dooriyan...bhi...hai...jaroori !!! pt 22 -pg 128 - Page 13

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Lovely update. Maan is searching Geet like a mad man.
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awesome update 😃 thanks for the pm
please continue soon...


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part 7 ...

awesome ... superb ...

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wow...in your F/F geet is behaving how maan usually does behave

loved the opposite roles...and the concept...

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awesum part di...

feelin very bad 4 geet...

do continue soon...

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lovely update
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part 7
nice part...
looks like in the next Maan and Geet might meet...
cont soon dear...
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NICE STORY.KEEP IT UP DEAR.
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NICE PART...LOVING GEETS ATTITUDE...THE PAST GEET WAS SO SWEET...UPDATE SOON
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😛 thnq for d comments 😛



part 8



sameer - ok..dats all...
geet - i shud take a leave now...it vil perfect if u visit handa industry so dat we can clear out all d formalities...
sameer - its saturday right..umm.i vil b dere on tuesday..
geet - alright...
geet was about to leave wen sameer stopped her...
sameer - ms.handa...
geet - yaah..??
sameer - actually..a frnd of mine is holding a party 2night...wud u like 2 join...
geet - well mr.wahi...
sameer - i vil b happy if u call me sameer...
geet - sameer...thnx for asking but i dnt attend much parties...
sameer - cum on geet...
geet - ms.geet..
sameer - sorry..??
geet - u head right..call me ms.geet..
sameer smiled...
he now sured...watever he heard about dis gal was right...
sameer - ok..ms.geet...cum on...it vil help us knowing each other more which vil b usefull for our business deal...
geet - i really dnt need to attend parties for knowing n understanding people...i hav my own ways...
sameer smiled yet again...
saying so geet was about to leave...wen his words made her rooted at place...

"..agar zindagi me kuchh lamhe mil rahe ho jo hume khush karte ho..to hume un lamhon ko ji lena chahiye...shayad waqt fir hume wo lamha na de..."..uttered sameer very emotionally...



his words ran through her brain..making its way to her mind...
dis is not d 1st time she heard dose words...
once again unknowingly and unintentionally her mind mae its way to dose moments when she hav heard dose words for 1st time...

FLASHBACKS...

GEET...GEET...
she heard a shouting maan making his way to her room for 1st time aftr dey became frnds...
but she didn't cum out...
maan enetered her room...
maan - geet...m shouting from so much of time...
geet wiped her teary eyes n looked at him innocently..
wen maan saw her teary eyes...he moved closer to her...n sat beside her on bed...
maan - tum ro kyu rahi ho...haan geet..
geet crying - mujhe papaji ke paas jana hai..mummma...
maan had no answer...
he was not very talkative person like daddi who can change d topic to drift her mind away...
but maan tried - agar tumhe apne mumma papaji ke paas chali gaye..to mere paas kaun rahega...u r only frnd i hav..m i dat bad..tum mujhe chhod kar jaogi..??
she looked at him thoughtfully...
she also had no answer...
his question made her think...
geet - tumhari frnd sirf me hu..??
maan nodded making baby face...
geet - agar me chali gayi to tumhara koi frnd nahi rahega...
he nodded in no...
geet moved closer to him n stood on her small small knees in front of him..
maan - tum mujhe chhod ke nahi jaogi na...
geet - nahi..jab mera mumma papaji ayenge na..to me unhe bhi yahi rehne ke liye bol dungi...right...
said geet chearfully...
maan - dats perfect...
geet smiled n kissed his cheek softly...
maan too kissed her cheek n dragged her out of room...
geet - tum mujhe kahan le ja rahe ho...
maan - dadi ne tumhe abhi bulaya hai...
geet - to mujhe kheech kyu rahe ho..me chal rahi hu..
maan stopped - to pehle bolna tha na...
geet - tumne puchha..??
maan - geetu...mujhe irritate mat kar..
geet - not geetu..geet...
maan - jab tu mujhe irritate karegi..tab me tujhe geetu hi bulaunga...
geet made baby face...
by d time...
dey reached too dadi..
dadi - u both figting again...
geet - daddi..isne mujhe geetu bulaya...she made yuckkkyyy face..
while maan enjoyed irritating her...
maan - aur tu mujhe irritate kar rahi thi uska kya...
dadi - ok...jhagada khatam..ab jaldi se jake gadi me betho..hum shopping karne ja rahe hai...
geet - dadi..mera man nahi hai...
daadi moved near her n picked her up in her arms..
dadi - "..geet..me tumhari dadi hu..aur ye tumhara maan...beta...agar zindagi me kuchh lamhe mil rahe ho jo hume khush karte ho..to hume un lamhon ko ji lena chahiye...shayad waqt fir hume wo lamha na de..."
geet nodded in yes..smiling thoughtfully...

...

where u lost...?????

sameer's nxt words..brought her back to REALITY...

she cursed herself for rememring her past once again...
geet - tumne ye baat kisse suni..
sameer smiled - meri frnd ki dadi kehti hai...
geet smiled at d word...a emotional smile...
sameer was surprised to see dat inch of emotion on her face...
he liked it..
geet - me koshish karungi..but m not sure..coz i hav sum impo*nt work too...
sameer - do try heartly...
geet - i shud leave now...
sameer - see u soon..
saying so both made deir ways respectively..

...

maan - where is geet uttara...
uttara was not shocked wid his question...
she alwz knew how impossible maan is when it cums to geet...
uttara looked at hameer for help...
maan repeated - where is geet uttara...
bringing her attention back to him...
uttara - wohh...actually i also dn know...umm...
maan angrily - where is geet uttara...
hameer - maan relax...u...
maan cut him again - WHERE IS GEET...????????
he litle shouted dis time...
making both hameer n uttara scare...
uttara - we r not allowed to tell...
maan was litle shocked to hear dat...
sum1 wants to hide geet's information from him...but who...
maan - who..???
hameer - geet herself...
1 more shock took him...
geet was to be hidden from me...
is it dats y she is not cuming in front of me...
is it dats y dadi is not telling me anything...
but watz wrong wid her...
why is she so angry wid me...
2yrsss
2 bloody damn yrs...
maan - wo mujse etni gussa kyu hai...
uttara shocked - u dnt know..??
maan - i dnt know..he shouted...
hameer - wo tumse kyu naraz hai..tumhe hi nahi pata...
maan - nahi pata mujhe..it was ust a small fight...but she is behaving like humne koi panipat ki ladai huyi ho...
uttara laughed like idiot...
hameer - we shud leave now...
maan - ofocrse not...where is geet..??..mujhe achhee tarah se patah hai ke tum dono janate ho ke wo kahan hai...
uttara - hum nahi bata sakte...
maan - thik hai..shayad tum dono bhool gaye..u r denying to MAAN SINGH KHURANA...geet ko me dhund hi lunga...ye hide n seek usse bahot bhari padega...keh dena usse...
saying so maan started to leave...
hameer risked - wat if she is died...

maan hands immediately clutched on hameer's collar...

maan - hameer...maan threadtened him making him scare like anything..
uttara sumhow managed to free hameer's collar...
uttara - he just kidding maan..relax..
maan - waise tum dono geet ke liye kya shopping ki...
uttara - kuchh sarees n dresses li hai..koi fayada nahi..wo sirf teri di huyi kapde pehenti thi...yaad hai na..
maan - yaad hai..aur wo sirf wohi kapde pehengi jo me uske liye choose karu...
...

his own words made him remeber dat shopping of dem both wid dadi...

FLASHBACKS...

dadi - "..geet..me tumhari dadi hu..aur ye tumhara maan...beta...agar zindagi me kuchh lamhe mil rahe ho jo hume khush karte ho..to hume un lamhon ko ji lena chahiye...shayad waqt fir hume wo lamha na de..."

listening to dadi's words..geet agreed for shopping...
aftr asking to rajjender...
dadi took them both for shoping...while sameera(rajjender's daughter) was tagged wid dem...
maan didn't like d idea of bringing sameera for shopping...
he alwz liked his privacy...
n now he included geet as a part of his private life same as dadi...
but he kept quite for d sake of geet...
dey moved for boys section 1st...
maan took all d dresses he liked n dadi n geet liked...
he purposely denied d clothes choosen by sameer who was trying to frnd wid him...
but maan being arrogant denied her rudely...
...
as maan's shopping was over..dey moved to gals section...
sameer choose sum dresses for her...
dadi was ok wid it..
dadi interstedly choosen dresses for geet...
every dress was assured by maan...
if he like it den only he wud take it for geet...
geet didn't mind...bing sweetheart n innocent...she liked it...
suddenly her eyes fell on a beautifull black colored dress decorated like barbie cloth...
she loved it...
but she had no courage to ask dadi for taking it...
she was no yet opening up completely...
maan noticed her eyes on dat dress...
maan - geet...
geet - kya hai maan...
maan - tuze woh dress achhee lagi...
geet relucantly - nahi aisa kuchh nahi hai...
maan got suddenly angry...
he angrily holded her wrist tightly...
maan - ddi..hum ghar ja rahe hai..geet ki shopping porri hone ke baad aap dono ghar aa jana...
no1 was allowed to speak once maan made decision...
he dragged her to car..n both came home...
maan still dragged her to his room...
geet was not understanding him at all...
geet - maan kya kar rahe ho..chhodo na..
maan - pehle mere sath chal..chup chap..
d moment maan reached his room..
he left her wrist n reached for his cup-board locker...
he toom 1 of two keys n handed it angrily to geet..
geet made a questioning face..
geet - ye tu mujhe kyu de raha hai...
maan - ye aaj se tera aur mera..hum dono ka locker hai..samajhi tu...tujhe kisi aur se paise mangne ki koi jarurat nahi hai..nahi mujhse puchhne ki jarurat hai..tu jaise chahe waise ye locker us karegi..samajhi tu...
geet - par mujhe nahi chahiye..me tujhse mang lungi..agar mujhe kuchh chahiye hoga tu...
maan - kyu mangegi tu..ye tera locker hai...ek key mere paas aur ek tere paas...samajhi...
geet nodded in yes knowing he is not gonna listen..once he decided sumthing...
maan smiled dat she accepted finally...
maan kissed her cheek...
she too kissed his cheek...
geet - maan mujhe bhook lagi hai...
man laughed d wau she said it...
n both ran to kitchen..

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nxt pt - part 9

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MISHTY

Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago

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