MAANEET IF - KAISA YE PYAAR HAI - Page 29

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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting for the next part.
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Part 33

Maaneet ff--kaisa ye pyaar hai

Mei wo aapse

She closes her eyes and said "sorry" to maan.

Maan{ kh to ase rhi hai, jaise mujhpe ehsaan kr rhi hai}

Maan: leave

Geet: sir, meri baat to suniye

Maan{irritating voice} : itni der se mein tumhari hi bakwas sun

rha hu😡

Ab yha se jayo

Leave

Geet: aapko meri baat bakwas lag rhi hai

Ek to mein aapse "sorry" kh rhi hu

Aur aap upar se ye khne ke bjaye 'maine tumhe maaf kiya"

Aap mujhe jane ke liye kh rhe hai

He stands and come forward to her and she stepped back.

Geet: mein wo

Maan: chup bilkul chup

Both look into each other eyes and short eye lock happen.

Mahi mein mahi mahi ve...

...

Maan : ek minute ke andhar tum yha se nhi gyi

To

Geet: to

Maan: to tumhari naukri gyi

Geet{she see towards the top/roof/sky.}

Thank you babaji

maan: {thodi pagal hai}

He smiles but unnoticed by geet.

{maan stop.}

Maan:[he said in loud voice] tumhare ek minute over hone mein 10 sec left hai.

Geet without saying any word left the place.

Outside the cabin

Adi: pinki tumne geet ko jane kyun diya

Pinki: adi sir aap kbse ek hi baat kh rhe hai

Ab bs

Geet came out from his cabin and pass the smile towards both.

Pinki: ye geet ko kya hua

Tasha:sasha

Oh sorry

Sasha madam, lagta hai geet ko sadma lag gya hai

Sasha {confusing look}: sadma

Tasha: ha madam

Bechari ko job ke phle hi din jo nikal diya gya

Both laugh together.

Adi interrupts this conversation and said "both you will keep quiet" for some time.

Adi: geet maan sir ne kya kha

Geet: kuch bhi nhi

Pinki: kya

Adi: geet khi tumhari job to

Geet: nhi adi sir

{She again look towards top and said :}

Mere babaji ne mari naukri bacha li

Thank you so much babaji

Pinki: sch geet maan sir ne kuch nhi kaha

Geet: w

Pinki: ye to kamal ho gya DD ne gussa nhi kiya

Sasha: asa kaise ho sakta hai

Sasha and tasha left the place.

Adi: hehehehe😆

Really geet

Mujhe to laga tha tumhare sath sath mein bhi gya

Geet: adi sir, ab kuch kaam krle, nhi to wo du

{She stops between the words.}

Adi: nhi to wo kaun geet?

Geet: nhi to maan sir firse gussa ho jayenge

Adi:hehehehe

You are Right geet.

Flashback

In car

Maan sb kuch bdl rha hai, Aap pass nhi hote to, Kuch bhi acha nhi lagta hai.

Na jane kyun apne us din na chahte huye bhi, mujhe ye job dedi.

Sayad mere babaji ki yhi marzi thi.

Babaji mujhe unse mila do,

Geet apne maan ke bina adhuri hai

"uski har saans me wo tha,

Hr dadkan mein wo tha,

Hr sapne me wo tha,

Hr ehsaas mein wo tha

Uski har baatein ,ussi se suru hoke ussi pe khtm ho jati thi,

Subh kb hoyi, sham kb dali, ussi ke ehsaaso me kho jati thi,

Na jane kb milenge wo pal,

Wo tapish,

Jisse aaj bhi wo har pl mahsoos krti thi."

In hospital

Nurse: sir aapki medicine ka time ho gya hai

He: hmmm

After taking medicine he said:

To naina hum kha pr the

Naina:

He: tumhari saza kya honi chaiye

Naina

Naina:

He again said "naina" and touch her hand

Naina: hmmm

Tum kuch kh rhe the

He: ha wo mein

Naina tumhara dhyan kaha hai

Naina: khi nhi

Wo mein kuch soch rhi thi

He: kya

Naina: kuch nhi, bs ase hi

He tries to sit but fail.

Naina: aaram se

She helps him for sit.

He: naina , ab batao kya baat hai

Naina: kuch nhi

He takes her hand and said "ab bolo"

Naina:

He: naina mein janta hu kuch hai,

Jo tum mujhse khehna chahti ho,

Ya fir kuch puchna chahti ho

Naina: wo Maan

He: hmm

Naina: Maan

...

{ kaise batayu maine geet se abhi tk kuch nhi kaha hai}

He: naina

Naina: wo mein tumse

Precap: sach ka samna

Ya kh skte hai "naina ka sach"

"Naina kaun hai"

Ya kuch aur chahta hai aap sab

part 34

Edited by maaneetpriyanka - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update i like the Hospital one alott :) so con soon waiting for next one !
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Posted: 13 years ago
Superbbb update...

Do continue soon...

Thanks 4r pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

naina ka sach ... want it out now ... n maan kahan hain ...
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Posted: 13 years ago


Interesting update

next update soon

eager to know about Naina truth and Maan

thanx for pm
Edited by tushti-kiran - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update, want to know where is maan. poor geet and maan at this time.plsss unhe jaldi se mila do.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amaaazing;D
cont soon;D
thanks for the pm;D
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing upd dear
thanx for d pm
do cont soon
Love
Deepa
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesooome.
Superb.
Fab.
Wonderful.
Loved d upd.
Thanx for d pm.
Take care.

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