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Author's Note: MD: hey guys! This is Mya. This our first OS, me and Aahana! Hope you guys enjoy this!

AA; Hey guys, it's Aahana. I hope you guys like this!
P.S. For future references, I will be blue and Aahana will be purple!

The bed creaked as she turned once again. Somehow, every movement of hers made her more uncomfortable. She just could not sleep. Something was bothering her but she did not know exactly what it was. Why do I keep tossing and turning?? It's not like I am going to find a better spot to sleep on this bed, and anyway, do I not always sleep on this same bed?? So why today I can barely even breath. Feels like something is not right, but what?! I did not anything bad did I, thought Khushi as she turned once again.
"Khushi! Tu itni hilti dulti kyun rahti hain? ," Payal questioned slightly irritated.
"Hume nahi maalum hain Jiji. Something does not feel right. I am going outside Jiji. Please let me be for a while. I will come back soon, I promise, " Khushi consoled Payal before her jiji could start lining up questions for her which seemed hard to answer as of now.
Payal gave Khushi a nod telling her to continue on with whatever she was going to do thinking, Yeh lardki toh mujhe pagal kardagi. Haye Devi Maayyia! Isko thodi budhee doo!.

Khushi went out and watched the stars. She wondered, what was wrong with her today? Why was she not able to sleep? And why was she thinking about that Laad governer? She still could not believe he had apologized. He.THE Arnav Singh Raizada had said sorry to her woh bhi TEEN baar. . Haye devi maiyya!! Was that a dream? No..no it cannot be a dream. Even in my dream he would have not apologized. She scolded herself and said that, yes he did say sorry. She remembered seeing his eyes wet. Was he crying? Why was he crying? Crying after hearing my story?

Khushi had so many questions in her mind but she wasn't able to find an answer to any of them. She sighed and sat on the stairs. She recollected what she told Payal when she had returned. Khushi suddenly felt guilty. She thought this time it was her who was insensitive.

"I was complaining because Arnavji took a lot of time to say sorry," she muttered to herself.

Only because he waffled a bit? How could she do that?, she thought to herself. She regretted what she had said. She thought about the way he had sorry and how eyes had said that he really did meant it.

"Devi maiyya!! Hamein maaf kardijiye. Us waqt hamara dimaag kaam nahi kar raha tha isliye hum jiji se kuch bhi bol gaye. Arnavji ne dil se maafi maangi..humein aur kya chahiye? Aur waise bhi kehte hain na ki jo maafi maangta hain uska dil bada hota hain aur jo maaf kar deta hain uska dil bahut..bahut..bahut bada hota hain. Kal hum jab kaam pe jaengi tab hum unse baat karenge," Khushi concluded.

She felt relieved, finally understanding what was troubling her the whole time. It was the unknown guilt that was not allowing her any peace or sleep. She sat there for few more minutes and recollected all the moments where she had seen a different Arnav.

Looking at the sky with a smile on her face, she said, "Shayad itne bhi bure nahi hain."



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello Mya and Aahana Di!!!🤗
The both of you are great writers!👏
I really enjoyed the OS! You should really write more!
Khushi regretting was described very well!😊

Take care,
Shilpa/Shipss
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wow oh wow!
luv it hun...please pm me when you update...x 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mya and Aahana...🤗🤗
Congrats on the thread!
I'm sure you'll have some great stuff coming this way.
This was a great OS!! Short but sweet.
I really loved Khushi's last line about Arnav..."Shayad itne bhi bure nahi hain." !!
Thanks for the PM Mya...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: shilparoxx

Hello Mya and Aahana Di!!!🤗
The both of you are great writers!👏
I really enjoyed the OS! You should really write more!
Khushi regretting was described very well!😊

Take care,
Shilpa/Shipss



Thanks alot Shilpa 😊 I think Aahana is catching come ZZZ's rite now so I will respond for now tee hee , she will respond later 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: gansteress

wow oh wow!
luv it hun...please pm me when you update...x 😃



thanks will do 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was really good!!..do pm me...😊
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Originally posted by: aquablue17



Thanks alot Shilpa 😊 I think Aahana is catching come ZZZ's rite now so I will respond for now tee hee , she will respond later 😆


Your welcome!🤗
😆hahaha
Sure! No prob Mya Di!😆
Take care
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Originally posted by: areeba123hina

awesome!! really, its brilliant!




Thanks hun! Glad u liked it 😊
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Hey mya and ahana, nice one sweeties. Khushi's restlessness and finally realising the reason was marvelously described. Keep up it. Will wait for the next one. Thanks 4 d pm.

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