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Posted: 13 years ago
wow that was so awesome...great confrontation...now hopefully arnav bituwa will beat the living crap out of shyam babua...on the side note hope you feel better and please please please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Update is nearly done. Will be updating soon :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

And the next part is now up. Now for the next two days I am EXTREMELY busy cos I'm moving into uni but I am going to try my utmost best to give you a minimum of one update per day. Enjoy. Please comment and like below :)

Part Seven

Arnav began to water his plants at a furious pace. Jeejaji's...no Shyam's stumbling had convinced him enough that it was him that had raped Khushi. And his Di. Well he wouldn't even let him get close to her. Shyam could leave the house and go fall down a well then have a cow chucked on top of him for all he cared. Shyam would burn in hell. ASR hell. Arnav ran back up and past the still sleeping Khushi into Anjali's room.

"Shyam. Tum apna saaman ikhata karo aur yahan se dafa ho jao. Tumhari shakal bhi mein nahin dekhna chahata. Mere ghar mein se abhi nikal jao! GO! Aur yeh mera pehla kadam hai. Aage se dekhna ke mein kya kya karta hoon..." and with that warning Arnav left the room.

"Lekin saale sahab. Meri baat toh suniye. Maine kiya kya hain?" Shyam retorted trying to make himself seem as innocent as possible

" TUMNE KIYA KYA HAIN! IF I EVEN REPEAT WHAT YOU'VE DONE I'LL BE CURSED FOR ALL DAMNED ETERNITY! Seriously, meri, Khushi aur Di ki zindagi se chale jaon. Humesha ke liye. Get lost. Bohot ehsaan kar chukka hoon tum jaise gande aadmi par. Aur nahin karna jaata warna paap lagega."

"Lekin..." but Arnav had already left.

"DAMN! Iss ko kaise bata chal gaya. Shyam kuch karo warna tumhare paas kuch nahin hoga!"

He pulled his suitcase out, opened his cupboard and packed all his belongings. He was leaving nothing here. Nothing at all. Not even a razor. Then he walked over to Anjali's cupboard. Slowly he opened it and took out all the jewellery from the boxes and put it into one bag. Then he took out the large box. One of Arnav's mothers last belongings. The khandaani haar. He grabbed it and threw it into his bag. He then closed the boxes and placed them back where they were. He'd been insulted. Leaving without putting up a fight was not in his nature and it was not something that he intended to stop doing.

Arnav was attempting to console Anjali. She was crying, but crying tears of hate for the man she had once loved so dearly was a disgusting man. She couldn't believe she'd ever begun to trust such a low-life creature. He didn't belong with her. He didn't belong anybody. Arnav felt an anger rise within him. He'd hurt Khushi physically and his Di emotionally. Was this man to leave no stone unturned?

STOMP...THUD...STOMP...THUD

Arnav turned around to see Shyam dragging his bag behind him down the stairs. Jayprakash ran over to help.

"JAYPRAKASH! Stop. Mat madat karo isko. Yeh khud hi karlenga." Arnav shouted. Silently Jayprakash ran off back into Nani's room to tend to Laxmi as Nani and the rest of the family weren't in for another three months.

Without giving Anjali and Arnav a second glance Shyam began to show himself the door.

"RUKO!" Arnav screamed.

Shyam began to smile as he knew Anjali's tears would eventually lead Arnav to break down. He turned around and opened his mouth but before he could say anything...

"Jayprakash. Inki bags check kar lo. I don't trust the guy!" Arnav ordered.

Shyam began to tremble but there was nothing he could do except for pray that the jewellery wasn't found. Jayprakash began to earch through the large suitcase.

"Saheb. Yeh dekhiye" he said and handed over the large bag of the valuable jewellery to Arnav.

Arnav couldn't hold in his anger any longer and his hand rolled up into a fist and he threw the bag at Shyam. It hit Shyam right between the eyes.

"AAARGH!" Shyam screamed. Anjali remained quiet as she was now 120% convinced that Shyam was the wrong man for her.

He grabbed his face and fell to the ground.

"Le lon. Paise toh mere paas bohot hain. Sab rakh lo. Lekin yeh" he said holding up the khandaani haar, "yeh toh mein rakh loonga. Samajh lon aapne hum sab ko ek leaving present diya hain!"

Shyam was still lying on the ground clutching his bleeding face. Arnav went to the kitchen and got a broom. Using it he 'sweeped' Shyam out of the house.

"Dekho Di. Aaj toh maine bohot aache se ghar ki saaf sufayi ki." And he gave her a wink accompanied with a smile. After he shut the door.

"Yeh toh pehla hi kadam tha. Police ke paas toh tumko jana hi padenga Shyam. Lekin thoda mein bhi maza kar loon!" Arnav thought to himself.

It was getting late and Arnav decided to go off to sleep. It wasn't until he got to his room that he realised Khushi was in his bed. Her soulful face hadn't looked this peaceful in days. But it would only be smiling now for tomorrow he would begin his attempts to restore Khushi. To bring her back to normal. To return her to her once glorious self. He fell asleep on the floor resting his head on the bed right next to Khushi. Tomorrow was a new day.

Khushi opened her eyes. Oh no! She realised where she was and bolted up from her bed. The whole of last night had been spent in Arnav's room. She looked around wondering where he was though. Slowly she made her way to the door only to find it open inwards. Arnav stepped in and she fell. He grabbed her and pulled her into a heartfelt embrace for he could no longer let any more harm be caused to her. Closing his eyes he stroked her soft hair and let himself relax.

She felt him loosen up. She had grabbed his collar and when he had hugged her she let her once limp arms clutch his chest as if they never wanted to let go. Arnav then stretched his arms out with her in them and led her back to the bed.

"Yahan par bethon. Tumhare liye mein ek surprise lekar aaya hoon. Aur ek proposal bhi. Yeh dekho..." and he pulled an object out of a bag.

Khushi's eyes widened in surprise. What the hell was going on in this guys mind?

Edited by StarryEyedGyal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Yaay! Finaalyy the creep is out of the building!!
Haha arnav through the jewellery at his face goo arnav lol
aww bless him he soo cutee taking care of khushi!
Now i wonder what he got her
you are honestly one heck of a writer
im so glad you havent dragged this story
good luck in uni missy! Let me know how it goes!
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Posted: 13 years ago
sounds amazin...read ur ss in one go..luved it...pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally he is out...perfect. way how he was sweeped out of the house...but i wonder what he got her...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_girl234



Yaay! Finaalyy the creep is out of the building!!

Haha arnav through the jewellery at his face goo arnav lol

aww bless him he soo cutee taking care of khushi!

Now i wonder what he got her

you are honestly one heck of a writer

im so glad you havent dragged this story

good luck in uni missy! Let me know how it goes!



LOLOLOLOL! Trust me I'm dreaming up such stupid things for Arnav to be doing. Just fulfilling all my fantasies! :P Truat me I detest dragging stories. Its so much effort and it gets really boring to write. Well you'll just have to wait to see what he got her alie? ;) Awww thank you. But there are people on this forum who have such amazing writing styles its just scary!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tina_1234

sounds amazin...read ur ss in one go..luved it...pm me



Aww thank you so much honey! I've buddied you :)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: princess84

finally he is out...perfect. way how he was sweeped out of the house...but i wonder what he got her...<div></div>



LOL I don't even know how I came up with the whole broom idea but when I kept on replaying that image in my head I couldn't stop laughing! 🤣 Oh its a nice present trust me. Just wait a bit longer ;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Heya Vandini!!!
All the best for moving!!! Its quite a hectic time...takes its toll too, so make sure you take it easy as well. Don't tire yourself out!!!
Update was fab. I'm so glad Arnav swept Shyam out of the house. Gandagi ghar ke bahar hi honi chahiye!!!
I wonder what he's pulled out of the bag, and what his proposal is!!
Thanks for the PM darling!!
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