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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -SupriyaluvsMN-

nyc update shivi!
Mayu cumin out  frm swimmin pool!☺️🤪
cant wait 4 next update !!!
cont soon!
luv ya!🤗



thanks supriya🤗

Originally posted by: crazymayurian

amazingly written dear

do pm me next time
luvedd the whole story till now

  thnx:)

Originally posted by: kirti123

omg mayank is soo rich 

amazing part the swimming pool part was lovely 😊


thnkx:)

Originally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever

gosh no mayu throughout except the last bit..n whats wrong with aman?why the hell is he somehow or other imposing himself upon nupur...wasnt the clearcut rejection enough 4 him??just hope dat this time he doesnt come in between mayur private convo..n bella?? a big No 4 dat plzzz😔
cant wait 4 the next part shivi...😳 waiting eagerly 4 nupur's complete confession...continue pretty soon puleaseee!!🤗




thanks pallabi😳

Originally posted by: love.mayurarti

Superb update
Loved nupur-dia convo.And the way u described the manor was awesome.
Can imagine mayank coming out from swimming pool n hope at least this time they talk.
Plz cont soon



thnkx:)



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Fantasia.

O.M.G!! Nupur checking out mayank .. Can't wait shivi!!



thanks fantu😳

Originally posted by: mayur_eternal

Again u left the story at an interesting point..
I feel that Aman is being too cheesy trying to woo Nupur..but I'm just waiting for the eventful party..Nupur stuck with the two me in her life..
cont soon..and dnt make Nupur dance with Aman in the party pls..only Mayank & Nupur togeda😳



lets see:)...thnx:)

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

very ncie update,

beautiufl.
awww...nupur chking out mayank.
blush.
n plz dnt make nupur dance aman in party.
i want my mayur togeether.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm.



thnx:)

Originally posted by: Prada_176

Read last 5 parts n I must say you are a wonderful writer shivani and my favourite too

I just love the flow of your writing keeping characters intact

Absolutely fantastic👏👏👏

Thanks for the PM and continue soon



thanks:))


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -Faria-

awww fabulous update shivi
loved it



thnkx:)

Originally posted by: valliyah

Now if you are done hanging us for almost 2 days long can we get an update or you need some more time to hang us TILL DEATH...!

P.S...Ur updates n Ur style is amazingly awesome(not to mention though 😊)...!



sorry dear...with my med coll starting...it's impossible for me to do regular updates ...i will make it bi or tri weekly:)
thanks:)

Originally posted by: aysha_mayur

Shiviii🤗

 
Ufff Mayank will always remain Mayank!!!!...😍
 
Awesome update...can't wait for their convo...I m sure she would confes now!!!😳
 
BTW...FF end karne ki sochiyo bhi mat😳...I want romance after confession!!!😳



shu meri jaan🤗

aapka hukum saalakhon par😳

Originally posted by: Payal-15

i loved Mayank's last line 😆

n Nupz is so gonna b in a fix now 😆
 
ab jaldi update haan can't wait more for the MAyur convo after almost 2 updates 😍



thanks pallu🤗


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Posted: 12 years ago
Today is the birthday of my dearest friend ayshu❤️. i want to dedicate this part to her and to my friend payal aka pallu...for her belated birthday...love you guys both🤗

Part 21

He came to the end and lazily he climbed up the ladder and came out of the water.

If some girls called him Adonis incarnate. They had been totally right. He looked every bit of a Greek god. His bare chest decked with pearls of water. He stood upright with his torso gleaming his well-built abs. Water dripped from his wet hair, moving on to his eyebrows and his eyes. I felt my cheeks turn a deeper shade as I unabashed stared him. He wiped the clinging drops from his eyes and lips.

"If you are done ogling at me can we speak or you need some more time to check me out?"

"I….I..just got lost."

" I can understand," he winked.

" I meant I lost my WAY up here."

"Absolutely. I have no doubt that you did not wish to see me taking my bath."

I rolled my eyes.

"Are you done so that I can say something?"

"Since when you needed my permission to speak?"

" Fine. You seem alright. Thank goodness for this. You had left so fast that day that I did not get the chance to explain. It's not what you think what it is. Aman…"

"What ya wanted? Should I have jumped off the cliff knowing you are marrying that ****wimp?"

"There is no need to cuss him. Let's keep this to both of us."

"Great. I once again forgot your delicate feelings for him. Sorry."

"What's wrong with you? Now what did I say?"

" You are always defending him!"

"I just said there is no need to cuss him. For god's sake why are you being so jealous? Can't we sort it out peacefully between us?"

"Aman has already stepped in between us! And jealous and that too me? Ha! Who cares? You already have my congratulations for choosing that wimp."

"It's useless talking to you. I am going down to the party. Aman is waiting for me. "I added as an afterthought.

"He is here! That dork is here in my house?In my party without my knowledge? How can it be?"

"Oh how can you forget to bring along your dearest friend here to show me dowm?"

"You actually think that??"

"I can't think of a reason you'd bring him here unless you wanted to rub it on my face."

I stared back at him. "So you actually care eh? Wish you would sometimes actually care about others sentiments."

" oh my , so the offender is finding it offending. How about not ruffling people's raw wounds by repeatedly stamping your foot over it?"

Tears began to loom large in my eyes. " You believe that I am engaged with Aman and purposely brought him here?"

His icy cold deep hazel eyes pored at me.

"Most definitely yes."

Blinking through my tears I smiled at him. "You really understand me the best. I have nothing more to say."

I moved forwards to go towards the exit of this huge indoor swimming pool room. He lurched forward blocking my way. I was now staring at his bare pearls decked shinning wet chest. Slowly I raised my head to look him in his eyes bend intently upon me.

"Nupur."

His soft whisper sent a shiver through my spine. The proximity of our nearness hit me.

On one side was the swimming pool and the wall on the other ; the windows where I had gone to marvel the beautiful sunset outside was behind my back. The way to the exit was blocked by Mayank.

Ignoring him I tried to move sideways. Following my steps he refused to budge out of my way. He inched closer. Suddenly I felt warm inside as I felt myself shivering seeing him so close.

"I apologize for my rudeness."

I looked back at him." It does not matter. Thanks for clearing it out that you don't care. I was a fool to get tensed for nothing."

"No..it's not what I…."

"Mayank please." I silently pleaded with my teary eyes to end this now.

He moved aside clearing my way. Hurriedly I stepped forward taking  care to maintain distance so as not to touch him in the way. The high heels of my Channels slipped on the wet surface near the pool and I hit the cold water as I fell inside the pool with a splash.

The water's coldness hit me as I got drenched. Having never learnt swimming yet the density of water failed to support my weight as I felt myself going under the liquid layers.  Water entered  my mouth, ears and nose as I struggled to keep afloat. I decided to jerk myself up with full force. My hands felt the air outside but once again I was pulled inside. Darkness started to engulf my brain as my breathing inside got difficult. I heard a loud splash nearby.

It was getting difficult to keep my eyes open . My body felt heavier. I desperately removed the jacket I was wearing on top of my dress. But it was of no use. I was drowning.

Something slimy crawled behind my bare back of my backless gown. The sliminess went up to my stomach and with much greater force it jerked me up. It was Mayank. I felt my nostrils get the desired air as he lifted me out of the water in his arms. I clasped his shoulders tightly with my arms and buried my head in his chest. The strength in me was fading. Once again darkness began to engulf me and soon it conquered me.

There was a faint light at the end of the pitch-back tunnel. The light glowed some more. It felt lighter. Air. I wanted air. Something watery had clogged my respiratory tract. A smooth current of warm air entered inside as the light glowed again. In small regular intervals more warm air entered. I felt my chest heaving. Something hard yet soft was moving on my lips. I felt my stomach tightly pressed from above. Slowly I opened my eyes. Mayank was blowing air inside my mouth. He was pressing my stomach as the excess water inside leaked from my mouth. The warm air stopped. His eyes stared in intently in mine questioning me. I closed them in response.

The giddy movement was back on my lips as he gently yet firmly placed his wet lips on mine and pumped air inside. Slowly I felt the clogging inside ease up and my nostrils taking in greedily the air outside.

The water was cold . So was the marble on which I was laid upon my bare back. But all I felt was unnatural warmth. I was trembling all over whenever his lips brushed mine. Breathing was again getting difficult as I tried to control my raging mind.

The giddiness on my lips stopped. He lifted his face.

"Are you okay now?"

Sacred of what my voice would let him know I nodded my head in a yes.

"How can you be so careless Nupur? When you don't know swimming can't you avoid going so near the deep side of the pool? What was to happen if I was not here? Why are you all the time so freaking reckless?"

Please don't scold me. I looked imploringly at him.

"I think you need medical aid. I am calling the doctor." He got up from the floor.

"NO. Wait. It's alright." I tried lifting my wet body off the floor.

"Now don't exert yourself!"

He laid his hand on my bare back sending trembles inside me as he helped me get on my feet.

" I am okay. That was sufficient when you…..you……the first aid you gave me." I looked down.

"Well….if you say so. I think you need to change. You are completely drenched."

Suddenly I realized how the wet cloth was hugging me tightly. The jacket I had wore to hide the backless gown was  floating in the water. I could sense his eyes on me. I flushed hard.

"Yes…I…I can't go to the party like this. I shall leave now."

"Let me escort you to your room."

I was hesitating to turn around and open the door with him behind me as he could easily have a good view of my bare back.

"Mayank I can manage now. You should go. What will all think you r roaming here in your towel."

"Haahaa…don't worry I roam in my house without that too sometimes. You just go inside and have some rest. Don't stress for the party. I will tell Dia. The party will go on quite late so you need not worry."

"Thanks."

"Anything for you."

I looked up into his eyes yet again. You don't really mean that , do you? I hated his well-measured words. How can you just stop at that?

"Nupur aren't you done yet. I have been waiting downstairs for so long. But you are here…..and wet……and with Mayank!!"

" Welcome to my house Aman."

" You are filthy rich to have a house like this. Nupur…err…why are you both guys wet and Mayank…..in this state?"


"Aman I…….."

"She lost her way and mistakenly entered my swimming pool area and slipped. She was drowning when I rescued her. You can imagine for yourself what I was doing there before to be in this state."

"Oh Nupur. Dear , are you alright…..you seem so shaken….how  I wish I was there to help..oh….

"It's okay."

"No I should have been the one to help you. How can I be so careless…I…"

"Aman. It's okay. I am fine. Relax."

"If you say then."

"Well I am going to change and then come down."

"Right. It's almost time for the party to start. Isn't it Mayank"

" Sure. Take care Nupur." He turned to go back.

"One minute Mayank. Just don't forget to grab a shirt on. It's not fair on the girls."

"Really?it affects them?" He turned back again to face us."Does my being half-naked bothers you Nupur?" He smirked.

I wish I had drowned in the pool. What the ……..?

" Just when are you guys planning to show up down?" a fuming Dia clad in a stunning turquoise gown came stomping down the corridor."

" How did Ian fell for you. He should see your face now."

"Mayank!  Everyone is waiting for you downstairs."

 And Nupur you are wet…..and Mayank you like this…..and Aman you too here….what happened?"

" Let me change first ….then I'll tell."

Sighing in relief I dashed inside my room.


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Posted: 12 years ago
ha ha ha...sry sis...
kya karu control nehi hota...
PM se pehle hi i did KABZA...😈🤣😈
love u lodsss sis...
u r my sweetheart sis...🤗🤗🤗

wow...
awesome update sis...👏👍🏼👏
i dont mind by nt geeting an confession in dis part...😛
as u hv given us such a wonderful situation to imagine...😉
By God...i loved it...😳😃😳
pehle to Mayank n uski Flirting kahin bhi kabhi bhi shuru ho jate hain...hayyy😳☺️😳
n i love him more wen he beacme Jealous...😉😳😉
n den Mayank rescuing Nupur...hayyy☺️❤️☺️
i was like...☺️☺️ ☺️ ☺️☺️
n phir a gaya kabab mein haddi Amaan...😡
uff...ek din ye ladka pitega mere Mayank se...😈😡😈
alwaysss wrong timing...😡😡
n den Mayank again flirted wid Nupur infront of dat idiot...ooo i loved dat..😆😲😉
phir Dia ki baat par wht Mayank said made me...🤣😆🤣
i loved it lodsss sis...😃😊😃
waiting eagerly for d next update...
love u lodsss sis...🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ahhh...mayank can never ever forget his Flirting in any Situation... 😆
Jealous sharma...but at the same time flirtatious too...😳😆
n at the Same time PASSIONATE too..
🤪
oppsss..aysi situation any he thi...nupsiee in pool n mayu Rescuing her...😍😆
Argghhh...AMAN...a he gaya..kabab mein haddi...😳
well shivi i was expecting a Confession Finallyyy...BUT seems u have some more Palns...for both Mayank n Nupur...😳
LUVD reading it...❤️
an awesome update...⭐️👏
just continue soon...😳
Luv ya...❤️
Annu🤗

Edited by Annu_Arti_Mayur - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thank You sooo much Shiviii...Love you🤗🤗

OK now coming to update...ohh lala lala...the way you described Mayank's body😍...uff I love Mayank here...
😍😍
 
and finally both of them are letting their frustation and jealousy out...😃😃
 
and after they came out of the pool...ahem ahem☺️
 
lkein beech mein phir aa gaya Aman...the haddi in kabab🥱🥱
 
but never mind...I want confession now very soon😳😳...Aur mat tadpa humein aur Myaur ko
 
Update jaldi ladki😳😳
Edited by aysha_mayur - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update..
I half expected Nupur to confess her love to Mayank..but u had other plans😆
and I luved Nupur's water adventure..good that it was Mayank with her then and not Aman..he's have most probably freaked out and just cried for help..😆
cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
lmao shivani, i was hoping for a confession, but since there isnt one, i have hope- UR GONNA WRITE MORE BEFORE A CONFESSION haha, and that always calls for a celebration. Loveddd this update to bits hun, ur style of writing, as u have heard before im sure, is very captivating. keep smiling and writing, 
love
kiran 
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Posted: 12 years ago
AHHH i LOVED it!...mayank and his flirting...of course thats one thing that wont change ...thank god aman came AFTER all the best parts...and i loved that mayank flirted with her in front of aman...cant wait for when mayank gives a real confession cuz nupur is then bound to tell her feelings