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Posted: 14 years ago
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Armaan Riddhima's eye lock remained for what seemed eternity, there was a series of emotions yet unknown to them, which they experienced in those few minutes, just then Anjali's voice came ringing in their ears,

Anjali: Guys, Armaan - Riddhima, yeh kya ho raha hai?

Armaan immediately let go off Riddhima in a reflex and she fell on the floor.

Armaan(not looking at Riddhima, looking almost ashamed to be caught like that): Woh kuch nahi, mujhe jaana hai, Dr.Shubhankar ke saath surgery hai, catch you guys later.

With this he just glanced at Riddhima and left.

Riddhima(while getting up): Ouch di, pata nahi isse kya ho gaya hai? (then to herself-- pata nahi mujhe kya ho raha hai)

Anjali- Whatever, Ridzi tu ab theek hai naa? Dard toh nahi ho raha?

Riddhima: Nahi di, I'm fine. Aap chinta mat karo. Pata nahi, jabse Raj aaya hai, Armaan thoda strangely behave kar raha hai.

Anjali: Arre, Armaan toh aisa hi hai, uska mood toh chameilion ke colours ki tarah change hota rehta hai.

Riddhima(not fully satisfied with Anji): Maybe you are right di, but pata nahi.

Just then their pager rings, and both leave for their duties.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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after finishing their respective duties all the interns r once again gathered in the locker room.
m-hero yeh tu kya kar raha hai.
ar-matlab maine kya kiya...
m-tu itna khoya hua kyun hai...kissi ne kuch kaha kay...ya kuch kiya.
armaan looks at riddhima and sees her blush for the first time.he smiles to himself and then suddenly realises that they arent alone.
ar-arey nahi muskaan ...its nothing like that.
m-pakka.
ar-hain pakka.
raaj-riddhima mein tumhe ghar chod doon.
armaan gets a little restless on hearing this and is just abt so say smthing to raaj when there is an announcement
"DR RAAJ PLEASE REPORT TO DR KEERTI"
raaj leaves immediately.
ridz-chalo di ab hum chaltein hain.
an-nahi ridz , aaj meri night duty bhi hai...hitler ka order.
ridz-toh mujhe ghar kaun chodega.
anjali looks around and finally smiles..."armana hai na,i am sure he has no prb in dropping u home...do u armaan?"
ar-no anjie...not at all.
an-its settled then,u can drop ridz home 2day...saying this she leaves from the locker room
armaan coming close to riddhima"riddhima,chalein"
ridz looks at him and thinks"omg ab mein kya karun.itna sab hone ke baad mein iske saath kaise jaongi"

Ar and ridz cuming outside.

Ridz: thinking in her mind di ko kia zarorat thi is ko kehnay ki.yeh raaj ko bhi aaj hi kaam parna tha.

Ar: lost in his own thoughts. Ab pata nhai kia sooch rahi ho gi mairay baray main kahaan say baat shuru karun.sorry karma itna mushkil kiyun hota hai yaar.

Ridz :Armaan tumhain aysay hi masla ho ga main auto say chali jaoon gi , di nay to bas aysay hi keh dia tha.

Ar: mujay koi masla nahi ho gat um chalo main drop kar dun ga.

Then armaan open the door for ridz nd ridz thought ahaan issay yeh manners bhi hai .

Ar: so coffee chalay gi?

Ridz: ar I think dair ho rahi hai some other time.

Ar: o hokia museebat hai is nay to mana kay dia mainay soocha tha coffee kay sath sorry keh dun ga.

Ridz: roko rook car rook armaan.

Armaan stopped the car nd asked kia hoa ?
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Armaan kia hoa kia hoa.?

Ridz: wo mujhya pani pori khani hai.

Ar got surprised kia pani pori kahaan say.

Ridz: pointed wahaan say I just lobe pani pori.

Ar: o God mujhya laga pata nahi kia ho gaya hai. chalo khilata hun.

Ridz nd armaan came outside .

Ar: bhayya aik pani pori daina ridz intrupted tekhi si zara bhayya.

Ar: watching ridz and smiling. She is saying hummm I just love this chalo chalo bhayya jaldi jaldi say do na.

Ridz: Armana tum kiyun nahi kha rahay kia tumhain pasand nahi acha meethi kha lo.

Ar: array nahi main tekhi kha saqta hun bhayya aik daina.

Nd when Armaan eat that he didn'y like the spicy pani pori.
Ridz just bust out .

Ar: what so funny main khata hun bas zara aaj mood nahi hai.

Ridz: haan haan I know mr tuff. Pata raaj mairay sath hota tu buhat maza ata us ko bhi pani pori buhat pasand hai pata hum college main rooz khanay atay thay aur main uski pani pori.ridz just noticed Armana is not listening properly and looking restless.

Ridz: Kia hoa

Ar: kuch nahi chalain.

Just then some guyz appeared on the jeep.

O wow just lok at the date. Hey sweety after finishing wid him just come to us we will also give u special pani pori treat.

Ar: got angry nd was about to beat them just then ridz stopped him nd asked him to leave.

Array baby ko gussa a gaya tha mager mama nay dhanda kar dia hahahahahaha.

Armaan went to bang them.

Armaan was beating them very badly when rid came nd said chalo armaan kia kar rahay ho tum choro unhain.

Ar: came in the car he was luking veru upset .

Ridz: yeh kia tha armaan kia zaroorat thi unhain marnay ki.

Ar: looked her with anger kia zarorat thi? Tum mujh say pooch rahi ho yeh. Wo loog tum say badtameezi kar raha thay. Aur main yeh nahi daikh saqa.

Ridz: armaan marnay ki kia zarorat thi samjha bhi saqtay thay na.yeh kia tareeqa hoa.?

Ar: mairay samjhanay ka yehi tareeqa hai ms ridhima Shashank gupta.main aap kay raaj jitna acha nahi hun na is liyay mujhya loog to bas tang karma ata hai.

Ridz: armaan tum raaj ko beech main kiyun la rahay ho us ki kia bata .

Ar: uski baat …………………….. armaan realized wthat he was saying. Kuch nahi chalo tumhian ghar drop kar dun.

Ridz noticed armaan injured his hand and his hand was bleeding. But Armana was still annoyed wid her.

After dropping her.

Ridz: armaan tumharay hath pay choot ayi hai chalo main bandage kar dun.

Ar: koi zarorat nahi main khud kar lun ga. Nd he went leaving ridz with her thoughts.

The whole night ridz couldn't sleep she was feeling helpless in forgetting Armaan's word "main nahi daikh saqta koi tum say badtameezi karay" and even armaan was restless.

Ar: kia yaar karnay kuch gaya tha kar kuch ayah un mainay kyun kaha us say aysa.

Ridz: pata nahi armaan tumnay yeh kiyun kaha tum hameesha mujhay shocked choortay ho chaahay mujhay tang karnay main ya mujhay khush karnay main. Main kiyun tumharay baray main is wact sooch rahi hun . pata nahi tumhain ziyada choot na lagi ho .

Mujhay shayad tumhain call karni cahyay thi.

Then she picked the phone and glanced the clock it was 12 am o mainay daikha hi nahi tum so gayayho gay. I think subha hi milnay cahyay.nd she went to sleep.

Next day in the hospital.

Muski: oey hero yeh tujhya kia hoa hath pay?

Ar: kuch nahi bas aysay hi.

Atul: array armaan mairay dost mairay bhai kia hoa tujhay mujhay bata na?

Ar: array yaar kuch nahi hoa bas mamoli si chooti hai.

Ridz was quietly watching all this then raaj came . hi frnds how r u all.

Raaj: Hey ridz kaisi ho subha tum anji kay sath nikal ayi sorry mujhay thori dair ho gayi thi.

Ridz: its ok raaj .she noticed every time when raaj was dere Armana behave weirdly.

All interns report to doc keerti……………………………

Muski: chal hero tu pata nahi aja kal kia soochta rehta hai .

Dr keerti: rd Muskaan aur dr anji aap opt. dr armaan dr raaj and dr ridhima general ward. And dr atul and dr Rahul path lab.

Now get to your work.

Even dr keerti noticed armaan was luking lost .

Keerti: dr armaan r u ok?

Ar: yes ma'am me f9.

Keerti: sure dr armaan is dere is any prob just tell me. Nd whats wrong with your hand.

Ar: thanks ma'am I am f9 its just a small injury.

Keerti: ok gud get to work.


In the general ward raaj was handling the 10yr old kid's case.

Raaj: ok kid now its time to have ur medicines

Kid: I don't want 2 it must be bitter.

Raaj: but u have to take it.
Ridz was watching all dis so she went to help raaj.

Ridz: raaj tumbhi na bachoon ko kaisay handle karn ahai tumhian ata hi nahi.

Raaj: array ykis nay kaha daikho main tumhain kitna acha handle karma hun.

Rridz: I am not joking raaj get aside.

Armaan was luking all that.

Ridz: hey baby h r u.?

Kid: me f9 who r u? I know u r here so that I take that medicine.

Ridz: I am ur frnd baby ok tell me what is ur fav game.

Kid: football.

Ridz: hummm so u love 2 beat the other team with ur lots of goals.

Kid: ya I always played really well 4 my team.

Ridz: then u can't 4m now on………….

Kid: got surprised how it is possible?

Ridz: sat with him on the bed nd said look Ur coach doesn't allow u 2 play coz ur r not fit nd how can u perform good if u'll be not ok.

Kid: what should I do I have to recover. U tell me.

Ridz: then just do it as that dr uncle is saying he is also ur frnd.ok.

Then raaj smiled .o God ridz u nd Ur convincing powers 4m where u get dis.?

Ridz: it's a magic raaj.

Raaj: Hummm it must be .i know u very well nd raaj hugged him thanks ridhi 4 helping me.

Armaan was really upset at that. he had an empty injection in his hand nd he injured his same hand by broking that injection.
Raaj nd ridz rushed to him.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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i never read AR FFs...but here yu mentioned KASH first :D i m gonna be a GO for it now<3 seems great i have just read d initial part .. wud comment in detail once i done wid it :))
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very simple and beautiful FF.
loved all the parts.
done great job portraying each AR scene.
please continue soon, if possible please add me to your PM list.
and send me pm when you update next time.

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