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Posted: 13 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran


interesting update...Geet is going to get engaged with Dev...

Last update u wrote about a girl who gave interview and going to work under Dev but Maan is attracted towards her...last part ended there...I know that was Maan thinking about past and the girl is Geet but in this update suddenly Geet is getting engaged to Dev...how or that girl was not Geet...I am confused.
thanx for pm

wellcome to the ff. Maan is in love with someone but it is not clear whetherit is geet or no. well u will have to read on to know. from the start Geet had a crush on Dev as u get to know in the earlier updates. So she is getting engaged to dev. For Maan- no where it is written it is Geet... so lets see who d girl is...?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
Hey ur ff is quite interesting and am hoping that the girl Maan is in love with, is Geet ! He gets angry with her only coz she is abt to marry Dev...

Pls add me to ur pm list and update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
thanx dear. Wellcome to the ff
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Hey ur ff is quite interesting and am hoping that the girl Maan is in love with, is Geet ! He gets angry with her only coz she is abt to marry Dev...


Pls add me to ur pm list and update soon.

We dont know still who dat girl is...He gets angry at d carelessness not particularly on Geet. In this story Maan has a bit different temprament then d serial... i.e he does not get angry so easily, he thinks the things through...though it does not mean that he does not get angry.
Thanx 4 ur feedback...hope i have made some doubts clear.
plz do keep on giving me ur feed back ...it helps a lot.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Recap-
Anyways she had to get ready now to go to the site or Maan would get angry at her and her chance to ask for leave would be nil.
Part 9
Just at that second, "Geet hurry up, we don't have all day to waste" Maan shouted from outside her door.
Geet had come out running and was about to trip and fall when she was caught by the waist and firmly held by a strong pair of arms.
"Thanks Dev for saving me again", smilingly she chirped lost in his eyes.
"Ok, If you two lovebirds are done shall we get going" a rude voice broke the spell in which both Geet and Dev had found themselves in.
"Ask Maan bro about that leave, Geet"
"Yes I will, later. Bye, Dev." Saying she rushed out.
It was late in the night when Maan reached Khurana Mansion. Geet had left the site in the afternoon itself to go shopping with Dev but he had lot of meeting to attend. No sooner had he entered, he realized everyone was at the dining table, and Savitri Devi called out to him.
"Maan beta aap aagaye. Hum sab aap ka intezar kar rahain hain. Aap jaldi fresh hoke aajayiye."
"Kitni baar kaha hai maine Dadima, aap dinner kar lijiye, mera wait mat kijiye"
"Nahi beta hum aap... ka wait nahi kar rahe the. These girls had gone for shopping and got late. I was waiting for them to come"
"Sorry Dadima aap ko hamara wait karna pada. Sorry we are late." Pari, Geet and Pinky all said in one voice.
Pinky who had become Geet's friend had gone to watch a movie with Pari after Geet had called them from the mall, saying her shopping was done and she had some free time as Dev had gone back to work.
"Ok, Dadi, I will freshen up and come but please start your dinner and don't delay it as you have to take your medicines also." Saying this Maan hurried to freshen up and join all of them for dinner.
They all had dinner and everyone retired to their rooms.
The restlessness of his thoughts brought him to the French window of his room. The nature, the greenery, the sound of the wind rustling the leaves on the trees outside soothed him, the soft music which was being played somewhere out in the distance, brought the calming effects to his thoughts.
As he was contemplating about his further course of action he felt two hands slide over his chest from behind. And his first thoughts were of his love, his "Cheri". He turned around calling out
"Love" only to find Pari hugging him from behind.
"Pari, what are you doing in my room at this time of the night?" he asked pulling and bringing her in the front but Pari put her arms around his neck.
"O Maan, why do you ignore me? You don't have time to talk to me so I had to come to your room at this time to talk to you".
"Pari go now. We will talk in the morning". He was starting to get angry.
"Ok, but first kiss me" she pouted.
With great difficulty Maan distanced himself. from Pari's arms
"Out just Now." he said with controlled anger.
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Precap Next-Sameera
Edited by crystal-rose - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
thank u
for ur pm
wlii read the new update now
sri
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: sriya89

thank u

for ur pm
wlii read the new update now
sri

u r wellcome. Plz comment after u have read d update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Hey nice update...

Thanks 4r pm...

Do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyc update...
Do cont. Soon..
Thanx 4 d pm..

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