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crystal-rose

@crystal-rose

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Posted: 15 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: icy_magma
Ok...now i am having this feeling that maybe Maan is not in love with geet but with someone else.I am scared. :-( :-(
Good update.. :-)
Update again soon.

Only one word...or rather two...Keep guessing and reading the story...u will find out sooner or later.

Thanks for the feedback.

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crystal-rose

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Posted: 15 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: lil.mizz.smexii
interesting!
cont soon
thanks for the pm

Thank you dear, as 4 pms,-...u r most welcome

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crystal-rose

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Posted: 15 years ago

#103

Note: - SORRY😭. I am sorry for two things. Firstly, wrong precap given by me[I am still learning(this part does not contain sameera)] and secondly for the slow pace (Plz forgive me) of the story.

Part 9

Recap

"Ok, but first kiss me" she pouted.

With great difficulty Maan distanced himself. from Pari's arms

"Out just Now." he said with controlled anger.

Part 10

After Pari left, he switched off the lights and went to his bed to lie down still thinking about his "Cheri".

Six months back

(His thoughts)

The one person he could never stop thinking about, the girl he didn't want to stop thinking about, who came every night into his dreams and made him want her more, every time he woke up. He could never understand the pull of attraction he felt towards her. He had to make her, his.

To attain her, he would do anything. She was his nirvana, his moksha. She was his and no one else could have her, he would make sure of it. The feelings she aroused in him, made him do things which he never ever dreamt he would do. He made changes in his office employees' hierarchy. Now, all the department heads will have to report to him. Not only the department heads will be reporting to him, but he had to make sure she would also. He took away the control, which his brother had over her as his employee. For that he had to make her the interior designing department head. Now she would report directly to him, as she was the department head and not to his brother.

He had to give lot of responsibilities which would make her come to him for explanations, advice and clarifications. He made her accountable for the entire project which she was currently doing and all the other projects also which he himself personally did as an architect. For her now, his brother as a boss, was only a formality.

He was unable to understand, how as a man who had always prided himself on his moral stance, a man who was so proud of his family's reputation, quick to condemn others for their moral lapses should behave in such a way.

He never thought he would go to such levels just to be near. It was as though a spell had been cast on him, so much so that he was blind and deaf to everything and everyone but her.

Day to day to be with her, near her, was becoming difficult. Her proximity had brought the realization that he wanted her more and more. The pull of her beautiful eyes would want him to drown in them. The soft wisps of curly hair falling on her forehead, made his hands itch to remove them and tuck them behind her ear. He loved the way she would move her hand while explaining a point or when she would put a pencil in her mouth while thinking and pursue her lips. He wanted to feel the softness of her lips on himself Just thinking about the lush curves, the soft fullness of her body, made his heart race. The sudden intensity of the image of her in his lap brought a sharp surge of desire, hardening his body which caught him off guard.

The object of his desires was unaware of his feeling towards herself. She was as usual busy in her own world. Making others laugh... and behind the laughter, hiding away her feeling, so as no one would know what went on in her mind as her eyes would act as the closed doors allowing know one to access her thoughts.

Note: The explanation of his thoughts was necessary as it will expalin what he does and why later on in the story

Plz comment whether u liked this part or no...

Part 11

Edited by crystal-rose - 14 years ago

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Posted: 15 years ago

#104

Ha my fingers crossed for Geet to be Maan's love interest... I can't see any other girl on which Maan is falling so intensely... but his behaviour with Geet is rude so that is confusing me...

Interesting update...thanx for pm

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Esha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#105

Hmm...an insight of Maan Singh Khurana's feelings...not any less interesting than the story itself...so he's in to deceit in a way to achieve what he desired for...his Cheri...these are sort of Lies n deceit he applied to bring her to himself...which he did in his love for her...the title accountability has already started...lets see what more he did to gain what he wanted more than anything else in the whole world...

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InkedImagination

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Posted: 15 years ago

#106

i jus read all parts, love the story.. plz add me to ur pm list... thanks😊 n am also thinking geet( probz cheri) is probably havin an affair with maan... am curious now... plz continue soon

Edited by Sweettaz16 - 15 years ago

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maaneetsangel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#107

awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

i know its geet .. in fact it has to be geet ... plzzz ... reveal it now ...

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crystal-rose

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Posted: 15 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

Ha my fingers crossed for Geet to be Maan's love interest... I can't see any other girl on which Maan is falling so intensely... but his behaviour with Geet is rude so that is confusing me...

Interesting update...thanx for pm

Ha my fingers crossed for Geet to be Maan's love interest... I can't see any other girl on which Maan is falling so intensely... but his behaviour with Geet is rude so that is confusing me...

No kiran(can i call u that) he is not rude with geet. but he is falling so intensely for his 'Cheri'. Well variety is spice of life so y geet only? y can it not be someone else?

Interesting update...thanx for pm

Thanks ...wellcome dear.