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Posted: 13 years ago
Darling...such a wonderful udpate.
Loved it v much...each n every part of it.

his oozing love for Geet...
his brotherly love for Annie...and how he wants reassurance that she is all right...
Annie being mature and telling him that geet takes care of everyone n how someone needs to take care of her...and that is maan...Maan is her pillar and her strength and she is the foundation of the whole family.

But the pillar needs to be strong for the foundation...

The parents shedding happy tears listening n watching the children talk...
how geet is able to finally sleep peacefully...how maan is still worried and wants to be awakened...
how chachi😡 is being a pain in the ass by juss her mere presence...

The plans...the big plans for the big day...
love it

aayi hai aayi hai kushi

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0t2tIXQ9eRM=related_embedded[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by Water. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome parts...

loved it...from maan telling everything to his two dada...to washing away the pain...to the new morning in their life...

sorry for the late comment...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
great part...i was worried for preeto's reaction but i'm surprised
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Posted: 13 years ago
First of all sorry for the late comment but i m busy with my studies kafi pending kaam hai usse bhi toh pura karna tha na😳
Okay now the update the best thing was when maan said k there is no need for u to thank me did i thank u for what u did for annie 👏👏👏 this really shows the level of maneet's relationship
okay so engagement preparations have started ...Yipee!!!!!
Chayiji sachmuch mein khush hai na 😕 i still don't trust her
another thing that i loved was maan brotherly concern for annie
love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
Good morning Ritzy. It is Wednesday. Update time.
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Posted: 13 years ago
yeh today we might get an update wow i m jumping in excitement
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Posted: 13 years ago

Thank you friends for your lovely comments.

Lot of you commented on Chachi's reaction. If you read the update where Naintara's truth comes out, you will see that she was mad at her own daughter….she slapped her and was shocked at her behavior. She is a woman with very sharp tongue but not bad hearted. I know of lot of such women in relations and neighborhood…they love to gossip and can be mean with their words….but in reality they mean no harm.

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Warning – 16+

Chapter 74 – Pyaar ke Abhushan (jewelry)

Saturday 4th December Evening

Geet returned back from parlor to a decorated KM. Whole mansion looked ethereal with white lights twinkling out and about. Satin white curtains twined with red chiffon ones flew in the light breeze.

Pari, Annie and Pinky took her to the room downstairs as she was still not allowed to walk up the steps. Geet smiled and said hesitantly. "Pari…woh"

Pari was laying out the jewelry. Geet was dressed beautifully in a deep red lehnga with green and golden border. Her blouse came up to her navel and skirt started just below her belly button. Her blouse was backless but had lot of strings holding the blouse together. Blouse had a deep heart shaped neckline and the point was just placed above her cleavage. Her dupatta was pinned on her one shoulder and covered her back slightly before wrapping on to her other arm. Her makeup was light giving a shade of pink to her cheeks. She looked beautiful and light makeup was enhancing her natural beauty.

Pari asked – "Kya hua Geet…dekho maine saari jewelry rakh di hai bas baaki to sab taiyaar hai"

Geet - "Woh…upar mere room se….meri belly chain aur ruby set laado…main wahi pehnoongi"

Pari frowned – "Woh to thik hai lekin yeh jewelry zayda bhaari hai aur zayda appropriate lagegi"

Geet shied – "Thik hai…lekin mujhe wahi belly chain aur maang tika pehna hai"

Pari saw her blushing –"Acha…thik hai main la deti hoon…by the way asisa kya khaas hai…oh yaad aaya …maang tika jiju ne jo diya tha but belly chain?"

Geet blushed hard – "woh…who bhi Maan ne hi di thi"

Annie whistled – "acha….woh bhi Karwachauth ke din…kya baat hai…kya baat hai"

Geet placed her hands in her palms – "Please bas karo tum dono"

Pari just laughed and removed her hands – "Chat par…Pinky tum karwachauth bana rahi thi ya phir…"

Pinky put another chip in her mouth – "Are pucho mat Pari….in dono ki prem kahani ke liye kya kya papad bele hain humne….humara honeymoon tak nahin choda apne is pyar mein"

Geet was mortified – "Pinky!!!...Pari!!! Bas bahut ho gaya…ab tum jaa rahi ho ya main khud lekar aaoon"

Pari chuckled – "Haan haaan….jaa rahi hoon"

Pari went out whereas Geet moved to the window and looked thru the curtains. She looked at the poolside and sighed at the beautiful garden in front of her. There was a big stage at one end decorated with white and red carnations. Lights twinkled in trees and gold and silver streamers fluttered everywhere.

Annie kept a hand on her shoulder – "Bahut sundar lag raha hai…hai na"

Geet nodded fidgeting with her rings.

Annie took her hand – "Nervous mat ho Bhabhi…aaj aap officially meri bhabhi ban jaaogo…aur waise bhi only family and close friends are invited…hai na"

Geet smiled as Pari entered with jewelry.

Pari – "Annie, Beeji aa gayi hain aur tumhein bula rahi hain…..Pinky Adi is also here"

Annie and Pinky went out. Pari came close – "Yeh lo Geet…jaldi tayiaar ho jao…main bahar jaa rahi hoon but control mein"

Saying this she winked and left.

Geet was confused with her last remark. "Control mein….what does that mean."

Suddenly she heard window door getting closed. She turned to see Maan standing there in a black suit. He looked really handsome and her heart thudded loudly as he pulled the curtains and closed the distance.

He cupped her face drinking the her beauty with his eyes. Geet's trance was broken as she heard some hustle bustle outside.

She panicked – "Maan, aap yahan kya kar rahe ho…kisi ne dekh liya to"

Maan put his finger on her lips – "Chup…bilkul chup…aaj apni Mishti ko main apne haathon se taiyaar karoonga…aur use sabse pehle dekhne ka bhi haq mera hai"

Saying this he held her hands lightly and moved her near the mirror. He picked up the earring and stood beside her right side. He bent down pulling her right earlobe inside his mouth sucking it. Geet's breath hitched and a moan escaped her mouth – "Maan". Maan left the earlobe out and kissed it licking it slightly with his tongue. His breath fanned her temple as he placed the earring. Then he repeated the same with her left ear ring.

Next he lifted the necklace. He kissed her open mouth at the middle of hollow of her neck. He kept on kissing her as he turned her around slightly till he was kissing back of her nape. He bit her there slightly and then licked his bight mark. Geet dug her nails inside her palm as desire cruised thru her entire body. He then placed the necklace and joined the clasp finally relieving her of sweet torture. He picked up the maang tika and kissed her forehead before placing it there.

He made her sit down and picked up her bangles. He took each of her fingers and placed it inside his mouth sucking on them. Geet shuddered with pleasure as he than progressed to kiss her wrist and then her arm. He took out a box from his pocket having two pairs of diamond bangles.

Geet gasped – "Maan…they are beautiful"

Maan placed a finger on her lips – "Chup…bilkul…chup…kaha na ek shabd nahin…maine nahin pucha tumse….tum to jo bhi pehnogi who sundar hi lagega…isliye yeh meri pasand ke hain….samjhi tum"

Saying this he gently put one diamond bangle followed with glass bangles and then another diamond bangle. He repeated this with her other hand.

He made her stand and kneeled down in front of her. He picked up the belly chain and held her by her hips. Geet hissed through her ragged breath – "Maan please"

Maan did not give any heed to her whimpers as he placed wet kisses around her waist finally clasping the belly chain.

Geet went week in her knees and almost collapsed in his arms as he made her sit on the bed. He then picked up her payal. He placed her foot on his knee. He bent down and kissed her ankle as her hands massaged her calf under the skirt. He placed the payal on both her legs and stood up. Geet was leaning back on bed with her eyes closed as sensation after sensation ran thru her body.

Maan could not control anymore as he gazed at her flushed face. Her lips looked lush and were parted slightly. He crashed down to her and kissed her passionately. His one hand was on her waist and other in her hair. He kissed her almost carnally.

Geet gave into her urges completely. She was wet between her legs and somehow wanted more of him. She moved her hands underneath his jacket, feeling his taught back muscles as she dug into his back thru the shirt.

Maan gave out an animalistic sound as he freed her lips to rain kisses down her neck. Due to lying down, her blouse had lifted a little bit and her cleavage was visible along with upper part of her brea***. He moved to his cleavage giving her wet kisses. Geet shifted unconsciously giving him maximum access.

Maan bit at top of her curve giving her a mark. She screamed – "Maan". But Maan was no where near control. He licked the bite he had given her and pushed her closer to him by cupping her bottom and thrusting her forward. He was hard down below and grinded himself on her feminity making her loose all sanity. Even through all those heavy clothes, they could feel the heat and each other's arousal. They pressed into each other feeling their weight as Maan captured her lips once again. Their tongues entwined as did their legs.

They both were jolted back to reality with a loud knock. Maan got up immediately straightening his suit. Geet also got up brushing her hair and straightening her dupatta.

Maan groaned inwardly. Last thing he wanted was to make Geet feel awkward on their special day. He tried to make things lighten up as he ruffled his hand into his hair – "Well I just wanted to tell you that you look beautiful but I guess words were never our forte so actions spoke….though a little louder than I guess we intended…waise I just wonder engagement ki zaroorat hi kya hai…yeh log shaadi kyon nahi kar dete humari"

Geet blushed hearing those words. She knew exactly what her mad fianc was trying to do. She smiled and hit his chest – "Shut up and I am ok"

There was another knock and Maan quickly pecked her on cheek and jumped out of the window. Geet opened the door to find a flustered Pari. She entered hurriedly and closed the door – "You both owe me a big one…samjhi"

"Oh God what happened to your lips….wait….wait…don't bother to answer…I think I have a fair amount of idea….thank god at least you wore the jewelry…wais ek baat kahoon…Maan has brought a new glow to your face with whatever he did….."

Pari's remark brought more color to her red cheeks. Pari took her to mirror and quickly fixed her makeup – "Ab sharmana band kar…it is time to face him in front of everybody…"

Geet just nodded and whispered – "Thanks Pari"

Pari grinned.

Precap - Engagement

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update...
well that was a very romantic update...
maan apne hathon se apne mishty ko sajana...
their romance was hot...
waiting for their engagement to c how everyone is going to tease them...
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!! this was jus super awesome i cant tel u how good it is plzzz update the next fast eagerly waiting

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome and amazing update dear loved it precap is dreamy so finally they r getting engaged

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