Aham goes home to teach Gopi today!updated pg3

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oohhh.yesterday Aham n Jigar's part was sooo cuteee!! haha i was wondering when he goes home n the lehenga fiasco blows away he is going to be like 'Gopi come upstairs n get back to ur studies!'
n Gopi 'Ahamji mein? ab?'
n Koki would be like 'What is this Aham? U haven't even got inside the house yet n u are after her studies? and she just did the exam n got the results today. also it is Navarathri holidays for her.'
Aham 'But mom..Gopi has to study' Koki 'Par Aham she has to help in the house work. there is so much preparations to make for Navarathi'
Aham 'Mom mujhe yeh sab nahi pata..Gopi shouldn't be lax with her studies just cz of her exam ended..now she has to give even more time to her studies as she has to do the correspondence course well . n i'm going to make sure of this mom...'n looking at gopi 'Gopi mere saath chalo'
Gopi 'Aham ji abi? mein rasodeke kaam...' aham 'Nahi..tum abhi mere saath upar chalo..koi bahana vahano nahi chaloge..chalo' n gopi would be looking from koki to aham..as koki was clearly looking disapprovingly at aham. seeing this aham comes near gopi and holds her had 'meine kaha chalo' n he'll drag her along with him! n a startled gopi would look at their entwined hands and at aham's face with a bewildered look! n while he was not looking at anyone when dragging her along with him she'll look at koki pleadingly who will surprise her by having a slight smile on her face n shake her head..n when she sees gopi is looking back she'll smile further and nod for her giving permission having understood the exact reason behind aham's behavior..and koki calls after them saying 'aham i'll send ur tea upstairs with rashi' ..gopi 'nahi mein lekar aawooongi ahamji' aham would be giving her a look n saying 'no mom said she'll send rashi. so abhike abhi tum mere saath kaaamre mein chalo..'

so they end up being in the room and aham asks gopi to bring her books n sit down while he freshens up...she quietly gets everything ready on the coffee table and sits down and waits till aham comes out..

he comes out wiping his face in a towel and sits down beside her..
Ok gopi 1st take ur paper out..u told me u didn't have time to do the 2nd part yesterday. so now tell me the answers to entire paper and i'm going to time it..

so gopi quickly starts reciting everything perfectly including the exact sentences she used in the essays..she reaches the 4th question and this time says 'cactus' and then goes in to saying the essay about 'my school'..then proceeds in to the 2nd page and orally give the answers to the maths section too..aham finally checks the time taken by gopi n is surprised to see she has managed to answer everything just within half an hour..then thinks to himself 'well may be she might have found answering easier as she has once done it already..but still she didnt even get to read the 2nd page of the paper let alone doing it'when she had a whole 2 hours time yesterday!!'😲 n asks gopi 'gopi after coming home yesteday did u try the last paper of the paper'.. 'nahi ahamji i was helping maaji so i didn't get time to do anything' ..and aham is going to question her again as he thinks to himself 'well how can she do a 2 hour paper within half an hour the next time when she couldn't even do half of it within 2 hours just yesterday' and he was again going to question her when rashi's voice interrupts them 'aham jiju aapka green tea' n then she was flustering while looking at aham n gopi as she had heard what aham was asking gopi about..so she goes on to say 'waise aham jiju gopi wasn;t saying answers tht quickly yesterday' and aham as usual glares at her and quickly looks at gopi to see her trying to say 'lekin rashi ben u were telling me i was telling too fast n to slow down no..isiliye mein..' gopi trails away seeing rashi's scowl..and that exact moment aham looks sideways at rashi n sees rashi glaring at gopi furiously and gopi's voice faltering and her becoming quiet..n then quietly saying 'shyad rashi ben teek kehrahi hu..i must have said slowly'..

by this time aham who has pretty much realized what exactly has happened is furious at rashi and glares at her..
rashi quickly retreats seeing aham is furious..then when rashi gets out of the room aham turns to gopi and by this time he sees a small tear escaping down her cheek..and he feels her sad face tugging at his heart seeing her like that..n he slowly takes her bandaged hand in his hand and asks gopi 'gopi sach sach batao..did u give these answer just like this to rashi also?' n gopi would though startled by aham's gentle gesture n the gentle manner he was talking to her wil keep looking down n say 'shayad kal meine itna jaldi jaldi nahi bataya'..then aham asks her again 'gopi i want to know the truth..batao mujhe' he says a little strictly n she looks at him n sees he is a bit angry n just looking at her keenly..she sadly looks down n says 'haan..kal bhi meine esehi boldiya..' n aham asks 'then rashi told u to say slowly?' n gopi looks at aham frightened and looks at back at the door where rashi was standing minutes ago n stay s quiet..n aham was about to shout at her as she wasn't answering..but when he sees the look on her face and how scared she looked while glancing at the door he changes his mind n asks 'gopi i was just asking see if u were reading too quickly it would have been difficult for her to write na..as it takes time..so is that what happened?' gopi looks at aham quickly at his change of tone as he had sounded very angry when rashi ben left..n gopi saw that he wasn't looking angry, rather he was slightly smilingly asking her..so she quickly says feeling relieved that rashi ben isn't going to be in trouble cz of her 'haan eisehi hua..rashi ben had to write everything no..'
and aham who has understood everything is furious at both rashi n himself..he remembers how he had shouted at her when she had come out of the exam hall and how tear stained her face was while she was answering his questions..n the way she looked slightly complainingly at rashi when he had finished scolding her and then he remembered rashi's gloating face while he was scolding gopi which at that time had baffled and made him angry..but later on he had forgotten all about it as he was feeling disappointed as gopi hadn't done the paper perfectly as he had been expecting..
n once again he had a flashback of how he had brought the results sheet n she was sobbing even before he told her the results..n the way her face lighted up when he told her that she had passed..the way tears of happiness filled her eyes n the look full of reverent gratitude she had given him when he told her the results..n how her left hand was trembling when she was taking the results sheet from his hand..n finally he remembered how she had shyly looked at him n told his mom that 'maji woh aaj agar mein paas hui toh woh sirf ahamji ke wajaase'...for a second her reaction had completely bowled him over until he once again remembered she hadn't gotten 100% as he thought she would..
he was feeling guilty for blaming gopi .. n he decided then n there to find out what had made rashi do that..cz after all she was gopi's own elder sister..so why would she want to mess up her kid sisters exam?he was wondering all this when he was brought back to the world by gopi's sweet voice asking him 'ahamji kya hua..'n he quickly shrugs off saying nothing while giving her a small smile..
'lets get back to work gopi..i'll teach u something different today..' n the lesson carries on..

note : i'm too lazy to continue..so that is it for now..anyway i'm working on a group assignment n need to get back to work..jst thought to write a small scene as i couldn't put away the scene in the office away from my head as i just loveeeddd it!! n it just got a little too lengthy..so anywa read n give ur comments 😳

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ANJ4 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice ... i like it please go on.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Agree with u..very nice one
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Love it!!!
It's what we all want to see Ahem being forceful (not too forceful!) in his realtionship with Gopi and even going against his mum in order to spend time with her.
Also love the fact that you have Ahem recognising for himself without any outside influence that Gopi should have been able to manage the exam paper and get everything right. Love how Ahem questioned Gopi as well - just enough anger and tenderness. And you got the feelings of guilt at his own actions across beautifully!!
But my favourite bit was Ahem glaring at Rashi!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It would be very nice if this happen in the serial too.
I like ur pediction. Keep writting...waiting to the rest of the story.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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look like an OS, sunara...continue soon dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great scenario and it's developed nicely into a Gohem OS.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sunara,you did it again, brilliant job.👏 .I really want that cvs😡 to look at this and get some ideas...pls continue..waiting..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the scene! This is exactly how I wish Ahem would be. I love the pace that the writers are bringing Gohem together. I just wish there were fewer kalakari's targeted at Gopi.
Edited by sandyuk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That is such a lovely scenario! Infact it more looks like a prediction and an amazing one! So really looking forward to it.

I hope something like this really happens.
Keep writing Sunara!

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