Samne Wali Khidki ... MAANEET FF part 11 updated - Page 7

Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia

Awesome update...

Maan aur Geet ki ladhai bhi mast hai... Hadh kartahai maan...mike on chod diya...

Continue soon...

Originally posted by: sayaneegupta

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Awesome FF...please continue soon.

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Hei friends sorryyy... I know I am too late ds time... and I have lots of excuses😆... 1st I was doing some research for my other FF 'MRITYUNJAI', 2nd my cp is not reading my external hard disk in which I had my update, so I had to rewrite it... 3rd chaddo ... enjoy the update n pls don't forget to comment n hit the like button😉

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Part 3: Bhag Bhag D. K. BOSE

Sunday morning. Guys were resting in the drawing room. Maan was reading news paper. Samrat was flipping through channel on the remote. Mayank was going through a science magz. Dev(2) entered he room. He is still yawning.

Dev(2): hei guys whats up? Aj ka kya plan hai.

Maan answered him not withdrawing his eyes from the news paper.

Maan: nothing special. Why?

Mayank: waise I was thinking what about going to book Fair. U guys r in?

Maan: wow dats an amazing plan. I have missed it for two years. Delhi me bhi hota hai but Kolkata Book Fair is the best.

Dev(2): hei aj mat kar ye plan. I have to visit to the lady Voldemort at evening.

Maan, Mayank: what I mean whom?

Dev(2): are pisima(bua) ke ghar jana hai. Dad ne call karke kaha hai kuch prob hai. Zaroor unki gusse me aake apne ghar ke bulb thod diye hai ya phir uski billli kho gayi hai, Irritating.

Mayank: yaar tu apne pisima se itna chidta kyun hai?

Dev(2): yaar tumlog nahi samjhoge. Pisima nahi putana hai wo.

Everybody laughed at him.

Dev(2) made a face and sat beside Adi who was sitting at one corner of the room n typing in his lappy.

Dev(2): me to wohase football practice ke liye nakal jaunga. I haven't practiced for one week.

Dev entered the room with the bags of vegetables and cooking stuffs in one hand and some letters in another. He tossed the letters on the tea table and headed towards the kitchen. He came back in some moments and made himself comfortable on an easy chair.

Dev: hei Adi your story was completed hai na? It's already published and out in the market right? Then what are you writing now?

Adi: I am writing for the Puja segment. Publishers are pushing me for a while. If I don't start now will surely miss the dead line.

Dev: arre to iss bar tera storyka kya subject hai?

Adi: love story.

Myank: wow that's great. Ye to tera baye hath ki khel hai. Itna tension kyun le raha hai.

Adi: hehe '. Tension nahi lu to kya karu? Maine likh raha tha ek simple love story ab publisher keh raha hai ussme vampire ghusao.

Maan: kya?

Adi: vempire vampire' aj kal ka nayi trend hai. Chahe story kuch bhi ho usme ek vampire dal do to your story is gonna be a bestseller.

Maan: arre ye ajib baat hai. Tu mana kuyn nahi kar raha hai. Waise bhi tera book is always hit.

Adi: itna assan nahi. Publisher ki beti ne kaha hai ke usse mera likkha hua vampire love story chahiye wo bhi ek insaan ke sath. Uspar kuch or bhi ajibo garib janwar dalna hai like ware wolf and all that.

Maan has kept the news paper long before. All broke out in a laugh.

Maan: what? Ye to pura ka pura chiriya ghar hai.

Adi: yaha bhi khatam nahi hua. Unhe isme Indian touch bhi chahiye. Soch raha hu ek nagin bhi daal du.

Mayank: haan or dusre graha se aye hue prani bhi daal dena. ET u know. Lage hath ye supernatural- science fictional ban jayega.

Everybody was laughing when a shout make them silent. Samrat who wasn't a part of the on going discussion was the source of the sound.

Samrat: Oh nooo.

Mayank: what?

Samrat: firse uss D. K. Bose ka letter humare yaha aa gaye hai.

Maan: ye D. K. Bose koun hai?

Samrat: humare padosi. Wo Ex serviceman hai. Or bhul ke bhi usske sath mulaqat ho gaya to u are dead. Indus valley se leke Paris Fashio Week sabko leke bhasan de denge. Tum sunna chaho ya na chaho. Dunia ki har bisay me uske pass knowledge hai or pass me jo bhi milte hai usse dustbin samajh ke apna gyan dalte rehte hai. Ab aj usse letter dene koun jayega?

Mayank, Dev: tuuu

Samrat: Maan yaar pls aj tu chali ja. Please.

Maan couldn't understand a single word said by Samrat so he agreed to do the task.

Maan: ok whats a big deal. I will go.

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Ok now Maan knows what the big deal is. The fat man sitting in front of him was talking non stop. Actually giving gyan. In one hour he has blabbered on global warming, inflection, contemporary Indian movie, Cannes film festival, T 20 and test matches, India-Pakistan relationship and so on. Maan was going crazy now. He has tried to left the place at list for three times but this man is that kind of man who will spend his own money and make you hear his lecture. Poor Maan his evening is ruined by this man. And now he is giving lecture on the degradation of values in the new generation. Maan was yawning and Mr. D. K. Bose had offered him tea for two times coz he wanted Maan's full attention.

Mr. Bose: humare waqt pe hum kitne sincere the, hard working the. But aj kal ki generation ko kuch nahi aata hai. Ye log to bado ka adar bhi nahi karte. Example dekhlo mere flat ki 1^st floor me jo ladkiya rehti hai unhe dekh lo. Pani ki eke k bund ki hisab rakhti hai. Buzurg samajh ke mujhe kuch chut dena chahiye na par nahi. Or unn logoka wo leader Geet. Kya danger ladki hai. Uss din haan sayed Cristmas eve ki rat me upar ja rahi thi to wohase chillane ki awaz ayi bhag bhag D. K Bose u know. Pata nahi yaar ye ladkiya kya chiz hai. Inn logo ko kaise pata chal gaya. Me to kabse keh raha hu Sabitri Ji se ke unn ladkio ko yaha se nikaliye me ye ghar kharid lunga par nahi unhe apna faida nazar hi nahi aatha.

He was going to say some thing. But Maan interrupted.

Maan: par apne bataya nahi ap upar gaye q the?

Maan was feeling dizzy but he regained his sense at the very mention of Geet's name.

Maan: hmm batayie na

Mr. Bose: umm wo main. Wait mai tumhare liye chaye lata hu. Ye mera noukar cant make tea.

Maan was waiting for the moment. As soon as Mr. Bose went to kitchen he ran out of his room and in hurry he bumped on someone. Oh no. aj to iska bad luck hi kharap hai. It was Geet who is now clutching his shirt to save her from falling on the floor. He went to hold her but did not.

Geet: Ankhe nahi hai? Dekhke nahi chal sakte? Ab chup chap khade q ho uthao mujhe.

Maan: mai q uthau tumhe? Mujhe tumhe vuthane ki koi sokh nahi hai ... waisebi bohot bhai lagti ho.

Geet: what? Chaddo just help me to stand on my own feet.

Maan: re ajib baat hai. Apne pair pe khade hone ke liye kam kaj karna padhta hai' aise koi bhi ladke ki gale se aise latak jaoge to kabi apne pair pe nahi khadi ho sakogi.

Geet: Shut up. And what are u doing here in our house huh? Chori chupke yaha kya karne aye ho u criminal?

Maan: aare waah! ulta chor kotwal ko dante. Mere shirt ko tum abhi phadne wali ho or me criminal huh.

Geet looked at her position. She was clutching his shirt with all her strength. His shirt's 2^nd button was torn by her and it seems 3^rd one will also come out in a moment. She was all embarrassed and took away her hand without thinking and was going to fall but at the last moment Maan hole her and help her to stand straight. For a moment Geet and Maan was lost in a eye lock. But they regain their conscious soon.

Geet: tumhare himmat kaise hui mujhe chune ki?

Maan: kyun tumhe koi chunese faile wali bimari hai kya?

Geet: Chiii. U ... u ... dirty tongue... main tumhe dekh lungi.

Maan: tum humesha dikhne dikhane ki baat kyun karte ho? Chii... dirty mind.

Geet: what? Kya kaha tumne?

Maan: umm haan kya kaha maine? Arre haan yaad aya. Kaha nahi karke ayah u. S**t yaar galti ho gayi. Wo tumhare ek letter aya tha. Maine galthi se usse Mr. Bose ko deke ayah hu.

Geet: what? Nahiii. He Bhagwan firr se uske gyan sunna padhega. Aj mujhe kuch zaruri shopping karne jana tha'. Dhattariki.

Maan's face glowed up with a smirk. Geet's bechari face was really enjoyable for him. He tried to hide the naughty glimpse of his eyes and tried to look serious.

Maan: or haan, jaldi jayiye. He is making tea. Der karenge to chaye thandi ho jayegi.

Geet's eyes curved in a frown and mouth open with an 'o' shape.

Geet: tumne jaan bujh ke ye kiya hai right? Tumne mujhe phasane ke liye ye kiya hai. I will not spare u. You DUST DANAV. Main tumhe chodungi nahi.

Maan: kyun mujhse shadi karne ki irada hai kya? Arre itni badi saza bhi mat do.

Geet: Maan

Maan: yah Geet main Maan Sing Khurana ab yaha se bida leta hu. Milte hai agle face off me. tab tak ke liye tata, good bye saonara.

Maan went out from there. He was bored like hell but poor condition of Geet was making him happy. He wanted to laugh out loud thinking what will be Geet's reaction when she will come to know that there was no letter for her.

In other hand Geet was fuming in anger but she tried to control her anger closing her eyes.

Geet(in her mind): No Geet its not your style. Today I got so angry that's why I couldn't fight him properly. Next time I will face him with my style. Mr. MAAN SING KHURANA get ready for the next face off with GEET HANDA CHATERJEE

awww funny
loved it!
cont soon
thanks for the pm

what an hillarious update...Sayanee ur FF is just amazing but itne dino baad update...why?

please try to update soon because it has different type of comical touch and I really appreciate it

thanx for pm

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran

what an hillarious update...Sayanee ur FF is just amazing but itne dino baad update...why?

please try to update soon because it has different type of comical touch and I really appreciate it

thanx for pm