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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: CIDMaaneetNaksh

dunno yr!!!! me confused...!

Shivu ye nahi chalega update jaldi chahiye mujhe pls
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Shivu ye nahi chalega update jaldi chahiye mujhe pls

Help me then...!!! i'll PM you!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: CIDMaaneetNaksh

Help me then...!!! i'll PM you!!!!

Kya help chahiye Shivu Order de yaar
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Originally posted by: piya-

Kya help chahiye Shivu Order de yaar

Help me so that I get well... uggh cold...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ye pehle kyun nahi bataya Get well soon Update can wait
u r really precious may god bless u
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Originally posted by: piya-

Ye pehle kyun nahi bataya Get well soon Update can wait
u r really precious may god bless u
love-Piya

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Posted: 14 years ago
will Update soon di...waise I am quite late lateef!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it loads!!!!!!
thanx for the pm!!!
im sorry for not posting a long comment... i m hald a sleep... rofl1!!
but i have a request!!!
dnt hurt maan na
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Originally posted by: stuti_naksh4eva

loved it loads!!!!!!
thanx for the pm!!!
im sorry for not posting a long comment... i m hald a sleep... rofl1!!
but i have a request!!!
dnt hurt maan na

Lemme PM you!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part 19

Maan had gone back to the CID Bureau and only Geet and Abhijeet were left. Abhijeet sat on Geet's chair meanwhile she mixed two different coloured chemicals in a beaker. Abhijeet stood admiring Geet. Then he walked near the corpse and started swiping his hand around its neck

Abhijeet: Geet! Aapne kabhi Vampires ke baare mein suna hai?

Geet was shocked and she felt a jerk in her breath: ji! Matlab!

Abhijeet: mera matlab hai, aap Vampires mein vishwas rakhti hai!

Geet: yeh koi bhagwan thode hai jinpe vishwas ho! Kyun?

Abhijeet: aap is nishaan ko dekha?

Abhijeet pointed towards the two red holes in the nape of that corpse. Geet's throat went dry with fear. How could she miss something like this! It would expose her kind. She remained moan. Abhijeet turned and started walking towards Geet's desk.

Geet rushed to the corpse and then with an agile and fast move for anyone to notice, she wiped her hand over the holes and disappeared them like magic.

Geet: Abhijeet!

Abhijeet turned back to Geet: ji!

Geet: kaunse nishaan!

Abhijeet: yeh waa-

He stopped and then rubbed his eyes and then felt the neck. He felt it again and then beads of sweat appeared on his forehead

Geet grinned: kya hua?

Abhijeet: who nishaan. Abhi to the!

Geet: nahi to Abhijeet! Yahaan to koi nishan nahi hai!

Abhijeet: lekin Geet! Maine khud dekha tha!

Geet: Abhijeet! Ho sakta hai, aapne kahin aur dekha ho!

Abhijeet wiped off his sweat and then exited.

Geet watched him wonder and grinned evilly: I am soo sorry my dear Abhijeet! Lekin apne logon ke liye, lekin apne logon ke liye yeh karna zaruri tha! Poor Poor Abhijeet! And poor poor CID!!

Geet: yeh Maithili, is she out of her bloody senses! Agar maine nahi dekha hota to shayad sabko humare kind ke baare mein pata chal jaata! I am so gonna kill you fool!

Abhijeet dragged in ACP and others and showed them the disappeared scar. ACP rubbed his temple in shock and called Geet.

ACP: GEET!!

Geet: yes sir!

ACP: do you know something about this scar?

Geet: sir, maine jab body dekhi, to scar nahi tha!

ACP: pur maine to tumhe pehle hi un dono holes ke baare mein pata lagane ko kaha tha

Geet: lekin sir jab maine dekha to there was nothing!

ACP: I believe Geet, you've some involvement here!

Abhijeet: nahi sir! Geet aisa nahi kar sakti! Ho sakta hai mujhse ghalti hui ho!

ACP: pur maine bhi wo scars dekhe hai! Mujhe to nahi lagta!

Abhijeet: trust me sir! Ho sakta hai, we're wrong!

ACP: hmm!

Abhijeet was called in the corner by ACP: Abhijeet! Geet pe nazar rakhwao!

Abhijeet was shocked: sir!

ACP: it's my order.

Geet was hearing and she concluded: you're dead ACP and so are you Abhijeet!

*~*~*~*

There was a loud noise and Piya came outside her house and saw Abhay breaking things here and there.

Piya: Abhay! Kya kar rahe ho? Kya hua tumhe?

Abhay: what the hell Piya, dad aur mom kabhi baaz nahi aayenge!

Piya: kya hua Abhay, ab Sid-Maithili ne kya kiya?

Abhay: wo yahi hai! Mumbai mein!

Piya: yahaan! Kab se?

Abhay: I dunno Piya! I mean they are planning something against some coven.

Piya: argh! What are they upto! Shit!

Abhay: exactly! We need to stop them!

Piya: Abhay! Hum kuch nahi kar payenge! Instead humein us coven ko alert karna chahiye!

Abhay: hmm!

Abhay was still very disappointed by his family and Piya could feel his pain. So she moved closer and hugged him from back.

Piya: mere superman...calm down...we'll sort it out! Is baar apni family ko hum kuch ghalat nahi karne denge!

Abhay hugged her back and kissed her forehead: yeah!! I love you!!

Piya smiled: love you too my jaan!

*~*~*~*

Chand: humein kisi tarah is Maan Singh Khurana ko pakadna hoga! Tabhi Geet humare haath lagegi!

Haseena: lekin Chand, agar Geet iske saath nahi reh rahi hai, to zarur dono mein kuch problems honge. To ho sakta hai Geet aaye hi na Maan ko bachane!

Sid: No mother dearest, maine aur Maithili ne dekha hai! Geet is mad about this man! Aur wo Maan ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai!

Maithili: aaj agar hum us coven se lad rahe hai! To sirf isliye kyunki us Geet ne humse dushmani is Maan ki wajah se mol li!

Chand: right Sid! This man could be of help!

Haseena: okay! As you say!

*~*~*~*

Geet went in a corner and concentrated

Geet (thought): Milind can you hear me!!

Milind replied back in his thoughts: yeah Geet go on!

Geet: yahaan pe bada panga ho gaya hai!

Milind: kya hua?

Geet: arey wo Maithili, usne kisi aur ko bhi maara. ACP sir uski body le aaye aur uske gale pe wo do chhed bhi the! Maine unhe disappear kiya and ab team mujhpe shak kar rahi hai!

Milind: arrgh! I am gonna kill them!

Geet: abhi kya karna hai Milind! I am killing them!

Milind: are you crazy!

Geet: aur koi option hai?

Milind: Abhijeet ko patao!

Geet: what😲? Patao in the sense?

Milind: matlab use apni taraf kar! Kaise bhi, show yourself off...threaten him! Whatever!

Geet: but ACP is dying for sure! Agar usne ek baar aur mujhse badtameezi se baat ki! He's dead!

Milind: okay my Jhansi ki rani!

Geet: lolz Milind!! Okay cya! Take care!

Geet was planning an assault when Abhijeet entered tip-toeing...

Abhijeet: Geet!!

Geet turned back in horror: ji! Abhijeet aap yahaan mujhpe nazar rakh rahe hai?

Abhijeet: of course not Geet! Lekin main aapko kuch dikhana chahta hoon!

Geet: umm! Abhijeet abhi main jaldi mein hoon! Sorry

Abhijeet: ok! To kya main aapka computer use kar sakta hoon?

Geet: yeah ofcourse!!!

When Geet left, Abhijeet opened the internet and typed

Vampire: Myth or Reality

He found out many results, the major being: Vampires in India.

He clicked the site and checked for the details or features of such supernatural creatures.

Cold Skin

Abhijeet: woah!! Geet ki skin humesha hi thandi rehti hai.

Ability to erase any injury

Abhijeet: nahi Geet! Aap nahi! Aap kaise!!

*~*~*~*

Geet was driving home when she stopped her car mid-way. There was a man standing in the middle of the road. She called him twice: arey, hatto na! tere baap ka raasta hai kya!

The man turned back and then stared at Geet with red watery eyes. Geet's eyes widened: Maan!

She came out of her car and saw Maan standing with a bottle of liquor in his hand. She thought: abhi yeh aadat gayi nahi inki!

Maan: Geet!! Mujhe maaf kar do! Please!

Geet: Maan, aap hotel waapas jaiiye! Please!

Maan: Geet!

Maan stumbled and fell on Geet. His hand was bleeding because of the broken liquor bottle. Geet's senses grew alert and she could smell the alluring smell of blood. She stopped breathing and then forced herself away from Maan. She called Milind to take care of Maan as she moved away...

Precap

The goons over Maan; CID comes to know...Maan's innocence

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Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 14 years ago

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