MYFIRSTOS/ff Abhiya repentence part 5 updated pg33 - Page 23

Just read ur OS.fantabulous,superb...plz pm me whn u updte nxt.

Hey jazz
awesome update..
Pia ka ghussa...baap re baap..
Abhiya ne to baato baato mein jeh ki band baja dali..lol
abhiya romance was super hawt..
Eagerly waiting for the wedding
thanks for the pm
continue soon
tc

AbhIya romance was superb Jazz...👏

Originally posted by: Neytiri

Just read ur OS.fantabulous,superb...plz pm me whn u updte nxt.

Awesome!! love ur style of writing!

Originally posted by: missglam

Hey jazz
awesome update..
Pia ka ghussa...baap re baap..
Abhiya ne to baato baato mein jeh ki band baja dali..lol
abhiya romance was super hawt..
Eagerly waiting for the wedding
thanks for the pm
continue soon
tc

😃pia kaa gussa jayez hai

Originally posted by: Eowyn

AbhIya romance was superb Jazz...👏

😛thanks a lot

awesome update dear
thnx for the pm

ahem ahem ..

Os part 5

Life's warmth

Pia was feeling good in abhay's arms…loving it and rejoicing every part of it….to pia it felt as if God was with her in form of him…her angel ,her life,her dream which was fulfilled by now…

Abhay felt peace and rest with pia…he felt not alone and happy..full of life, he softly spoke to pia gazing her with loving eyes…

Abhay-Pia I love u …a lot and now no one can come between us…no one…

Pia-I don't want anyone more…no one only u and me and we now to live together forever…

Abhay-Yes pia…now no one more not even a leaf can separate us…what harm had to be done, done by now…

Pia-(a drop of tear again rolls her eyes)-Abhay…

And then both hug each other…streetlights blow off and moonlight shivers them both…passionate and close their bodies are…only…the child standing at the stall along with the oldman gazes them…

Child-What do think chacha(uncle)where will their story end…

Uncle-I don't think they will unite so soon…its just the start…again many difficulties will follow them…they will end but not their love…it will give birth to new one…

Child-What…??

Uncle-All have a reason,a purpose…all have a duty to be fulfilled…their love is so strong that it will overcome and vanish the difficulties before it leaves them….but they will now not leave each other…destiny will not let this happen…their love will bring new LOVE..which to them may seem danger but to all will be a bone…a life…an equally great like both of their bond….

DOBRIYALS

Scene-All the family is disturbed due to loss of pia…no one knows where is she missing since yesterday…all are worrying

Misha-Atleast she should have told me??and jeh is also not picking up the phone…

Arnab-Don't worry I have informed police …they will find her…

Panchi-Tomorrow is my engagement and no signs of pia…who will dress me up…?

Madhu-U are worrying about dressing u up ?or about pia??

Misha-Mom ,What are u expecting of panchi??She only knows to cry,eat and sleep…only this talent she has…See marriage is hers and all got so worried ,pia got so worried that she even ran out off the house …due to so much work…it had been good if she had taken me with her…atleast i would have been saved from this boring drama…

Panchi-Misha(at this she throws a pillow on her)-I really care about pia,more than u do u get it…

Misha-Ya and I am seeing it..how do u care about her…since yesterday u have eaten 4 cheese pizza's,8 burgers,9apples,7weeding cakes,all alone waiting for pia's arrival…this is not less..list is long…are u dieting or fatting ….What will happen about Danish…I am imagining…

Panchi-How dare u …misha …speak…too much…(and both girls start fighting…and get engaged in conversation…at this arnab intervienes and stops them…

Arnab-(With his hands moving in between of them)Will u stop both !Here pia is missing and u both are competing as who is right-wrong…

Madhu-Both are mad and make us too…atlest pia was not like them…but where is she now…oh God…

Arnab(he is happy that madhu concerns about pia,but in all a lot worried for pia,so dials abhay's number to contact him…maybe he knows where pia is)

Just the other ring of abhay's mobile sounds near to home…as if abhay was ther only…

Arnab gets shocked…but the doorbell interrupts him…

Arnab hurridly rushes with Madhu to open it while panchi and misha follow them…

The door opens….All get surprised and shocked….

Chalo ab thore se sasural ke darshan kar liye jayein..mayke wapas aate hain…

RAICHANDS

Chand(with red wine in his hand…a handsome one foot out posewith same harshy crushy voice)-Haseena,Abhay has done wrong with his clan…he has cheated us all and he can't be spared now….

Haseena-(walking and then stops near chand)But what can we do…all the vampires are blindly following him…like if we are no one now…and marriage …HUMAN…how could abhay do this with us, Till loving was ok…but where would now this marriage lead…I can smell a big danger to our survival…

Chand-I told u…that this girl will lead us to danger..first Maithali..now Pia…vampires survive on blood…and how will abhay stop himself if Pia gets hurt or if she gets dangered…till now he is mad..disobeying us will PAY LARGE…

Haseena-If we want a one way out…then only we have one solution or else all the vampires will turn against us…and if it happens it will turn fast…

Chand-What??

Haseena-We can't kill pia…she is very pure …she has helped us in hiding our biggest secret,moreover she brought abhay back…to us, if she would be lost than abhay too…but if she needs abhay and abhay needs her…(with pause in her voice)SHE NEEDS TO TURN….TURN INTO A VAMPIRE…LIKE ABHAY!

Chand-Are u in your senses Haseena!Or now u too with….

At this Haseena looks assuringly to chand and says-I loved u…so decided to change myself for u…but at that time our LOVE was not so strong as is case of abhay and pia…but I know it was true than too and now too…we don't possess feelings but we do possess memories,by which we regain ourself together forever..

(ahm ahm…sorry continue reading)

Chand holds hands of haseena makes her sit on sofa and kisses one of her hand and says…That is why I love u….and both look into each other..though sitting apart…but faces like two lost lovers in lost world…as if the two lifeless bodies are again in action to grasp each other…

bas aur nahin explain hoga😆…ab chalet hain mayke…

DOBRIYALS

The door gets opened…and and all are shocked to see pia unconscious in abhay's arms…

Arnab-Pia..pia…abhay ..what has happened to her…

Abhay moves inside in jhabaz style and says-Nothing she saw a wolf in jungle,got scared and fainted…

I just saved her and brought her here…

Misha(thinking…abhay still loves pia and cares for a lot…where the hell is jeh…I thought pia was with him…but …misha stops thinking more and says to herself…pia is back u should be happy misha…al confusions will be solved by her now)

Arnab-But since yesterday pia has been out and u got her now…from where?

Abhay(giving serious expressions)I think !first I should put pia to her right place my hands…

Arnab-Oh yes ,why not…misha lead abhay to pia's room..

Pia(hears abhay's words for her and with her one hand on his back pinches him so hard that

abhay jerks out- what??

Misha-What??

Abhay-nothing…misha (to pia in his mind…what now

Pia(both contacting with telepathy smiles)-What did u say?I make ure hands pain!first of all start practicing lifts…so boring,one can't even dive into it

second of all my size is now zero…all because of u…so that u can lift me and not have trouble in that and I can relax in ure arms like always…no need to walk,u are my cycle and I ridder…u are ocean and I fish…

Abhay-stop now…ure bodyguard torchure is now over,ure bed has arrived…now I will try to live with u …and make u give me ME back…I will show how selfish I can be for u…

Pia(smiles)Let's see how u take my attention…and make my parents agree on marry proposal…(in mind to abhay)

Scene-Abhay places pia on bed and softly removes the curls off her face to look at her face fully …can't see anything disturbing the view…as for him he believes each day its only the last day he sees pia while pia believes each day it's the first time he is seeing him ….

Misha is seeing all this from far distance…how abhay is behaving with pia…just like before the leap…full to concerned and thinking where is jeh…all questions confusing her,she thinks to leave and talk with birdie and bring her too along with her to pia.

Abhay sensing misha left cups pia's face in his hands ,kisses the eyes of pia,and slowly brushes his face with her and says-Open ure eyes pia…misha has left…

Pia(blushing,feeling warm fully …opens her eyes and smiles at abhayand after a moment says)-Abhay…I acted well na!

Abhay-(smiling..holds pia's face in both hands and says)-Pia…u …

Then he hears some footsteps…and both gets alarmed..abhay slowly shuts pia's eyes with his hands carecassing her and tries to leave but pia holds abhay's hands and says

Pia-Don't go abhay,don't leave me alone…

Abhy to pia-I am not leaving u…I will never but for now ure family doesn't needs to know anything I'll till that time prepare for marriage proposal…

Pia smiles hearing wedding and sleeps dreaming it….

Abhay also smiles seeing pia and leaves..

Misha and panchi arrive the place seeing pia sleeping

Misha-we will have to wait for tomorrow to know answers..

Panchi-I think the same …till then let's leave…let her sleep and rest

Both leave

Pia then opens her eyes slowly uncovers the blanket and slowly tiptoes to the balcony…sees the dark blue sky the night…locates the star of her mom and wishes her gd night….just then a shooting star approaches her view…she closes her eyes gently and wishes that Abhay now lives happily forever…

While same star is responded by abhay wishing that pia lives happily forever

Both wish for each other but no one of them is selfish to wish for themselves,so pure,calm their love is without any show of belongings, without any greed…only want to live life in one another…not shallow but deeper…for one another…

Where abhay can sacrifice life for pia there pia can do the same …

Scene-Abhay standing at the window wishing for pia now opens his eyes ,takes out his wallet and smiles at the photograph…PIA has replaced the previous photograph of maithali…

He keeps it near the moonlight and slowly brushes it as if imagining pia in it and says-hope u remain with me…close to me…I can't now….i can't even survive a single second seeing u …it makes my body pain…my dead soul shiver at the thought of loosing u all over again…all that has happened ….(he remembers the night when pia was leaving him and tears flow his eyes…loosing pia again makes him go mad…he again starts feeling insecured as if some third party is watching him…he rushes to see pia again…)

Pia on the other hand places his mobile containing photo of abhay close to him and slowly sleeps dreaming about tomorrow…what abhay meant…

Abhay slowly peeps in the room seeing pia sound sleep slowly goes close to her,sits on her side on her bed… gazes her ,than sees mobile in hands of pia and slowly tries to take it out of pia's hands and place it on the table …but pia is holding it very tightly…this makes abhay suspicious and he slowly takes the mobile out of pia's hands…pia turn towards a little left while abhay sees the picture of the mobile…he is happy to see his photograph…

Pia turns back to her normal position(straight )

Abhay sees a hairlock of pia disturbing her ,lying on her lips…He slowly places his left hand thumb on pia's lips and slowly drives the thread of hair away back to its original position behind earlobes all his while making pia crazy …and smile as if pia was imagining all this in dream…a beautiful one…

Abhay interconnects his mind to what pia was dreaming…and smiles at the thought of pia…he than thinks if he will make this happen in real than it would be big surprise for his life and him too..so he thinks THAT NOW HIS MISSION WOULD BE TO BRING ALL POSSIBLE DREAMS OF PIA COME TRUE...

While leaving ,abhay decides to feel her for last time this night and so he gets close to her rosy lips and gets slowly and slowly hold of them.

…passionately going deeper…more than was required as he was not able to control himself now…Pia slowly opens her eyes seeing all what was happening closes them to feel abhay's love,his craziness for her and she too gives abhay the same bold touch of lips ,sparks flying between both…abhay loving pia more and more ,now holding her head neck close to him…he is completely on her….he slowly rotates with her on bed and now she is on him…pia is fully unaware of anything nor abhay both are playing with fire…which can be dangerous …both don't want to know…abhay is slowly and slowly playing with pia in the bed ,with his hands carecassing her body and pia's hands on abhay's warm chest feeling the heat …. Every moment is fast very difficult to even describe…than at once abhay undergoes a drastic change as if someone stopped him…with a jerk abhay pulls himself back and pushes pia on the other side of bed …while pia breathes heavily…

Abhay-Sorry !pia…sorry (he quickly gets up out of bed and rushes out of the room through the window)

While pia is fully shocked,amused,as what all happened….and is sitting on her bed..but than she really faints…😆

Chalo dono ne ek dusre ko khalaas kar diya

Par shayad aap logon ko bindaas kiya ho

Aaj ke liye itna hii shopping kal ke programme mein hai…tomorrow also I will update if u wan't it…

Abhi to trailer hai Honeymoon kaa koi bharosa nahin…

Bas aage mujhse aur hota nahin…jeh alina shayad next chappy mein dhora saa part play karein…

Main janti hoon its not so nice…bad..i know…sorry for that😭..

With regards

jazz