't know you!" saying so she picked up her car keys and picked up her phone. Vaibhavi kept on walking closer to her. "You're an amazing dancer. Didn't know that in Vancouver I'll find such a mind-blowing talent!"
Girl smiled at her not wanting to be rude and said, "Thank you!" She looked at her phone and saw three missed calls from Sonia. She got scared and called her saying 'Excuse me" to Vaibhavi.
Sonia picks up her cell: "Hey Kria!"
Kria sits on the bench and asks with worried voice, "Where are you? You're okay na?"
Rahul takes the cell from Sonia's hand, "Chill Kria. She's with me. I had to kidnap her to spend time with her. Where are you?"
What the hell Rahul! Warn me before I get a heart attack. Did she finish her studies?" Sonia does medical school and thus is in her last year of college before her internship starts.
Rahul gave a reply to which Kria replied angrily, "What? Get her home now. Before I get home she should be home, ready and done with her homework." Saying so she cut the phone.
Rahul said to Sonia, "Lakshmi Bai Mode. Let's go."
Sonia muttered, "Oh S**T." without wasting a second, both jumped in Rahul's car and Sonia sat in the back completing her assignment while Rahul drove crazily to get to their house. It was 15 minutes away from Rahul's apartment and Part was 7 minutes away from their house. So there was more for Rahul and Sonia to accomplish and little time.
Back at park, Vaibhavi, "Can I talk to you for a second. Promise not to keep you waiting long."
Kria nodded and looked at her. She continued, "You said 'Who doesn't know you'. Meaning you are aware of All Star Competition?"
Her face took up the grave and hurt expression and said sternly, "Yes."
Vaibhavi was all excited. "Then why don't you audition? As you might know, I'm one of the judges. You already have my vote. If my co-judge loves it then you could even be the winner."
Flashes of graduation day came in her mind. Her along with her friends throwing their caps high up in the sky, jumping in the sky, hugging each other. She fought back the tears and said, "Thanks for thinking about it but I've stopped performing and auditioning for anything. I'm sorry. I'll have to leave now."
She was about to pick up the CD player when Vaibhavi spoke again, "In case you change your mind, here are the papers." Kria took them with a feeble smile. She knew she wouldn't even look at it again. But not to be rude, she took it and giving one last smile to her, she left.
Watching Kria's figure going away from her she spoke in hushed voice, "Something's wrong. Or else even people who don't know dancing come to audition just for the sake of seeing Rey!"
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Precap: (Won't give any as of now since it's only the beginning.)
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