FF#TUM KAISI MOHABBAT KARTE HO ch# 26, pg 69, 1/6 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
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i'll reply u all on ur comments later. thanks to all of u.😊
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Originally posted by: annokhi

i'll reply u all on ur comments later. thanks to all of u.😊




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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome FF ...loved it...
please update soon ...
and add me in ur pm list ...
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Originally posted by: repunzell

yipppeee...hurrrayyy👏!!!


prem n heer became frnds againnn ⭐️!!! thank u shubh coz of ur evil plans😡 which will not be fulfilled coz prem heard it...yesshhh👍🏼!!!!

love the way prem was thinkin abt heer whn shubh was talkin abt heer😳!


okay i won't imagine abt the mysterios man bt thiz mysterios entry will definitely help prem in protecting heer n also will takes no stone ntrn in blossomin premeer love😆!!!

update soon

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Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeee too good very nice part waitinggg for next asap

hey for liking😊
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CHAPTER 5 (new misterious entry)



Anmol enter. Heer confuse between many emotions or feelings. Anmol ne ek nazar us ke hath pe dali jo prem k hath main tha then he smiles as he said dekha maine kaha tha na. PH shake hand over and both r very happy and excited.
"BHAI" prem and heer says in chorus and run towards him.
Both hug him. Anmol ne dono ko tigthly hug kiya. And ask heer.

Anmol: tum ne likha tha?

No one understand, heer smiles and said: next time se must likhungi.

Anmol: main baqi sab se mil lun.
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NEXT DAY:
shub said everything to his mother. She is worried now.
S.ma: shub tum pehle kehte ab kuch nahi hosakta.

Shub: main pehle bhi kehta tab bhi ap yehi kehti.

S.ma: heer apni dono dadiyon ki ladli hai, bohat pyar karti hai wo us se is liye tumhari baat koi na sunega na manega.

Shub: janta hun tabhi tou aapse keh raha hun k aap plz mera saath den. I don't love heer. I love aastha.

S.ma: har maa ko uske bache ki khusi pyari hoti hai mujhe bhi hai tum fikar mat karo tumhari shadi astha se hi hogi. Lekin kaise?

Shub: thanx mom. Ap pareshan na hon main sab sambhal lun ga aap bus mujhe support karna. Ab aap dadi k pas jaen or wohi kahen jo main ab kehne wala hun.

Shub say something to his mom which make her tensed but he feel evil happiness.
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Ek room main bilkul andhera hai sirf bech main roshni hai jahan ek painting ka samaan rakha hai. Tabhi andhere main se ek hath aya, us hath ne pencil pakri hui thi.
Phir wo jo koi bhi tha usne skatch bana na shru kiya. Just eye skatching k baad wo ruk gaya. Or us adhuri tasweer se kaha:

" Just eyes, u know i love ur eyes and specially lips. I dn't want to skatch ur lips i want to feel ur lips softness. But dn't worry i complete u". Phir usnay us tasweer k side main ye likh diya.
"SARGAM"

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Agni villa:

Heer teris pe rakha achar lene i thi. Prem wahan anmol se baaten kar raha tha. Anmol k phone ne ring kiya tou wo uth k chala gaya. Prem saw heer. Heer look confuse prem move towards her.

Heer her self: uff ye dadi or maa bhi naa! Ek hi din main itne achar dalne ki kiya zarurat thi. Ab mujhe kaise pata k kon achar sabzi ka hai.

Prem stand behind heer and lisen whole sentece.

Prem: mmm... Main kuch madad karun.

Heer turns (in head): lo mujhe nahi pata inhen kaise pata hoga.

Prem check all jars and said to heer.

" ye lo sabzi ka mix achar"
heer usay aise dekh rahi thi jaise usay yakeen nahi araha.

Prem: jis achar main gajar dikh rahi ho wo mix ya sabzi ka achar hai. Now can i taste it?

Heer move her neck up and down to say yes.

Prem taste and say: mmm it sooo yummy aah.

Heer itni ajeb tarah se usay dekh rahi thi k wo ek sec k liye ghabra gaya.

Prem: taste it.

Heer: thanx main nahi khati.

Prem: oh! O.k

dono thori der khamosh rahe jaise kuch kehna bhi hai or keh bhi nahi pa rahe and after that both go back to ground flore seprately. Anmol watch them and take a long breath.

Anmol: is dosti main se "formal" or "hezitation" naam k kanton ko ab mujhe hi nikalna parega.

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Sanskriti enter in agni vila. Ahem saw her.

Ahem: tum kabhi apne ghar main bhi rehliya karo. Jab dekho yahan hoti ho.

Sans: what do u mean han?

Ahem: nothing sirf itna keh raha hun k apna boriya bistar or kapre wagera le ao kiya faida raat ko sonay k liye jati ho subha bina mun dhoae yahan chali ati ho kitni energy waist hoti hogi naa.

Sanskriti gussay se bina kuch kahe wapis chali gai.
Ahem: oops! Shayad kuch zayada hogaya.

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Prem niwas:

Shub lounge ki taraf aya jahan heer preet ko pilow se mar rahi thi or wo bohat maze se pit raha tha. Both r laughing and enjoy each other company. Shub's evil smiled and said in heart to heer:
just wait heer kal ki subah bohat achi hogi "mere liye".

On other hand in agni niwas kunal and astha talk about shub and heer engagement. Prem just listen this convo.

Astha: shub is so lucky k heer usey as life patner mili.

Kunal: or heer?

Astha: aaan... I think shub order pasand hai or heer is so soft in nature tou... I dn't say anything.

Kunal (focus prem): u mean k heer kisi k liye bhi lucky ho sakti hai.

Astha: yah.

Kunal: or shub k liye heer? Tou kyun na shub se heer ko save karte hain or kisi or ki shadi karwa dete hain. Wat say?

Astha: shub ki adat ko badalna hoga heer k liye. Or kis larki ki baat kar rahe ho?

Prem interfair: tum., tum karlo shub se shadi.

Astha saw and saw and saw him and faint.

Kunal: abey tunay ye kya kiya?
Prem try to woke up her.

Prem in head: bechari just imagine pe ye haal hogaya jab proposal ayega tou kahin coma main na chali jae. Dekhte hain shub tumhari waja se or kya kya hona baqi hai.



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at night:

heer in her room. Thinking about sanskriti who is not take her call.
Heer: aj i bhi nahi, msg ka jawab bhi nahi de rahi or call bhi receive nahi kar rahi. Kiya karun? Han e-mail karti hun.

She operate her computer, and login to her i.d.

Heer: inbox 250 mails. OMG! Kiya yar jab itna gep de k login hogi tou aisa hi hoga heer madam.

She click inbox and shocked after saw sender name. Page show only one sender name.

Heer: kon hai ye last 6 month se pareshan kar raha hai.
She open 1 of them and read.

"I want to hold your hands and walk a mile
don't wont to miss u, even a while

My life is so beautiful cause
Dear, its you..My LIFE

Hug me for my worries to die
my tears to dry and
my loneliness to fly

It hurts me to know
how i sometimes can be a little selfish
when it comes to you.

I am getting sentimental over you!
for god sake explain me why all this..

I miss you every moment of the day,
I keep me awake just to listen to you,
I keep me empty just for you to fill,
i keep me alive just to see you.

My mornings miss you,
my evenings seeks you
Where were you all these years,
why weren't there to wipe me tears.

Fear of the future is worst then pain of the past
still I bother the least, cause you are there

even seconds are too long to miss you
I want to hold your hands and walk a mile
don't wont to miss u, even a while"

heer confused wid littel worry but she like this poem.


Precape:
*Heer cry
*Anmol make a secrate plane.

Edited by annokhi - 13 years ago
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butterfly
Oh,,, anmol is the mysterious entry????but is the painter the mysterios person..
At least that jerk said the truth to his mother
but i don't think shubh is upto somegood.. but i wouldn't mind if he does something that causes premeer to be one i.e married...

Hope anmol succeed in his work!!!
Eagerly waiting for the next part!!!
butterfly
The part was really really awesome!!!


Thanks for the pm!!!



Edited by zigzagway_sadi - 13 years ago
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an update... what to say... it was too good... actually i loved it.. and enjoyed reading full emotions
i loved it from the bottom of my heart.. loved loved loved
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but i dont understand this shubh is he crazy and all???
and his mom is helping him even after knowing everythng??

and i m really feeling bad for heer
but prem is there no... may be hay only gets married??? what say??
just guseesing or can call a prediction...
and fainted??? prem is right now is she faints what will she do if she comes to know everythng???
and what is shubh planning to do???
i super excited to know
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the update was awesome...
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restless for the next part..
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thank you fr the wonderful update and comment
love you take care...



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