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-Mayu- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sangi1588

exactly.. well.. happy wala sad OS.. its hard to explain you see..😉 its like you had put it in so many happy memories of maan- geet in a sad story..😆 and haan will do that..😆


I guess I should stop spamming now😆

Okay I get the gist of Happy wala Sad:)

Do that ASAP!😉


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Posted: 13 years ago
Okies did read everything...it is awesome..
loved the FF and the way it is moving..
way 2 go sangs
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Posted: 13 years ago
This is dedicated to my sweet behna Mayu 🤗She wanted a simple wala update 😆..This ones for you jaan..Aani tu ajun mala tujya Ganesh chaturthi chi photos patavali nahi.. chal chalel, nantar pathav . Kasa vatla update sang mala...😳

Part 14

Weeks passed by after that whole realization of love sinking upon Maan, that was the last day , all were together.

Maan singh khurana had not met any of his friends. He became so engrossed in his duties, work.
He was now the MD of khurana constructions in real sense. He became a workaholic. He got the news that his company is in huge debts and he needs to repay it as soon as possible.
Then came the news of his Dad getting a heart stroke, and being admitted in the hospital. He went to US for few days with Dadi. But came back leaving Dadi there, to take care of KC.

That was one stressful period in the life of Maan Singh Khurana. A boy who took things as it comes, happy go lucky kind of a guy, never took work seriously, music his passion,
he left all those things behind.
He was now a MAN. He understood the responsibilties he needs to take as a son, as a grandson, and as a MD of the company. Music ..he doesnt remembers when was the last time he sang.
He was now a serious person, who just thinks about his work. Friends, well, Adi is with him in office, now and then talks to him , only regarding work. Tej, he himself is a workaholic. So it doesnt matter
if they talk or not. Geet was herself busy with work, but that didnt mean she didnt meet Pinky and from her she got the news abt Maan. Adi was the only person, who knew about Maan's wherabouts
and work related stuff. In short, All were busy with their lives.

Adi, Noida file.. Maan said as he loosened his tie and turned a page from the file in his hand.

Here you go , Maan. Adi said handing the file to him. Adi was a bit worried to see his friend like that. Totally engrossed in his work and totally cutting off the social circuit for sometime now.

Maan, We need to talk. Adi sat down on a chair placed right in front of Maan. Maan did not look up, but he just nodded. This was not the first time, Adi tried talking to Maan about this.
Maan.. he snatched the file form his hand. Maan raised an eyebrow and threw his hand in air.

What is the matter with you, give the file. I need to finish this today. Snatching the file from Adi.

Fine, then.. I am leaving. Adi stood up and left the room, slamming the door. Maan paid no heed to it.

Adi was visibly upset. More than being upset, he was genuinely worried, he knew that the company was in huge debts and his dad's condition. But he didn't tell anyone. He knew Maan would not like it. So, Adi just gave him the support by doing his work efficiently.

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Geet, You here? Adi was surprised to see Geet in office.

Yes, I came to meet Maan. Its been ages I met him or you guys for that matter. How are you? Where is he? Geet asked casusally searching for Maan.

Well, I am good. just loads of work .. By the way, He is in there, but i would like to warn you, he is not in good mood. Adi said sadly.
Geet placed a hand on his shoulder, and nodded with a slight smile.

Knock..Knock..Geet knocked the door.

Come in.. was the answer from Maan.

Hey Maan.. Geet said as soon as she entered.

Maan was shocked to see her. Geet.. you..here..Maan kept his file down and came towards the door.

Well, I thought you dnt meet us these days, I might just drop by to say a hello.. She just made her way to the chair and sat down.
Maan followed her. Its good you came here.. Maan too sat down.

There was an awkward silence in the room. All of a sudden, Geet got up and slammed the desk hard, whats the matter Maan. Why are you behaving like this ?
Maan was taken aback. He didnt know what to say or do.. Geet, nothing is wrong..

Oh really, I called you so many times, you dnt have the courtesy to call me back. Why are you so aloof from us these days? I dnt want to hear a word from you, just get up and come with me.

Geet, I have work to do.

Do you think I dnt have work. She raised her eyebrow. Just follow.. Geet's eyes piercing his, He stood up and followed her.

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They reached a nearby park. Geet got down the car followed by Maan.

She sat down on a bench below the tree. Now tell, she folded her legs.

What Geet? Maan was acting casual.

I know, Maan, something is troubling you. I dnt know what? But i do want to know.

Nothing Geet, I am fine. You need not worry. Maan turned around facing his back to her.

Maan, just look at me.. Geet got up.

But Maan did not turn. Maan, she pulled his hand from behind, and made him turn.

Maan.. She looked into his eyes. Geet..he gave in, Khurana Construction is in big debts. I need more finance to save it. I need more business. I have to work for it. My dad had a severe stroke.
He is in hospital. Dadi is there with him. I need to concentrate on my work. He just sat down covering his face.

Oh Maan, I am so sorry. Why didnt you tell me or any of us. We could help you. She sat down besides him, placing a hand on his shoulder.

Thats why, he snapped back. taking Geet by surprise. I dnt want anyone's help. Geet, I can make it happen. Maan got up and took few steps.

I know, you can, But now .. I mean I can talk to Dad and give you some business. She followed him.

Geet, NO.. he said it firmly. Geet looked down. He came towards her, held her by the shoulder, Geet, I know this is hard, but I will do my best.
I have an important presentaion coming up, If KC does well, then the contract will be ours. And the deal will save KC.Its a big contract. Hope everything goes on fine.
Maan massaged his temples.
Well, Adi knows about this.. as he works for me.

Ok.. Of course you will get the contract . I have total faith in you and your company. Geet nodded.

Thanks so much, Can we go now. He showed the keys to her. I have work to do. He turned around and started walking.

Geet stood there without moving. He turned around to look for her. Geet, he waved at her..

She closed her eyes and remebered the song her Dad used to sing to her, when she felt low and need for some confidence and strength.

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bQBv0CcUZr4[/YOUTUBE]


Dhundhla jaayein jo manzilein
Ek pal ko tu nazar jhuka
Jhuk jaye sar jahan wahi
Milta hain rab ka rasta..

She opened her eyes, went near Maan, took his hands , placed her hand on his..

Teri kismat tu badal de
Rakh himmat bus chal de
Tera saathi, mere kadmon ke hain nishan

Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda
Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda

Maan shook his head, by the innocence of Geet. And her gestures towards him. She went around him, and swirled around. Maan stood there , just enjoying the sight of Geet. He smiled at her. He was about to leave, when Geet held his hand and turned him around. Looking straight into his eyes..

Khud pey daal tu nazar
Halaton se haar kar
Kahan chala re
Haath ki lakeer ko
Modhta marodhta hai hosla re

Maan sat down on the bench, covered his face with hands.. She came around from behind, she slid her hands from behind, and just looked at him..and smiled. He caught her hand and smiled back,
She then bent down , collected some flowers and leaves.. and just showered on him..

To khud tere khawabon key rang mein
Tu apne jahan ko bhi rang de ,
Went in the front, facing him, she bent down on her knees to come to the level of Maan, as he was seated on the becnch. She just placed her hands on his..

Ke chalti hoon main tere sang mein
Ho shaam bhi toh kya
Jab hoga andhera
Tab payega dar mera
Uss dar pe phir hogi teri subah
Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda
Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda

Maan got up and made her to get up. He just looked at her with a smile. She looked at him with a smile. Their eyes doing the talking..She broke the eyelock, and Maan took his hands down.

He passed her and took few steps , but Geet held his hand from behind. She turned, he turned. With a determined face, she continued..

Mit jaate hain
Sabke nishaan
Bas ek woh mit-ta nahi hain
Maan le jo har mushkil ko
Marzi meri
Ho humsafar na tera jab koi
Tu ho jahan, rahoonga main wahi
tujhse kabhi na ek pal bhi main juda
Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda
Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda..

Maan was totally caught off gaurd. He didnt know what to do or say.

Geet.. He went towards her.

Maan, If you need a friend , I am always there for you. Whenever you want and wherever you want me.. I will be by your side. Forever. So dnt think you are alone. she tilted her face a little, and smiled at him.

Geet.. Thanks for being there. But I still maintain, that I dnt want any help. He said looking at her.

Yes. I understand. But you consider me your friend right? Cause after all thats happened between us, I still want to be your friend. Only friend...She said tucking her strand of hair behind her ear.

Oh yeah.. I am your friend. Only friend. I was an idiot until now. He gave out a small laugh. I will always be your friend, Geet.

Then, why dnt you take any help.. Geet looked at him pleadingly.

Geet..No more discussion. He ran a hand through his hair..

Ok..fine.. Geet said sadly. She was about to leave, but He held her hand. She stopped and turned around.

Can I get a hug? he said raising both his arms.

And she hugged him tight. He reciprocated with a smile. All the stress and tension he had, just vanished.

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Hope you all like it. Sorry for updating so late..😳
Dnt forget to comment..😆


Previous update: part 13

Next update: Part 15

Edited by -Sangs- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update.

Good to see Geet showing support to Maan. It shows the purity of her heart. She is there for as a friend despite all the misgivings in their equation so far.

And Adi too...a silent support is as good as a vocal one. He is doing his work efficiently that means in one area Maan can get some reprise.
Edited by jazzerette - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
very soothing update.
maan n geet r very understanding friends. geet's one hug took away all of maan's pain.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww...poor Maan under so much stress, I guess there are times in ppl's lives which forces them to grow up and his dad's stroke was the trigger.
I am confused by Geet's actions, so she is really trying to be Maan's friend but is that it?

Nice update, just very sweet
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice part dear...
Loved it...

Maan is a changed man now...

Updt soon.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Life's realities!!! I ve encountered a few in the last 2 weeks... Just makes u think... Makes you more focused on the priorities in ur life... Poor Maan.. to suddenly come face to face with these no wonder they changed him. But friends... true friends like always keep u grounded and support u in ur decisions but if tht decision or the path u r taking is a wrong one... these friends than advise and guide u in the right direction...

I am so glad and proud to say I ve friends tht are true just the way they are suppose to be... including u my lovey...

Beautiful update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Honeybuns😳
Thanks so much for Dedicating this beautiful update to me! I am seriously touched! Thankyou my Badi Behna Sangs!🤗
A dedication to you- If u have a sister, whom u like a lot...who made u cry sometimes. .. Pulled your hair... fought with u... Stood up for u...Drove u crazy... Watched u succeed... Saw u fall... Picked u back up... scolded u ... Made u strong...& U can't do anything without her...This is for you Honeybuns!😊
I don't know what to say but I am surely overwhelmed! But as I have to give my Vishesh Tippani on your Update; here I am!😃
For a change this was a simple update! You made Maan the Man! This is the reality; he is under immense pressure; he is emotionally and physically down. How I wish Dadi was there with him; and I wanted Geet! And Bam she gets to him!
I loved the fact that; you didn't drag their meeting; when he needed her she was their. Isn't it only Sherni who can make him speak his heart out! That so ironical; though she is only his friend; he actually spoke what he even didn't say to Adi!
I loved the way she cheered him up; by singing the song; she knows he loves music! I hope he falls in love with her very soon!❤️
I wouldn't have mind an romantic update dedicated to me😉
Lovely update!😳
Do continue soon otherwise your Behna comes running with a Danda in her hand!😆
Love
Mayuuu
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome, beautiful part
loved it
continue soon

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