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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
reserved..

*Edited*

Oh gosh Angel..this is one bang-on idea..:D I mean seriously hell ova refreshing...:D I really wanna see how you will shape up this story...as usual m all in..all excited n geared up to read ahead !! :P :D...and please daily updates !!
you,as always were MINDBLOWING...ab toh its seriously an understatement :P...lol..Anyways, m sure u will do great justice to this one too...😃
and I am late...sorry for that..but 8 pages done already..WOW!! :D see my Angel n her stories are sooo loved !! *touchwood*...🤗
Do take care...love you loads...and CONTINUE SOON!! real SOON!!❤️
Edited by Nikita-Sharma - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Lmfao

Sheesh

I laughed so badly

Amazing

Let's see whts gonna happen
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Welcome back Fantuu...😳
missed u...🤗
luvd n enjoyed reading it...🤣
i guess this is the first time u r writing smthing like this na...Hmmm...bohat maza aye ga...😉😆
luv u fantu...❤️
just continue soon...God Bless😳

Annu😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
thank u for the over - whleming response people🤗

Chapter # 2

"shut up!!", nupur shouted, "get here in the next half an hour, I need to read what that idiot has written in his will", she threw away the phone in anger and sat down biting her lip.

"this can't be true, my whole year hardwork can't go in a waste, it just can't"

Half an hour passed in her anxiety, where she had ripped off her nails and corroded away the expensive Italian polish over the wooden rocking chair.

'Mayank Sharma wants to see you ma'am", the servant said respectfully. "send him in", she tried hard to control her desperation but failed.

The servant nodded and went outside, while mayank entered in a second, "do u mind if I say ur servant was wrong, Mayank Sharma actually wants to kiss you", he smirked closing the door behind and nupur glared.

Mayank Sharma, the best lawyer of the town looked heart throbbing with his smirk. Perfect features and that strong scent was a drug, but not currently for nupur

."I am not in any mood to cater ur flirting today", she walked to him and snatched the file from his hand while giggling mayank threw himself on the couch.

"reading won't help, it says all what I told you sweetheart", he said yawning and nupur passed him a skeptical glance, "seems u didn't sleep last night"?:

"yeah!, new girlfriend you know, so was just exploring and ..

"shut up!, tell me the solution", she threw away the file and walked towards him, crossing her arms around her stomach.

"I told u already", he stood up, "marry me!!", he opened his arms and nupur breathed deep.

"mayank..

"nupur..

He imitated her and trying hard to control her anger she smiled, "I am not the marriage, material mayank, why ruining your life'

"well , a right over your body is a profit deal all the way!"

"find me a solution!!", she said angrily

"there is NO solution!!, you need to get married!, it is written in clear cut words"

"Damnit!", closing her eyes she sat down on the sofa, hiding her face in her palms. She was feeling helpless all of a sudden, everything she had planned was going down the drain and she just couldn't let that happen, not at any cost!.

"and what if I don't marry"?, she raised her head and found mayank pouring wine in the delicate crystal glass.

"mayank!!"

"yes ", he turned holding the glass,

"where will the money go if I don't marry?

Shaking his head, he sipped wine, "they'll go in a noble cause of getting orphan girls married", he smiled innocently and nupur closed her eyes in anguish.

"Bloody moron he was!, when did he write this will?', she asked.

"umm, maybe a month ago, when he was diagnosed tumor, that very day"

'and why the hell didn't u ..

'relax!", he placed his hand over her shoulder, "this will wasn't written in front of me, he wrote it and placed it in the bank, only to be submitted after his death"

Completely clueless over what next to do, she again started biting her nails, or rather, already bitten nails. Mayank smiled seeing her nervous habit and expected what next was to come.

"I need another lawyer, you are of no use!", she said with anger and giggling mayank gulped down the whole glass of wine.

"yeah, and now next you would suspect that this will is not the original, right"?, he smirked and confused over his confident sight, she sighed and glared.

"help me mayank, I want this money , this is mine!, I want it',

This was it. No matter how evil and crook she was, no matter how disgusting moves she had chosen in her life, this innocent , scared look was infectious.

"u'll have to marry nupur, there is no other option."

He never gave fake consolations, no matter how much he wanted to in some situations, but he never gave them.

"damnit!, what the hell is this!, who will I marry?'

"do u want me to go on my knees and propose?', he blinked his eyes and nupur stared.

"shut up!, this is serious!", she huffed and turned away, "mayank ..

"one more word and I'll kiss you to make u quiet"

"shut up!, I can't marry you"

"and why is that", he asked, with great interest.

"I just can't, you find me someone who can marry me for a short while, as in contract marriage, I'll pay the person , just ..

Okay, I'll find you a person!, now can I leave", he asked and nupur nodded, "yes please .. go!", saying it in an irritated voice, she sighed while mayank stormed out of the room.

*

"Mayank Sharma you are dead"

A week later, this was how mayank woke up one morning, with nupur shouting in his ears.

"ouch nupur, I am not deaf", he murmured and snuggled further in bed, although this sleepy voice did some unsual things to her nerves, but still other matters were more important.

"stop showing off your sexy sleepy voice and answer, where is the person I am supposed to marry??", she shouted, completely helpless if only she could travel through the phone lines and enter his room.

"to see him sleeping?😲

NO!! To question him more properly!. Urgh nupur!.😡

"Hello!!, there?, he asked in a proper voice this time and nupur breathed deep, "yes I am here and you answer, where the hell is the person??

"you mean your groom?', he giggled

"yes!!, my groom, my to be husband, my to be life partner. .. my ..

"alright, I am coming over, we'll discuss", he disconnected the phone.

Words "husband" and "life partner" made him go green.

**

"it's been 25 days, there is no resistance from the society, everyone is insisting I should marry, everything is perfect, I just need a groom!!. ", she said pacing around, while mayank was peacefully sipping wine.

"nupur this is not that easy, we need to find a trust worthy person, a person who understands that he is entering a farce and is wise enough to handle all the legal complexities and someone so capable enough to handle you!!, just relax, we aren't finding a person with a B.A degree and a perfect 9 ' 5 job!!, you need to marry someone equally greedy as you",

"mayank!!', nupur gasped at the last part of the sentence and he simply raised his eyes, "what?, am I wrong?", raising an eyebrow he glared and nupur turned his face away.

"yes you are right!!, but

"no ifs and buts, don't stress me, this isn't easy okay!!", he stood up and went away.

As, he went, nupur went to splash cold water over her face. This had to sort out, how come there is no possible person left on this earth to marry for money, it is just a matter of some days, until the property shifts to my name, how come!! .."

After dinner, she lied down in her silk blanket and again started thinking about the whole farce.

Mayank was right, she just couldn't marry anyone, there had to be a very trustworthy person

Mayank.

Expert in handling legal complexities.

Mayank.

Someone to handle her.

Mayank.

Someone as greedy as her.

Mayank.

Mayank!!.

Nupur sat up and took some deep breaths. Indeed mayank is the only person she could get married too. Someone like him. There was no problem in that, no bloody problem.

"Mayank!",

The very next minute she was on the call with mayank.

"yes nupur, "

Sigh! ' again sleepy voice.

"mayank I guess u were right!, I should just stop looking for any other person, are u still interested in your proposal?",

"huh?, wait let me pinch myself, I am sure I am dreaming.

"shut up mayank!

"ouch, yes, so it is reality, come again nupur",

Nupur took a deep breath. How could she ever think that mayank will agree easily, he is getting the ultimate chance to tease and black mail her.

"alright, I know that you are going to tease me, but I guess you are the best person I can get married too, trust worthy, sharp, intelligent and greedy as me", she smiled and mayank chuckled.

"good you know all my talents so well",

"mayank, can we just cut the crap and talk business".

""can we just let the night pass and talk in the morning"

"NO!", she cried desperately, "you answer now!, you will marry me na?, haina mayank?".

She is crook. How effortlessly she brings that sugar and honey dipped texture of voice in her constant rude style of speaking, making sure he loses all his beats. Sometimes he doubted that she knew to what extent does her pleading effects him.

"you are evil nupur!!", he sighed and nupur got confuse, she waited through a couple of seconds, but he was silent.

"mayank?"

"start practicing to say hubby dear, what about tomorrow afternoon?"

He smiled and knowing that her face had the same expression, he disconnected the phone.

Nupur stared at the phone for a moment and then jumped ecstatically, "YAYYY!!, I LOVE YOU MAYANK!!".

Chapter 3 - Page 14

Edited by Fantasia. - 13 years ago
aysha1989 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
I just loved it... Thank you so much 😃
Cant wait to read more... 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
APIII...
i loved it...😍
i loved it lodsss...😳😍😳
awesome part...👏👍🏼👏
gosh...u jst created another MAGIC again...😍😳😍
m sooo loving dis ff...😳
sooo beautifully written...👏⭐️👏
woaaa...total hatke!!!!!!!!!😉 u see!!!!!
i love dis GREEDY MayUr...😆😆
wow...so Nupur wanna see him sleeping han!!!!!😉
n d way Mayank talked to her wen he entered to her room...😳
god...dat was damn unexpected...😳😆😉
bt i truly loved dis 2 greedy ppl...😳😆😳
dis is something sooo different n sooo awesome ya...👏😳👏
m already feeling greedy for daily update...😆😳
bt i know it wont happen😔...bt still i jst loved it...😳
do i need to mention again dat...😉
hw BRILLIANT WRITER U R...⭐️⭐️⭐️
i loved it to d core...😳
n u know wht m really missing my Mehak Api's comment on dis awesome ff...😔😒😔
i want her back here like b4...😒
love u my both APIs lodsss...🤗🤗
waiting super eagerly for d next update...😳
so i think i dont need to tell u dat i want an update asap!!!!!!😉
May ALLAH bless u 2 alwaysss...
love u...🤗🤗🤗

ps: i love ur signature line...😳

Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
GOD they both r greedy...😆
well a Gr8 part...fantu...
👏
Enjoyed it...😆
Now wot...?they r getting married...i m just so eager to read next...ab kya hota hai...😉😆
So Continue Soon...😳
luv ya...God Bless...
❤️🤗
Annu😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
UFFF!!!! wht a part!!!!! 👏...interesting ...! very interesting...cont soon...!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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and who knows when nupur's last statement will become a part of reality...you know generally i would be cursing people like these...but somehow youve managed to make me like these characters 😆...its gonna take them a huge blow to realize money isnt the be all and end all of life...something tells me mayank is the one whose going to bring credibility to the relationship they're getting into...im actually quite surprised that he's more sensitive than her 😆...continue soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
loved it dear...
amzanig really amazing one...😊

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