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Posted: 13 years ago
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and finally just wanna thank all of u guys who commented and appreciated my story cz it is special to me as it is my 1st attempt at writing any FF.. and i'm glad i wrote it n all the wonderful n encouraging comments meant a lot!😳

thanks a lot once again🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sunara, actually one of my post The principal will turn out to be an OS now...just update it. Hope it'll help to reduce the stress that CV gave us today... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi hun ...

so sorry for the late comments ... it is pretty late isnt it ... i am begging for ur forgiveness 😆... i am at ur mercy dr ... hope u forgave me ...

u better forgive me now 😉...

thanx for forgiving me (wishful thinking )... letz get to ur OS shall we ...

wht am i suppose to say ... u have got some wonderful comments tht itself suggest how good u are ... as u gave me no choice but to comment as soon as possible or i might be literally losing my head 2mrw 😆..

i told u to write and u didnt listen to me .. i am sad😭 ... but finally u wrote ... and thus i am glad😉 .. no no i am delighted😛 ...

a special😃 thanxx goes to the guys who made sure tht su wrote ... thanx for convincing her tht she is good enough ... Nafisa, gohem123 and ayesha_78 thanx guys ...

i think there are others who had insisted her to write too as she did mention it some weeks back .. i am sure nafisa😃 is in tht list .. she does talk about u a lot ur comments and posts .. so it is pretty hard to forget u.. she did mention some others as well but luckly .. oops i mean unlikely i cannot remember their names...

su .. love ur Aham and Gopi ... simply amazing ... god yaar u are such a romantic person .. omg the scenes made me blush ...

but right now Aham is no longer having a head nor tale of what gopi is blabbering about as all he was thinking about was how she felt on his lap! how warm and soft she was😳..he raises his hand and slowly touch her hair that was tickling his face..and move towards her face😉..and his other hand goes around her waist😳 holding her to his chest..when Aham brings his hand closer to her face Gopi closes her eyes tightly anticipating a slap...n when he felt how softly ahamji was touching her face her eyes fly open n she becomes still with shock when she felt how ahamji had his other hand around her waist n pulled her towards his chest! aham meanwhile was neither aware nor was conscious about his actions anymore..all rational thoughts had stopped functioning the moment he had felt her soft mass in his arms and instincts simply took over..he slowly turned her face towards him n slowly placed a kiss at her jawline..gopi closed her eyes and inhaled sharply when she felt ahamji's kiss on her face...while he trailed a line of kisses all over her face coming to her closed eyes.. god su where does these thoughts come from ... u should let me know the secret behind it ...😉

if rashi fainted by just witnessing ahamji kissing our sweet gopiji ... if she had come after few more minutes she might have got a heart attack ... lol .. i was just thinking wht would have happen to urmila if she had stayed the night at mm ... my guess she would have lost her mind ... or worse fainted and knock her head and also lose those teeth of her's😉 ... the whole set ... 😆

and at the rate rashi was fainting i was thinking can she be pregnant 😉... not likely ... if so there has to be some sort of miracle .. or tht reminds me of tht extra vid u showed ... gopi and aham's child😉 ... loved it

btw i love the concept of the lap ... u always have a weird imagination ... weird in a good way 😉...

btw i saw ur comment on shania's comment ... if u were simply in a good mood while writing the OS ... i cannt imagine wht u might be capable if u were in a great mood ... lol

"anyway well this is not much of a story i guess..." -- arre yaar are u joking .. pls dont guess .. tht is my job or ours and nt urs ... so put this into tht brain of urs .. u are a fab writer and u rock and hun u better start writing another story and it better be a long one with a lot of romantic moments ... why the hell do u guys always have to switch off the lights ... i know i know ... it is nt nice nt to ... but cant a girl wish 😉...lol

fyi if u dont continue writing ffs i will personally have to beat the creativity out of u ..lol... so be aware hun... of the consequences .. no turning back for u ... u got it na ... good i know u have no intention of turning back either ...

wht else am i to say ... i think i am scolding u more praising u na ... wht are frindz for ... lol if i cannot even do this for u .. i meant scolding ... lol

let me conclude .. by saying tht u have written a fab OS and i am totally in love with it .. i knew tht u are got writer (it is in ur blood..lol) ... but never imagined tht u can be this good ... btw i am nt buttering u up ... it was a honest comment hun

see u 2mrw .. and keep up the good work ...

xoxo


- - badra (mano )


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaka.lg

sunara, actually one of my post The principal will turn out to be an OS now...just update it. Hope it'll help to reduce the stress that CV gave us today... 😊



Monyka i just saw this..sorry dear..i did read ur changed update!!it was awesome..hope smthn similar happens for real..there s still sm hope 4 2moro!😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Traxy101

Very nice OS, hilarious!



thank u Traxy (hope it is ur name)😳

Posted: 13 years ago
#36
CV's ko ye kabhi nahi ayega dimaag me... aur wo b itni jaldi??
hhehe!!

pehle gohem ki ek proper hug b nahi diya un logon ne...

but nie thought... liked it completely ;) :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: 143badra

hi hun ...

so sorry for the late comments ... it is pretty late isnt it ... i am begging for ur forgiveness 😆... i am at ur mercy dr ... hope u forgave me ...

u better forgive me now 😉...

thanx for forgiving me (wishful thinking )... letz get to ur OS shall we ...

wht am i suppose to say ... u have got some wonderful comments tht itself suggest how good u are ... as u gave me no choice but to comment as soon as possible or i might be literally losing my head 2mrw 😆..

i told u to write and u didnt listen to me .. i am sad😭 ... but finally u wrote ... and thus i am glad😉 .. no no i am delighted😛 ...

a special😃 thanxx goes to the guys who made sure tht su wrote ... thanx for convincing her tht she is good enough ... Nafisa, gohem123 and ayesha_78 thanx guys ...

i think there are others who had insisted her to write too as she did mention it some weeks back .. i am sure nafisa😃 is in tht list .. she does talk about u a lot ur comments and posts .. so it is pretty hard to forget u.. she did mention some others as well but luckly .. oops i mean unlikely i cannot remember their names...

su .. love ur Aham and Gopi ... simply amazing ... god yaar u are such a romantic person .. omg the scenes made me blush ...

but right now Aham is no longer having a head nor tale of what gopi is blabbering about as all he was thinking about was how she felt on his lap! how warm and soft she was😳..he raises his hand and slowly touch her hair that was tickling his face..and move towards her face😉..and his other hand goes around her waist😳 holding her to his chest..when Aham brings his hand closer to her face Gopi closes her eyes tightly anticipating a slap...n when he felt how softly ahamji was touching her face her eyes fly open n she becomes still with shock when she felt how ahamji had his other hand around her waist n pulled her towards his chest! aham meanwhile was neither aware nor was conscious about his actions anymore..all rational thoughts had stopped functioning the moment he had felt her soft mass in his arms and instincts simply took over..he slowly turned her face towards him n slowly placed a kiss at her jawline..gopi closed her eyes and inhaled sharply when she felt ahamji's kiss on her face...while he trailed a line of kisses all over her face coming to her closed eyes.. god su where does these thoughts come from ... u should let me know the secret behind it ...😉

if rashi fainted by just witnessing ahamji kissing our sweet gopiji ... if she had come after few more minutes she might have got a heart attack ... lol .. i was just thinking wht would have happen to urmila if she had stayed the night at mm ... my guess she would have lost her mind ... or worse fainted and knock her head and also lose those teeth of her's😉 ... the whole set ... 😆

and at the rate rashi was fainting i was thinking can she be pregnant 😉... not likely ... if so there has to be some sort of miracle .. or tht reminds me of tht extra vid u showed ... gopi and aham's child😉 ... loved it

btw i love the concept of the lap ... u always have a weird imagination ... weird in a good way 😉...

btw i saw ur comment on shania's comment ... if u were simply in a good mood while writing the OS ... i cannt imagine wht u might be capable if u were in a great mood ... lol

"anyway well this is not much of a story i guess..." -- arre yaar are u joking .. pls dont guess .. tht is my job or ours and nt urs ... so put this into tht brain of urs .. u are a fab writer and u rock and hun u better start writing another story and it better be a long one with a lot of romantic moments ... why the hell do u guys always have to switch off the lights ... i know i know ... it is nt nice nt to ... but cant a girl wish 😉...lol

fyi if u dont continue writing ffs i will personally have to beat the creativity out of u ..lol... so be aware hun... of the consequences .. no turning back for u ... u got it na ... good i know u have no intention of turning back either ...

wht else am i to say ... i think i am scolding u more praising u na ... wht are frindz for ... lol if i cannot even do this for u .. i meant scolding ... lol

let me conclude .. by saying tht u have written a fab OS and i am totally in love with it .. i knew tht u are got writer (it is in ur blood..lol) ... but never imagined tht u can be this good ... btw i am nt buttering u up ... it was a honest comment hun

see u 2mrw .. and keep up the good work ...

xoxo


- - badra (mano )



ok buddy first of all a big 🤗 for all the compliments...
n aahh..well sorry for not listening to u earlier..but i felt too lazy n didn't think it was my cup of tea..but somehow well here it is..
n lol as for the scoldings i'll ignore them as usual!! u already know it is useless telling me anyway!!😆
n hmm..as for the lights off part..kya karu yeh open forum hai na...so i have to keep my wild imaginations to myself!!😉
soo.well mano thank u sooo much once again!!!🤗


n see ya in the morning😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: thejazzgal.s

CV's ko ye kabhi nahi ayega dimaag me... aur wo b itni jaldi??
hhehe!!

pehle gohem ki ek proper hug b nahi diya un logon ne...

but nie thought... liked it completely ;) :)



lol sure..until then we'll just have to dream..what other choice do we have..
n thank u very much dear for appreciating it😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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thanks dear😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: princessunara



aww thanks a lot Shaina for all the sweet comments🤗 n hehe i kindaff was tempted to let her barge in lol but then decided against it thinking it'll make everyone else aware of why she fainted lol..now only she knows n there is nothing she can do either!! n poor gopi would have been so embarrassed..lol n i thought GoHem deserved some privacy from Koki n the rest too though they mean well😆

n hehe i think lappy might still be working cz when Aham's leg pushed it off the bed it fell on the rug that gopi sleeps on..n lol it deserves to be broken cz due to one lappy she lost her rights as a wife n the night she regained her rights the lappy lost its place..😳

n will try to write more if i can..i was in a good mood yesterday so it just happened..anyway thank u very much dear😳

pleasure is all mine sweetheart. Good u dint made rashi barge in.U are right no one gives privacy to gohem not even koki. always barges in to his married son room. I think that the reason ahem stays away from her during the day and show all the affection in the night.

Rashi is way too smart dear, she can do anything.

pl;ease dont make lappy stop working though ur analsis is good👏 i am kinda attached to laptops like our macho man. That why i am more concerend about the lappy than the gohem

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